ARHI OS: The Price of Happiness

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deepa

@deeps_92

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Posted: 11 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

me:)

Will edit my comment soon:)

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OMG this is so beautiful. I wasn't actually mad at Khushi when she behave in such a way initially, we cannot understand anyone's plight until and unless we actually face the similar circumstances. Although morally, I think she should have not done that still I won't judge her.

Coming to Arnav, I loved his characterization, he was sensible and never lost hope. That was needed the most in their situation. I am glad that he did the same what Khushi did when they lost their parent.

Khushi changed gradually, she loved Arush too. That made me so happy. You cannot remain angry with kids, can you?😃 Arush made his Mommy fall in love with him, absolutely adorable. I loved the way ASR got the insinuation of Khushi's care for Arush, the milk thing. She cared, cared a lot. The best thing was Arush praying, that was so adorable and he pointed to Khushi, when Arnav asked about who taught him this😆

When Arnav saw them together, he must have felt so nice😃

You are absolutely correct, they never forget Arushi, neither did their love for her get reduced, it is just that they accepted their loss. A very well written story Deeps.

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bhaniv

@bhaniv

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Babies are so adorable! So innocent and their unconditional love is what draws u to them!

Loved this OS, though u made me cry...

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow, this is yours.. Had really loved it.. In fact got so emotional reading this one..How they lost their child and then Khushi and she accepting Ayush.. The way Khushi tells Ayush that he is reporting her to Arnav.. Just so cute.. I so wanted this OS to win and Im glad it did.. Congrats once again...

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi congrats for winning the most popular os. This is superb.

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deepa

@deeps_92

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bhaniv
Babies are so adorable! So innocent and their unconditional love is what draws u to them!

Loved this OS, though u made me cry...

so true...babies are the most adorable creatures on the earth 😃

ps: sorry for making u cry

Originally posted by: mishti_17
Wow, this is yours.. Had really loved it.. In fact got so emotional reading this one..How they lost their child and then Khushi and she accepting Ayush.. The way Khushi tells Ayush that he is reporting her to Arnav.. Just so cute.. I so wanted this OS to win and Im glad it did.. Congrats once again...

thank u so much dear...glad u loved it so much😃

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Shraya Biswas

@ShrayaBiswas

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

This was one of my most favorites of the entries in the contest..! Arshi as parents has always attracted me! I loved this OS! Arnav-Khushi's interaction with the baby was beautifully written! Everything about this OS was beautiful..! Please write more OSs! :D