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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Hello Buddies...

Thank you so much for liking & appreciating my work.

As I already said this FF will be going on in the same way as Qubool Hai present track but in my way.

The most important thing is that I am not sending Asad to Delhi in my story.

Because it's a fan fiction & in my fiction world KSG is always fit and fine... Touch wood...

Will update the 4th part by tonight. I am almost done with half of it.

You people keep liking & commenting & increasing the activity on our dear QUBOOL HAI forum...

Keep loving & appreciating & also criticizing my work... whatever you people want to prefer...

Loads of Love,

Angel


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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
update soon
plzzz pm me for updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Part 4 - And he hurts her again...

Khan Villa Garden:

Asad and Zoya were still embraced in each others. Asad was so hurt that he was almost crushing Zoya in hug. She was finding it difficult to breathe but she knew Asad would feel a bit better so she just stayed.

Asad broke the hug and was looking at Zoya.

"Mr. Khan... Aap Phoophi ko samajne ki koshish kijiye. Please... Ek baar unse baat kijiye. Aap jaante hai wo aapke abbu se bahot pyaar karti hai..."

"Wo mere abbu nahi hai Miss. Faruqui...", shouted Asad.

"Thik hai... Wo aapke abbu nahi hai. Par Phoophi to aapki ammi hai naa. Ek baar un...", Zoya tried to make him understand but Asad cut her in between.

"Mai sirf itna janta hu ki wo insaan ammi ko sirf takleef de sakta hai. Wo ammi ko kamjor kar rahe hai apni bimari ko lekar. Aur ammi unki baton me aa rahi hai. Mai ammi ko kahi nahi jane dunga. Bus... Mai unhe phir se tootne nahi dunga. Phir uske liye chahe mujhe ammi ki najro me girna hi kyu na pade. Wo mujhse nafrat karegi. Qubool hai mujhe unki nafrat. Mai bus unhe takleef nahi hone de sakta.", he said wiping the fresh tears that were forming in his eyes.

"Mr. Kha..."

"Mujhe kuch nahi sun na Miss. Faruqui. Aur aap in sab se door rahiye... Mujhe akela chod dijiye... Please...", said Asad sternly.

Zoya was hurt by this statement of his. She yelled at him, "Door rahiye..?? Aap samjate kya hai apne aap ko, hunh..??? Aap aur Phoophi meri family ho aur aap mujhse door rehne ke liye keh rahe hai. Nahi rahungi mai door. Jo karna hai kar lijiye. Samje aap. Nahi chodungi mai aapko akela. Aapko jitni koshish karni hai kar lijiye. Aur..."

Zoya's voice broke & she had tears in her eyes. She was looking at him with hurt & anger towards him. Asad realized what he said in feat of his anger. He really felt bad that he hurt Zoya in his pain. He tried nearing her. She backed away.

Humeira's room:

"Humeira...", said Ayaan while hugging her and caressing her hairs.

"Hmmm..."

"Mai jaanta hu maine aapko humesha takleef hi di hai. Maine humesha aapka dil toda hai. Aur aap mujhe humesha maaf kar deti hai. Mai kitni baar apni laparvahi dikhata hu, par aap humesha mujhe samaj jati ho. Aap mujhse itna pyaar kaise kar sakti hai? Aap itni achchi kyun hai? Mai aapko deserve hi nahi karta. Mai..."

Humeira broke out of the hug & shushed him by placing her hands on his mouth.

"Bus... Aur kuch mat kahiye. Aap jaise bhi hai mai aapse bahot mohabbat karti hu. Aap kitni bhi koshish kar lijiye par mai aapse kabhi naaraj nahi ho sakti. Aur mai jaanti hu ki aap aise hi ho. Laparavah... Dimag se garam... Thode se badmaash... Aur mai isi Ayaan se pyaar karti hu...", she suppressed a genuine smile feeling proud of Ayaan.

"Humeira Begum... Wo ammi..."

"Aapko kuch kehne ki jarurat nahi hai. Mai sab samaj rahi hu. Samaj rahi hu ki phoophi ko aur aapko kitni takleef ho rahi hai. Mai jaanti hu aap par kya beet rahi hai par Ayaan aap mujhe chodkar jane ka kaise soch sakte ho? Mai humesha aapke saath hu. Aapki har takleef me. Aapke har dard me. Aapki Zindagi ke har kadam par mai aapke saath hu. Aap mujhe apne aap se alag mat kijiye. Please Ayaan. Mai marr jaungi aapke bagair." And her voice broke.

"Humeira... Mujhe maaf kar dijiye. Aap to jaanti hai na ki mai humesha jaldbaaji aur gusse me kuch bhi faisla le leta hu. Mai bus ammi ko takleef me nahi dekh sakta. Abbu aisa kaise kar sakte hai ammi ke saath. Itne saalo ke baad unhe Dilshad Bi ke saath rehna hai. Ammi ke bare me ek baar bhi nahi socha unhone. Mai ammi ko takleef me nahi dekh sakta. Buss... Mai ammi aur Nuzhat ko lekar yaha se bahot door chala jaunga. Itna door ki wapas kabhi nahi aaunga...", Ayaan was speaking standing near the window.

Humeira was hurt listening to him. He is still not taking her with him and says he loves her. She tried to say something but she could utter only two words with cracked voice, "Aur mai..???"

Ayaan looked at Humeira's questioning face. He kept staring at her for some time. Finally, Humeira broke the trance and looked away so that Ayaan couldn't see the lone tear escaping her eyes.


A/N: I am really sorry for such a small update. But as I promised you all to give an update by tonight, I am posting the chotu wala part...😉

Enjoy reading...Do like & leave your lovely comments...

Love you all...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
yaar so short one
need a long one
so emotional one
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: shishiksg

yaar so short one

need a long one
so emotional one
update soon



sry dear...so busy with wrk...bt sine i promised i updtd as much as I wrote...
will update asap...😊
i also updtd the songs...do like dem...😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel2930



sry dear...so busy with wrk...bt sine i promised i updtd as much as I wrote...
will update asap...😊
i also updtd the songs...do like dem...😉

dnt say sry yaar
itz k no probs
i feel so bad wen smeone tells me sry for no fault of theirs
ya vl do dat for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Nice part plz try to give long part next time
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
After so long thnx for d pm nice update luved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: shishiksg

dnt say sry yaar
itz k no probs
i feel so bad wen smeone tells me sry for no fault of theirs
ya vl do dat for sure



ok ok...no more sorries...😊
i dnt like it if sum1 feels bad cos of me...
😊
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Nice part plz try to give long part next time
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon



thnks a lot...😊
i am quite busy wid my wrk...bt will try to give a bigger one nxt tym...
😊
and u r most welcome...🤗

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