Fortress around the heart~ViSa and RaVya FF~Part 36 updated pg 68

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Posted: 11 years ago

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What a great way to start my day. Will be back later!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey di.. Hyiiee 😊
Part-1 hailaaa ye kya chota sa Part h.. padhna shuru hi kiya tha ki Khatam ho gaya.. nicely described Didu... 😊

Part-2 Grrr i want to punch u sooo tight for dis chotu sa update.. Hadd h 😲 ye kya ho rha h... 😭 Ufff ye mr. Akdu... 😕

Part-3 Gossshhh it was Awsssmmm...haaaye kya kahun? ye Raj ki Ander-bahar ki baatein sunsun k mera dil Garden garden ho gaya... 😆 loved d way u portrayed raj's dillemma.. Lovelllyyy yayyy its just awssmmm *clap clap*

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part-4 Hailaaa itna long Uppii ki Padhte padhte meko Pasina aa gaya... 🥱
Omg Ye kya thaa??????????? idher raj bichara cnfusion ki dukaan bana hua h, sarita dukhi, viki Baba angry young man, abhi my innocent baby aur ye rohan ki mummy jiii vamps ki Maharaniii... ye kya ho rha h bhaiya ye kya ho rha h.. 😕 Vaise na vaise na itsss simply amazingg... d way u wrote evythng is juzzz Superbbb.. fir se clap Maarne ka mann kr rha h 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part-5 Ye Inner voice kamaal ki hoti h na vaise... mere ander se toh aati hi nai... 😛 Hailaaa JAI HO MAATE 👍🏼 Woaaahhh wht an Uppiii.. full on Dhamakaaa ... Raj ji ki Inner voice aur Sarita ji Ki outer voice ne Unko Line pe laa diya. 😆 Loved it...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part-6 Fir se Chotu sa Update... Grrr... ufff ye vikrant.. Suna sunaya kuch nai, faaltu ka gussa krke apna dimag khraab Karring... 😡 Vaise lovely shovely update... 😎 Bandukkk ne daraya per apki update ne Bacchaya.. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part-7 Ye Kyaaa???? Raj se shaadi krring but for family's sake... Pyar Knha Udd Gaya... 😕 She is Sooo Hurt Yaa... 😭

Part-8 Mr. Akduuu 😭 😭

Part-9 Didiii Haaaye love you jiii... Sacchhi muchhii.. waaahh waaahhh .. dnt knw aage kya kahun? d way u portrayed evry1's feeling is juzzz superbbb...tussii great ho jiii

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part-10 Full of Ravya's ...Gossshhh it was amazinggg... Divya's outburst 😭 loved it didiii... *clap clap* 👏 10 Saal ka saara pain ek hi baar m nikal diyaaa... bichara raj 😆 Band baja diii 😉 whr is visaa??? 😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ufff 3 more to read...kuch Khaaa lun pehle.. tummyyy m chuhe machaaying halla 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
wonderful update Pallavi👏loved reading every bit of it
This is not fair kab tak mere Akdu aur unki Mrs.chapar chapar ko tadpavogi😭Kab mere Akduji apne glasses pehenkar closet mein rakehuye papers dekenge😡

Thanks Again for sharing a wonderful work

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Thank you Nandini! I promise you will see akdu and chapad chapad's dilemma more in the upcoming chapters, dear!

You are welcome, my dear! And thank you for providing me the inspiration to write them! 😃