NEW ARSHI FF EYES - WINDOW OF SOUL

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HI FRIENDS...THIS IS ANKI... THIS FF IS BASED ON ACTUAL SERIAL STORY...


I AM STARTING MY STORY WHEN ARNAV ACCUSE KHUSHI FOR COMING TO HIS LIFE AND MAKE HIS DI'S LIFE MISREABLE...THEN HE DROVE OFF...WHEN HE COME BACK HE FOUND HIS ROOM EMPTY ...THERE IS NO WINDCHAIM , NO SALMANKHAN POSTER , NO STARS IN ROOF...HE BECOME WORRIED AND CALL KHUSHI BUT HE CAN'T FIND HER ...SO HE CHEAK HIS CUPBORD , ONE SIDE IS EMPTY...THEN HE FIND LETTER WITH MANGELSUTER AND HIS MAA'S BANGLES...HE GO NEAR TABLE AND OPEN THE LETTER WHICH TAKE HIS BREATH AWAY , SHE LEFT HIM FOREVER...AND HE BECOME UNCONSIOUS...


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SHE SEATED THEIR IN BUS DEPO...SHE IS BROKEN , TIRED AND LEFT SOUL WHO DON'T HAVE ANYTHING LEFT...SHE LOST EVERTHING TODAY...EVEN HER FAITH IN RELATION TOO...SHE SAW TELEPHONE BOOTH AND DECIDE TO GO FAR AWAY FROM THIS ALL WHERE SHE LIVE HER LIFE HAPPYLY...SHE MAKE CALL AND SAID TO THE PERSON TO COME AND PICK HER FROM XYZ BUS STAND...AFTER SITTING IN BUS , SHE TRY TO FORGET HER PAST BUT THE NAME " ARNAV"

BECOME HER LIFE...SHE COME BACK TO SENCE WHEN TICKET SELLER ASK ABOUT WHERE SHE WANT TO GO SHE SAID " MUMBAI " SO JOURNEY START FROM DELHI TO MUMBAI LEAVING EVERTHING BEHIND...EVEN HER SOUL TOO WHO IS LAYING UNCONSIOUS IN FLOOR...



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" AS YOU ALL SEE , IT IS VERY BRUTAL ACCIDENT , THE BUS WHICH IS GOING FROM DELHI TO MUMBAI MEET WITH ACCIDENT , THE BUS DRIVER LOST HIS CONTROL AND BUS BUREND IN FIRE ,

AS PER OUR SORCES EVERY PASSENGER DIED ON THE SPOT...WITH CAMERAMEN ARISH , SUNEDHA

XYZ NEWS." SAID REPOTER...


HEY FRIENDS TELL ME HOW IT IS...GIVE ME ADVISE ABOUT MY CHAPTER...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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PLZ...CHECK MY ANOTHER STORY IN INDIAN FORUM

NEW ARSHI FF L.I.F.E. the package of pure love and betrayal
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Then wht happened 2 Khushi ? Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
cong on the new story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you friends another chapter updated

chapter 1

AFTER 5 YEARS...

SHANTIVAN


ITS WAS AN EARLY MORNING IN THE HOUSE. ANJALI DECORETING MANDIR FOR MORNING AARTI...PAYAL TRYING TO GET HOLD OF HIS 4 YER SON ARYAN...EVERYONE IS BUSY IN THEIR MORNING ACTIVITES...AND THEN THE VOICE COME


"RANI SHAHIBA...KEHA HE AAP...YEHA TO AAIYE..." SAID SHYAM.

"JI ...ABHI AYE..." SAID ANJALI WITH SHY SMILE...

"DI AAP JAIYE ...YE SEB HUM KERLEGE..." SAID PAYAL

"THIK HE PAYALJI... HUM AATE HAI.."


PAYAL START MAKE LADOO FOR PRESHAD...THEN SHE REMEMBER HOW SHE AND KHUSHI MAKE SWEETS TOGETHER...LONG TEAR ESCAPE FROM HER EYES BUT SHE QUICKLY WHIPE OFF BEFORE SOMEONE SEE IT...YES THAT'S RULE OF THIS RAIZADA MANSION FROM LAST 5 YEARS NO ONE CRY FOR KHUSHI OR REMEMBER HER , THEY ALL HATE HER AND THINK SHE RUN AWAY BECAUSE SHE CAN'T PROVE HER INNOCENCE...AND NO ONE WANT TO GET HER BACK...SHE IS BAD PAST OF THIS RAIZADA MANSION WHICH NO ONE WANT TO MANTION IN THIER TALK...ONLY THREE PERSON FROM WHOLE RAIZADA MANSION CONSIDER KHUSHI'S EXISTANCE FOR THEM ARE PAYAL , NK AND ARNAV ...


HER TOUGHT BROKE WHEN SHE FOUND TUG IN HER SAREE...PRIYA [ANJALI'S DAUGTHER]

SMILING AT HER WITH HER TOOTHY MOUTH AND SAID..." MAMI WHERE IS ARYAN WE ARE GETTING LATE "

PAYAL SMILE AND PICK HER AND SAID " I KNOW BETA ...YOU SEAT HERE I WILL GET HIM OK"

SHE LEFT...


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ARNAV 'S ROOM


MORNING RAYES BROKE HIS SLEEP ... FROM LAST 5 YEARS HE DIN'T SLEEP PEACEFULLY...THE NOISE OF CHILDEREN ALWAYES IRRTATES HIM...BUT LOVE OF KHUSHI FOR CHILDEREN ALWAYS MAKE HIM LOVE THEM...HE TURN HIMSELF TOTALLY AS KHUSHI...

JUST LIKE HER CARING , SELFLESS , THOUGH HE NEVER SHOW HIS CONCEREN TOWEREDS HIS FAMILY OR THIER ISSUES , HE ALWAYES IGNORE THEM , AND TREAT THEM AS HIS RESPONSIBILITY ,

HE FULFIIL EVERY DEMAND OF HIS FAMILY...BUT NEVER LET THEM COME TO NEAR HIM BECAUSE THEY HATE WHOM HE LOVE THE MOST IN THIS WORLD , MORE THAN HIS DI TOO.

YES TODAY HE LOVE HER MORE THAN HIS DI TOO , BECAUSE HIS DI TOO BETRYED HIM BY GETTING SHYAM BACK IN HER BLIND LOVE...THE ONLY PERSON HE LET NEAR HIM IS PAYAL AND NK ...

NOW PAYAL BECOME HIS SOUL SISTER AND NK HIS BROTHER...


HE STILL REGERET FOR THAT NIGHT WHEN HE LEFT HER ALON IN BROKEN STAT...AND SHE NEVER COME BACK...HE FILL REPORT IN POLICE STATION OF MISSING BUT THEY DINT FIND ANY CLUE...THREE DAY'S AFTER HER DEPARTURE THEY COME AND SAID TO IDENTIFY SOME JWELLARY...PAYAL AND ARNAV REACH THE POLICE STATION AND ASKED WHY THEY IDENTIFIED THIS JWELLARY ? AND ANSWER TOOK AWAY LAND FROM THIER FEET...

THEY INFORMED BY THE POLICE THAT IN WHICH DATE KHUSHI LEFT THE HOUSE ANOTHER DAY ONE BUS GOING FROM DELHI TO MUMBAI MEET WITH AN ACCIDENT OF FIRE BLAST AND EVERY PASSENGER DIED ON THE SPOT...THEY FOUND SOME JWELLARY AND SOME BURNED THING...THEY TAKE THEM IN ONE ROOM AND SHOW THEM BURNED THINGS AND ONE WOODEN BOX IN WHICH THE JWELLARY IS KEPT...


PAYAL OPEN THE BOX IN STTAMERING HAND ...WHAT SHE SAW IT MAKE HER STATUE AND BOX FALL DOWN FROM HER HAND ...ONE ANKLET[PAYAL] WHICH KHUSHI ALWAYES WEAR , HER MOTHERS LAST SIGN IN THAT WOODEN BOX TAKE THEIR BREATH AWAY... PAYAL TAKE THAT ANKLET AND FIND ONLY BLOOD IN THAT ANKLET ...SHE FAINTED...ARNAV WHO JUST CHEKING OTHER THINGS HEAR THE SOUND BEHIND HIM , HE SAW PAYAL ON THE FLOOR UNCOINSIOUS HE INSTANTLY CALLED ONE POLICEMAN AND ASKED GLASS OF WATER...HE SPRINKELD SOME WATER ON PAYAL'S FACE AND ASKED WORRIEDLY "WHAT HAPPEN ?"

SHE SHOW THAT ANKLET TO HIM AND CRY HER HEART OUT...ARNAV COULDN'T BELIVE WHAT HE SAW , THE POLICE MAN TOO SAW THAT THEY FOUND SOMETHING OF THAT LADY , WHEN HE SAW THE ANKLET HE REMEMBER SOMTHING AND SAID " KYA YE AAPKI WIFE KA HAI ?" ARNAV WHO JUST SITTING BECOME STATUE DIN'T HEAR ANYTHING BUT PAYAL NODED IN YES ...AND WHAT NEXT SET OF WORDS THE POLICEMAN SAY BRING BRIGHT SMILE ON THIER FACES...

" IF THIS ANKLET IS YOUR'S WIFE THEN SHE IS ALIVE BECAUSE WE GET THIS ANKLET FROM ONE OF THE MAN'S POCKET MUST BE THIEF WHO STOLE THIS ANKLET "


THEY NEVER SAID WHAT HAPPEN IN POLICESTATION TO ANY MEMBER OF SHANTIVAN , BECAUSE THEY KNOW THEY DON'T DESERVE THAT .THAT IS THE LAST DAY WHEN ARNAV SING RAIZADA CRY AND SMILE TOGETHER...AFTER THAT HE BECOME A STONE AND STONE HAS NO FEELINGS...







Edited by ank_gan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
I really hope khushi is alive
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NEW UPDATE...

CHAPTER 2

SHANTIVAN


IN BREKFAST TABLE EVERYONE SITED ON THEIR RESPECTIVE SEATS EATING AND TAKING.SUDDENLY EVERYONE BECOME SILENT THEY ALL HEARED SOUND OF LETHER SHOES WHICH ARE COMING FROM THE STEPS THEY SHOW ARNAV FULL READY TO GO FOR OFFICE OR HIS SECOND HOME...YES OFFICE BECOME HIS SECOND HOME FOR LAST FIVE YEARS...HE COME HOME LATE MIDNIGHT OR SOME TIME NEVER COME HE MAKE SMALL APPARTEMENT ABOVE HIS OFFICE AND STAY THERE FOR GEETING PEACE AND SOME TIME ALON FOR HIMSELF...FROM LAST FIVE YEARS HE BECOME MORE SUCCESSFUL AND TAKE HIS BUSSINESS TO NEW HIGHTS , HE BECOME ICON FOR YOUNGSTERS AND NEW GENERATION , BUT ANOTHER TRUTH ONLY KNOW BY HIM THAT HE LOST EVERYTHING IN THIS FIVE YEARS HIS LOVE , HIS WIFE AND HIS SISTER WHOM HE CONSIDER AS MOTHER..., NOW FIVE YEARS LATER THE SEARCH FOR HIS LOVE IS STILL ON.HE HAS USED EVERY POWER TO FIND OUT WHERE HIS WIFE WAS. BUT ALL SEARCH WENT IN VAIN . HE KNOW SHE IS ALIVE SOMEWHERE ANY PART OF THIS EARTH , BECAUSE HE IS STILL ALIVE AND HIS HEART IS STILL BEATING FOR HER..THE MAN WHO NEVER BELIVE IN GOD ONLY PRAYED EVERYDAY THAT ONE DAY HE WILL SEE HER. ONE DAY SHE WILL COME BACK INTO HIS LIFE , UNTILL THEN HE TAKE CARE OF HIS AND HER FAMILY AND PROTECT THEM ...


HE COME AND TAKE SEAT AND WAIT FOR PAYAL TO SERVE HIM , PAYAL SERVE HIM HIS USUAL BREAKFAST AND TAKE SEAT BESIDE HIM ...YES , FROM LAST FIVE YEARS HE CHANGED EVERYTHING

EVEN HIS SEAT TOO NOW HE SEAT BESIDE PAYAL [HIS SISTER] AND AKASH WITH NK...ANJALI GIVE ANGRY GLARE TO PAYAL BUT SHE IGNORE HER .BECAUSE IT HAPPENS EVERYDAY...PAYAL AND EVERYMEMBER ALREADY UNDERSTAND ARNAV REPLACE HIS SISTER PLACE FROM ANJALI TO PAYAL AND GIVE HER EVERY RESPONSIBILTY WHICH WAS ANJALI'S LIKE HOME ACTIVITY , FINANCIAL ACTIVITY OF HOUSE , EVERY THING DEPEND ON PAYAL'S CHOICE AND REFERENCE , HE GIVE ALL RESPONSIBLITY OF HIS HOUSE AND FAMILY MEMBER TO HER AND AS GOOD DAUGTHER IN LAW SHE FULFILL EVERY RESPONSIBILITY GIVEN BY HER BROTHER ..NOW

HE IS HAVING HIS BREAKFAST WHILE PAYAL BROKE SILENCE..." BHAI I GOT NEW CREDIT CARD YESTERDAY THEY SAID YOU OPEN NEW ACCOUNT FOR ARYAN WITH ME?"

"HMMM...I OPEN NEW ACCOUNT FOR ARYAN SO THAT HE CAN USE WHEN HE BECOME YOUNGER...TILL THEN YOU TAKE CARE OF THAT...AND I MAKE SOME CHANGES IN EVERYONE ACCOUNT'S TOO..."

THEY ALL SEE AT HIM OTHERS ARE OK WITH THAT BUT SHYAM WANT TO KNOW WHAT CHANGES HE MAKE...

ARNAV= " AS YOU ALL BECOME INDEPENDENT AND HAVING FAMILY I OPENED YOUR PERSONAL ACCOUNT WITH JOINT ACCOUNT SO OTHERS ALSO CAN USE...NOW YOU ALL HAVE YOUR PERSONAL AND JOINT BOTH ACCOUNTS AS AKASH HAS HIS OWN ACCOUNT AND ANOTHER JOINT ACCOUNT WTH PAYAL AND ARYAN... "


AKASH= "BHAI ITS NOT NEEDED WE ARE HAPPY WITH ONE ACCOUNT ?"


ARNAV = " ITS FOR FUTURE AKASH , ARYAN IS GROWING " . AKASH SMILE AND NODEDE...


SHYAM= "AKASH IS RIGHT SALE SEHAB , WE ARE SATISFIED WITH OLD ACCOUNTS..."


ARNAV="FINE THEN "...HE PICK HIS PHONE AND CALL SOME ONE...AND SAID ON PHONE " MR BAKSHI , ASR SPEKING, CANCEL THE NEW CHANGES WHICH I TOLD YOU TO DO IN MRS.JHA'S ACCOUNT...AS PER OLD SITUATION HER JOINT ACCOUNT BECOME BLOCK , BECAUSE OF LOST OF CREDIT CARD RIGHT [ HE ASKED IN PHONE] AND HER PERSONAL ACCOUNT WAS CANCELD BY THEM ONLY ...OK THEN THERE IS NO ACCOUNT OF MR AND MRE.JHA IN YOUR BANK RIGHT ...OK NO CHANGE IS REQUIRED ...OH YES TRANSFER THE LOAN WHICH TAKE BY MRE.JHA FOR THIER OWN HOUSE TO MR.JHA 'S ACCOUNT , WHICH EARLIER TAKEN CARE BY THERE JOINT ACCOUNT...OK MR BAKSHI...BYE"


ARNAV=AS YOU SAY I CANCEL EVERYTHING...SO AS YOUR ACCOUNT ARE BLOCKED , NO USE OF ATM CARD AND CRDIT CARD , PAYAL WHERE ARE THE NEW ATM CARDS WHICH I GIVE TO YOU TO DISTRIBUTE ALL OF THEM IN TODAY MORNING...


PAYAL GIVE ALL ATM CARD TO HIM HE START TO DISTRIBUTE IN ROW FIRST PAYAL , AKASH , NK, MAMA , MAMI , NANI AT LAST TWO ATM CARD REMAIN . HE TAKE SESSIOR AND CUT THEM LOOKING AT SHYAM EYES...ALL SAW THIS AND SHYAM FUME IN ANGER BECAUSE HE KNOW NOW HE IS ON RODE...HE LEFT THE TABLE WITHOUT BREAKFAST...



ANJALI WHO SEE ALL THIS FUME IN ANGER AND BLASTED ON PAYAL " YOU DID THIS PURPOSLY RIGHT , WHAT YOU THINK YOU TAKE MY PLACE IN HIS LIFE , IT NEVER HAPPENS , HE IS MY BLOOD BROTHER THAT FACT NEVER CHANGE...AND YOU CHOTE HOE DARE YOU INSULT YOUR JEEJAJI?"


ARNAV = " I AM TELLING YOU THIS LAST TIME SO REMEMBER

1. STOP CALLING ME "CHHOTE"

2. YOU ARE JUST DAUGTHER OF THIS HOUSE AND MY MOTHER , AND ONE RESPONSIBILITY WHICH GIVEN BY MY MOTHER TO ME , WHICH I PERFORMING CONSIDERING AS DUTY , NOT MY SISTER ,

3. NEVER EVER DARE TO INSUTE MY SISTER OR ANY FAMILY MEMBER OF MY HOUSE...YOU CAN'T FACE ASR WORTH...


NOW GO AND TELL YOUR HUSBAND TO PAY THE LOAN INSTALLMENT THE DUE DATE IS TOMMOROW...



HE NEVER WISH TO SPEAKE IN THIS HARSH TONE BUT HE KNOW NOW ITS HIGH TIME THE TRUTH COME OUT...





HEY FRIENDS...READ AND TELL ME YOU LIKE IT OR NOT...




Edited by ank_gan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Continue soon
Pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg very interesting! what a cliff hanger. ..but how will arnav n them know kushi was even in the bus to even think shes dead??ok ok il stop bfr I start...waiting fr the story to unfold. .update soon...eagerly waiting. ..lovely work...
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good!!!anjali needs to open her big fat round eyes lol...seriously gosh...I hope kushi is safe n sound..n us it possible to get kushi to b bubbly..nawty.. n fun like hw she was...sigh I so miss that character of herz in iss pyaar. ...one of the reasons wat gt me attracted to her character. ...apart from that u have a wonderful story!!!!!I love it!esp asr redemption track...love the bond between arnav n kushi...n yes abt time the truth cme out! waiting fr mre updates!!!

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