Fortress around the heart~ViSa and RaVya FF~Part 36 updated pg 68 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Wonderful update,lvd it.
Updt soon.


Thank you, Alekhika! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update PallavišŸ‘loved reading every bit of it
This is not fair kab tak mere Akdu aur unki Mrs.chapar chapar ko tadpavogi😭 Kab mere Akduji apne glasses pehenkar closet mein rakehuye papers dekenge😔

Thanks Again for sharing a wonderful work

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Wonderful update,lvd it.
Updt soon.



Thank you, my dear! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nancy-

Pallavi you're such a torture queen, can't believe ViSa haven't cleared their misunderstandings yet! Sarita is in her own happy world and she doesn't know what's going on Vikrant's mind. I hope Vikrant sees the papers before they go to the wedding.

Sarita.Abhi scene was so cute😳

Another amazing part from youšŸ‘



Nancy, my dear, be prepared for some more torture from this fic, with a few happy moments here and there. But I assure you, both visa and ravya will come out stronger in the end! 😊 I can only hope that you will not get bored or impatient with this fic. Hope I can keep you engaged with the story!😃

And aren't I satisfying your gutter mind with the other fic? Hehe šŸ˜† šŸ˜‰

Thank you so much for your comments, dear! Really appreciatd it! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Continue pls
Want to see what happen next



Thank you, dear! 😃
I have updated the next chapter! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
It hurts, it hurts a lot Pallavi 😭 I'm not kidding but at the end I could exactly feel Sarita's pain. It's such an horrible feeling ggrrr please put an end to our misery! I know I'm sounding like a drama queen but I'm not exaggerating.. That's how amazing you are. I could connect to Sarita and how she felt.

Torture queen is such an apt name for you.. Your not solving their misunderstandings but you're creating this slow tension (emotional and sexual) at the same time.

I'm way too happy with your other fic and I want things to go well here too šŸ˜› let RaVya have ViSa's share of pain.šŸ˜³šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

amazing part cont soon.



Thank you, dear!
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Will update today! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalijiji

Wow Pallavi this is awesomešŸ‘šŸ¼This Akdu can't stay away from his beautiful wife for longšŸ˜‰ā˜ŗļø



Thank you, my dear! 😊

Mr. Akdu sure can't keep his mind and hands away from his wife! šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 13

Vikrant's residence:

Vikrant stepped out of his bedroom and closed the door behind him with a bang. He cursed out loud. What the heck was wrong with him? He wondered. He almost kissed his wife just now. He ran his fingers through his hair in frustration.

He saw her in a half dressed state looking gorgeous and couldn't help but gaze at her. He was captivated by her beauty and could not take his eyes away from hers. When he saw that bruise on her waist and looked up to see the pain in her eyes, he could not bear it anymore. He loved her and could not stand to see her in any kind of pain; and just like that his love for her took over his hurt and anguish.

He rushed to apply the ointment on her wound. And when he saw her face at close quarters and her lips trembling, he just couldn't control his actions. He had to taste her petals and the nectar it held. If his phone had not fallen to the floor, god knows what would have happened, he thought.

He tried to kiss Sarita, who was not interested in him at all. She loved Raj and married him only to save Shiela. Their marriage was a business deal and somewhere down the lane, he was the one who was stupid to fall in love with her. She never showed any interest in him and only saw him as Abhi's dad. Never had he experienced a feeling so sweet; and when he discovered that she was ready to leave him and his son for her own selfish means, it was like a bucket of ice water splashed on his face.

And that was exactly the thought that flashed across his mind when their lips were about to meet. It disgusted him to the core to have lost control and touched her; so his immediate thought was to put some distance between them. He thought he saw pain and confusion reflect in her eyes when he pushed her away. Her eyes shimmered with tears and he did not want to drown in those pools and get fooled again. She really looked hurt and was wondering what kind of game she was playing now. He had to think straight and would be unable do it in her presence; so he strode out of the room in a hurry without looking back.

He was introspecting things when his phone buzzed and he strode to the living room to take the call.

Sarita tried her best to look calm and controlled. She needed to do this for Abhiman. She could not risk Abhi sensing any kind of tension between his parents. So she straightened her back and proceeded towards his bedroom. She heard Mr.Suryavanshi speaking over the phone in the living room, but did not risk looking at him right now. Her emotions were still raw and she did not want to end up crying in their son's presence. She squared her shoulders and went to check on Abhi.

As she entered she saw Abhiman struggling to tie his nada. He had a small pout on his face at being unsuccessful and immediately all of Sarita's anguish flew out the window. Her face brightened with a smile looking at her cute son. She came to stand in front of him and crouched down to sit on her heels. She took the nada from his hands and tied it for him. Abhi hugged her immediately and whispered, "Oh, thank you so much, Mama!"

As her throat was clogged with emotions and she could not form any words, she just squeezed him back tightly. She stood up and said,"Come on, my darling prince. Let's go. You know that your father does not like to be kept waiting, right?"

Abhiman nodded his head and zoomed out of the room. She stood back for a minute and dabbed at the corners of her eyes with a kerchief and left the room.

Vikrant was still on the phone when Sarita walked down the stairs. She was dressed in a purple sheer sari and the golden blouse that she wore with it had a deep neckline. She pinned her hair in such a manner that it left her delicate neck and smooth back exposed. She looked elegant and stunning. He had to drag his eyes away from her to answer the caller. And before he did that he took a moment to notice her face. It was devoid of any emotion and that confirmed his suspicion that she was unaffected by what happened upstairs. He did not understand why; but that hurt a lot. He blocked that thought and continued speaking over the phone for some more time, pacing the length of the hall.

She noted that he was busy with some office call and was closing his other ear to block out the noise created by Abhi. She walked towards Abhi and asked him to play outside. He immediately stopped his car, nodded his head and rushed outside. Vikrant turned around to see this exchange. And got reminded of the reason he fell for her in the first place; the abundance of love and affection she showered on his son, the values she was inculcating in him, the confidence and support she provided him and most of all the silent strength she exhibited in times of trouble. Now he wondered if it was all just an act.

Was she really two-faced or was he assuming things about her, he deliberated. She did want to speak with him about something this morning, did she not? He realized that he wanted to get answers from her and he would get it, once they were back from the wedding. He needed to put an end to this once and for all, for his own sanity.

For now he had to keep up pretences as they were attending a social gathering. So thinking he called out her name, "Sarita!"

She looked up eagerly when she heard her name on his lips. Did he want to talk about what happened a little earlier, she wondered. And her hopes were dashed when he asked, "Shall we leave?"

She nodded her head and said, "Sure" and started walking towards the entrance. Did he sense disappointment in her voice? He speculated. He shook his head to shrug the thought from his mind and proceeded to follow her outside.

To be continued...

I was not personally satisfied with this chapter, guys! Sorry if I disappointed you!

Edited by wupa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Again a wonderful updatešŸ‘ Hope they talk things out soon.Oh I forgot that someone taped Mr. Akdu's emotional outburst and him with the gunšŸ˜•

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