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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

muje toh pehle hi pata tha ki Priya Ram ko aloo ke parathe zaroor banakar rahegi.😆

yaar iss baar Priya ko manana bahut mushkil hai...Ram ne jo kiya use teek karna bahut mushkil hai.chalo mein dekhna chaungi ki aap court scene kaise dhikate ho
continue soon and thanks for PM


hehehe...han wrna rambabu sote nhi yar isiliye dena pada aloo k parathe...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: contactcharu

very nice...pls continue soon...


thank u dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04


Part 75
chalo finally Ram babu ko unka Aaloo paratha mil hi gaya Priya ne bana hi diya Ram k liye... awesome but it was painful to see RaYa's emotinal part really felf very bad... bichara Ram ji waise hi pareshaniyan kam nahi aur upar se Juhi aur bada rahi hai... but happy Ram's full focus is on Priya only & on woowing her back... very nice do post next soon waiting...


hehehe...jab juhi ki pareshaniya badhengi to use koi nhi bacha payega...😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

  sry for late..ha mujhe bhi ye juhi kuch thik tha nehi lag rehi hai.chalo aapki ff me to miljaye aur ek negetive charactr..and priya manao  update too good...thank u for ur pm


hehehe...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woow..lo bhai promo bhi aa gya..ab lagta h balhians ko ek aur hug milne wala h jiske liye sab mare jate hain...mujhe kya lagta h..jab lift khulegi priya jake k ram k gale lag jayegi aur lift chal degi...phir...phir kya???..kuchh nhi scene change ho jayega...hahaha..khair..wo to monday ko hi pta chalega ki kya hoga...filhal mujhe to update dena h..so here i go..hope u all like it...

Part 83..

"chhu rha hu"

ram priya k peechhe jata h..but priya kuchh sunne ko taiyar nhi h pr rambabu to rambabu h..unko rokna thoda mushkil h boss..are bhai wajandar admi h..itna wajan to hota hi h unki bato me ki samne wale ko sunna hi pade...aur kam se kam "maine socha na tha" me to jarur..khair..priya har bat me ram ko neglect karne ki koshish kar rhi h...pr problm ye h ki uski sabse badi problm hi yhi h ki wo ram ko neglect kar nhi pati h...aur ye ram ko bhi pta h...priya kuchh karte hue juhi k kamre k samne se gujrti h..juhi kisi se bat kar rhi hoti h..priya ko dekhte hi phon kat deti h..priya ko bht ajeeb lagta h..

Priya...hi..kaisi ho??

Juhi...theek hu

priya..important call

juhi...nhi bas aise hi

priya...actully mujhe tumse sorry bolna tha...meri wajah se tumhare sath itna sab kuchh ho gya..

Juhi...its ok priya..

Priya...tumhe bht bura laga hoga na court me jo bhi hua..

Juhi...nahi bura kyun lagega??

Priya...kyun??..tumhari izzat pr sawal uthe..is'nt it hurt u

juhi..nahi ram k liye itna to kar hi sakti hu main..

Priya...kyun???

Juhi...unhone itna kiya h mere aur meri beti k liye...

Priya...to tumne bhi to kiya hamare pariwar k liye...

Juhi...han lekin us waqt koi aur rasta nhi tha...

Priya...pta h juhi mujhe lagta h kisi ne janbujhkar ye sab kiya h...qki mr.kapoor k buisness me itni gadbad ho ye m to nhi man sakti...wo itne consious rhte hain apne kam ke liye...kisi ne to kuchh gadbad ki hogi wrna aise kaise...

Juhi...aisi bat nhi h priya..tum nhi thi to ram ghar me jyada time spend karte the..isiliye bhul gye honge...koi janbujhkr aisa kyun karega??..main to khud unka sara kam dekhti thi agar aisa kuchh hota to mujhe to jarur pta chalta...

Priya...hmm...anyways..thanks for evrything & sorry..

Juhi...pls priya...

Priya k deemag me bht sari uljhane hain jinhe wo suljhana chahti upar se usne rambabu se panga lekar ek uljhan jabrdsti apne sar le li..theek h use pta h ram ki glti nhi h...phir bhi..biwi h to aisi harkate to karegi hi..bhai duniya me har cheez k sath compromise kiya ja sakta h pr pati k sath nhi..ek aurat k liye..har rishta kabhi na kabhi badal jata h..chahe wo dost ho ma ho beti ho..sabke mayne samay k sath badlte rhte hain...jinki ma hoti h unki jindgi me bhi dusre rishte aa jate hain..jinki beti hoti h unki jindagi se khud dusre rishto me chali jati h...kabhi bahu kabhi sas kabhi bhabhi kabhi behan..har rishta samay k sath milta bichhdta rhta h...lekin ek aur ki jo pehchan pati k sath banti h wo akhiri sans tak rhti h..sirf is ek rishte ko wo hamesha apna keh sakti  h jab se ye rishta uski jindgi me ata h aur jab tak uski   Zindgi me rhta h ya zindgi k bad bhi..marne k bad bhi log yehi kehte hain ki falan ki biwi mar gyi..to according to me..aurat to har rishte ko jiti hai pr ye rishta uski jindgi hota h..to yha wo na chahte hue bhi kamjor pad jati h...khair...aurat ki ek aur khubi hoti h ki wo hamesha apni kamjori ko takat bna k jeeti h..bakiyo ka nhi pta pr main to aisa hi karti hu..aur meri kahani h to priya bhi aisa hi karegi...to theek h ki rambabu uski kamjori hain aur wo tut bhi jayegi unke aage..lekin phir bhi wo apni kamjori se ladegi jarur..taki jab tute tab bhi samne wale ko uski mazbuti hi nazar aaye..isiliye ladti h wo rambabu se ..isiliye naraz hoti h qki wo janti h ki wo uske hain aur wo unke hi sath ye sab kar sakti h...khair..

At night..

Priya kamre me aati h...ram uska hi wait kar rha hota h..priya ram ko jaga hua dekhti h to wapas jane lagti h...

Ram...ruko..

Priya nhi sunti h..ram samne aake rokta h..

Priya...jane dijiye mujhe...

Ram...kya natak laga rakha h tumne...

Priya...main natak kar rhi hu...han apko to natak hi lagega...ek to jhuth bolte hain upar se pareshan bhi kar rhe hain...

Ram...bht ho gya main kuchh bol nhi rha hu to tum bolti hi ja rhi ho...main chup sirf isliye hu qki han maine glti ki tumse bat chhupa k...pr wo bhi mne tumhare liye hi kiya...aur man bhi to rha hu ki meri glti thi...aur tum ho ki sun hi nhi rhi ho...sabki gltiya maf kar sakti ho meri nahi??

Priya...han nhi kar sakti qki ...

Ram...bolo chup kyun ho gyi...

Priya...mujhe nhi pta jane dijiye mujhe...

Ram...main btata hu qki tum mujhse pyar karti ho..aur insecure ho gyi ho...

Priya...main...?..aur insecure ..:..pls mr.kapoor...

Priya jane lagt h to ram use jane nhi deta h darwaza band kar deta h..

Priya...chhodiye mujhe...mana kiya apko samjh nhi ata...mat chhuiye mujhe...koi rishta nhi h hamare beech

ram...chhunga...kya kar logi??..ye lo chhu diya ...ab bolo..

Ram priya ka hath pakad leta h aur uske pas aa jata h...

Priya...kya kar rhe hain hain aap??

Ram...chhu rha hu...dikh nhi rha h..lo ye chhua tumhara chehra...tumhari ankhe...tumhare baal..tumhare gaal...roko...ab kyun nhi rok rhi ho...??

Priya bas ram ko dekhti ja rhi thi...

Ram...lo tumhe seene se bhi laga liya...ab roko na...har cheez chhune se rok sakti ho tum mujhe...pr apne dil aur atma ko chhune se kaise rokogi...dikhao rok kar...

Priya akhir ram k gale lagane se tut hi jati h aur rone lagti h...

Priya...aap kyun karte hain aisa???

Ram...kyunki main tumse bht pyar karta hu

priya...us waqt pyar nhi yad aya tha...jab divorce liya??..jab juhi se shadi kar rhe the??

Ram...aya priya..aur usi pyar ne rok liya mujhe aur tumhe meri jindgi me wapas le aya...main pehle hi 7 sal tak tadpa hu...tum kyun aur takleef de rhi ho mujhe berukhi dikha kar...tum to hosh me nhi thi..lekin m to har pal tumhe apne se dur jate hue dekh rha tha...tum mere sat sal ki takleef kabhi nhi samjhogi...qki wo mne mehsus kiya h...jo apki jindgi ho apke samne ho apke pas ho phir bhi apse bht dur ho..jiske dur jane Ka ehsas apko har pal darata ho ki jane jindgi ka kaun sa pal akhiri pal ban jaye...tum nhi samjhogi priya...

Bate karte karte ram ki awaz bhari ho jati h...wo chup ho jata h...tab priya ko ehsas hota h ki jitni takleef me wo h utni hi takleef me mr.kapoor bhi h...wo ram ko samne kar ke uski ankho me dekhti h jahan bht sara dard aur ansu rhte hain...

Priya...i am soo sorry mr.kapoor...main apko hurt nhi karna chahti thi...pls...ap...i am sorry..m apko aise nhi dekh sakti...pls...pls dont do this...

Ram...main bhi tumhe aise nhi dekh sakta...dusro ki wajah se hum khud ko takleef kyun de rhe hain...??..jab ki hum dono ekdusre ki takleef handle nhi kar sakte hain...

Priya...han mr.kapoor..ap sahi keh rhe hain...ab nhi ladungi apse...

Ram..are mne ladne k liye nhi mna kiya...tumko naraz hona h ..theek h...chillana h...theek h...jo karna h wo karo..bas dur jane ki bat mat karo...

Priya...lekin ye sabkuchh jo itna bikhra hua h...wo..??

Ram...are yar tum kya sirf hamare bare me nhi soch sakti ho kuchh der k liye...

Priya...hamare hi bare me soch rhi hu...kahan aa gyi h hamari jindgi...hamara rishta...

Ram...kuchh nhi hua h hamare rishte ko wo abhi bhi waisa hi h...tabhi to abhi bhi hum chhoti chhoti bato par lad lete hain...aur ekdusre k liye badi badi bato ko bhi chhota bna kar asan kar dete hain...main sab theek karunga na...diya h na tumne ek mauka...bas ab kuchh mat socho..bas mere pas rho...

Dono phir se gale lag jate hain...

Ram...main kal subah gharwalo se shaadi ki bat karne wala hu

priya...kiski???

Ram...juhi ki...

Priya...kya???...phir se juhi...??

To b continue... 
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Posted: 10 years ago
maate bahut khoob lika 👏 i enjoyed and liked and what ever u were trying to say was perfect but end me aap ekta kyun bangayi ram and juhi wedding😭 phirse😡 serial mein juhi ko itniii badnaaam hogayi kud sid se shaadi karliya agar jkarna ta itna natak kyun kyunki uski nazar ram ke upar tii dash khaegi😡 priya realized something is wrong in office and it is by chuhi for sure😡
aap ekta bankar ram aur us chuhi ki shaaadi😭 jayiye hum gusse hain aapse😭😭😭

continue soon bagadoo raya koo phir i will tell my dream of raya running and marrying sachi mein dream degi but sab bata doongi woo kya hogaa
Edited by shavii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
priya itni jaldi maan gayi 😲 
mujhe laga k is bar bht tym legi😆
finally yaha bhi juhi ki shaadi hogi..mamaji se karwana pls, sid ki luf already serial mai spoil hogayi 😆
aur wo jo rishton wali baat likhi hai its very true😛 maine kabhi aise socha hi nhi tha😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kudos satya vachan veenaji.
hats off to ur writing.
ramji toh bade sentimental hogaye hai, i literlly loved the wordings so true n touchy.
priyaji chupa toh nhi sakti hai apna pyar , haan naraz ho sakti hai thodi der k liye.kabhi pyar kam bhi toh nhi ho sakta.
chu rha hu wala part toh mast tha raya ke expressions jhalk rhe the uss scene mein😆
Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
❤️Veena,  har patni Rambabu jaise Pati  chahthi hai ideal,loyal and loveable.,
But asli zindagi mein Aisa nahin milta,isliye RaYa ko hum  Itna pyar karte hain.
Aapbhi bahut mehsus karke hi likh rahin hai,Haina?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

priya itni jaldi maan gayi 😲 

mujhe laga k is bar bht tym legi😆
finally yaha bhi juhi ki shaadi hogi..mamaji se karwana pls, sid ki luf already serial mai spoil hogayi 😆
aur wo jo rishton wali baat likhi hai its very true😛 maine kabhi aise socha hi nhi tha😆


hahaha...kyun bechare mamaji ko marwa rhe ho...bechare sari jawani tarste rhe...tarste tarste budhapa aa gya...ab is budhape me itni wajandar cheez de doge ...agar ek din juhi mamaji k sath so gyi to agle din mamaji to swargwasi ho jayenge...😛