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Posted: 11 years ago
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BUSES, MONSOON & DIMPLES
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Part II

"Yeah now tell me abbu..." Zaara said wiping off her hands on her jeans. Asad just rolled his eyes and motioned her to settle herself down on the sofa. They both plopped down on the sofa. "Now can you please continue your LOVE story? I am all ears". Zaara said being all excited about it. "So where was I?" Asad asked just to irritate her. "Abbu!!" "Okay okay!"

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"I am not taking your help...I will go on my own..." saying so she began to walk only to be stopped by Asad. "Where will you go and how? You don't know anyone here. Do you?" Asad asked. Her lips made the perfect pout. Is she planning to kill me with her cuteness?' Asad chuckled at his own joke. "Ermm...I will come with you but there's one condition- You won't irritate me like you used to when we were in Bhopal" She said. "Oh don't worry about that, now we are adults...I won't irritate you like I used to."Asad said. She breathed a sigh of relief. "I promise you I will irritate you more than that." He said with the smirk. For the first time Zoya found herself melting seeing his sexy smirk. What is happening with me? Why am I thinking about his sexy smirk? SEXY? Ya Allah. Save me.' She came out of her thoughts and realized what he just said and starting hitting him. "So you will irritate me- Zoya Farooqui. You don't know Asad Ahmed Khan; I am not that stupid, innocent Zoya who used to easily believe in what people say. Understand? So let's go". "Yeah we will go, but firstly can you leave my hand?" He said looking at their hands intertwined. She looked at him sheepishly and answered "Actually, these Mumbai roads are very dangerous. People drive very fast here. I cannot cope up with the speed. So can I please hold your hand till the time we reach the car?" Asad nodded. For people there, Asad and Zoya were just a couple so much in love who refused to leave each other's hand even in public.

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"So, how's everything going? I mean how is phupi and Najma? I haven't seen them since you all left for Mumbai 10 years back." She asked about him. He was glad she remembered. "Yeah Ammi is fine and Najma got married here a month back." "Hawww...how could she do this to me? She didn't even inform me about it. I am never gonna talk to her." "Yeah yeah...we will think about that later...if you remember we have to reach home...Zeenat aapi must be getting worried." "So yeah tell me what do you do these days?" "Uhmm...I am an architect!" "You tell me about you". She got all excited and said "I am actually searching for a job here in Mumbai itself. I am specialized in computers." "Hmm nice...so it seems today was your first day looking for jobs?" "She nodded. Soon they reached their car and saw the driver waiting for them. They entered the car. Asad was sitting in the front with the Driver and Zoya on the backseat.

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They reached the Farooqui mansion and Zoya saw Anwar Jiju and Zeenat aapi waiting for her nervously. She went and Asad followed her. Aapi hugged Zoya and made sure she was fine. Jiju saw Asad standing back. He called out to him. "You brought Zoya here? Thanks Asad. Come we will have dinner together." Anwar said. Everyone walked in. Zeenat aapi served everyone. Zoya still was thinking about something. Asad noticed that and asked her "Hey Zoe, what are you thinking?" "It's nothing...I was just thinkin...YES now I remember. I used to call you DROWSY. Whenever I used to come to your house, I always used to see you sleeping on the Sofa." She grinned and appreciated her memory mentally. "Oh really? You remember I used to call you FATTY! Hell yeah. I remember." He smirked. "You were always munching on something or the other." He chuckled. Zoya's face formed a perfect O'. She picked the knife from the table and was going to throw it at him when aapi spoke in between. "Bas, bas, bas PEACE ...enough you two...now no more talking till we finish dinner. Then the dinner was a silent affair with Zoya throwing super annoyed looks at me.

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After the dinner, I took their leave and headed to my car. It was raining. I had a feeling that something is incomplete. But what I didn't know. I climbed the pipe somehow slipping because of the rain and reached her room's window and entered the room through it. She came out of the washroom after changing into her pajama and saw me. She was going to scream. I ran towards her and kept one hand on her mouth to sush her and with the other I pushed her against the wardrobe. Her eyes wide open with shock, seemed to shout at me. I told her to calm down. "Look FATTY, I am going to remove my hand at the count of three, promise me you won't shout and wake up Aapi and Bhaijaan. Okay?". She nodded. "1, 2, 3...". "Why have you come here? In my room? What if anybody sees you here with me? What will aapi and jiju think? Don't you have manners? Just get out fro..." Asad closed the gap between their lips. He had to do something to shut her up. Blabbering queen. Shouting at the top of her voice. She responded to his kiss with full passion. Her one hand in his hair pulling him closer and her other hand roamed around his back. This was one hell of a passionate kiss they shared.

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After sometime they heard a knock on the door. They parted. "Zoya baby, what happened why were you shouting like that? Is there something wrong?" they heard aapi and jiju behind the door. Immediately Zoya responded "No aapi...everything is per...perfectly fine...You...you don't need to worry...Go and sleep." "Okay baby, if you need anything just tell us." They went. "What the hell did you do? And why?" He came near her and his hands near her cheek. "SMILE" He said. For a second she was confused but did as he said. She smiled showing him her dimples. He touched the dimple with his hands, pecked on her lips yet again and said "Now it seems complete" and went without answering her questions." Zoya could not believe what just happened. Her first kiss was not how she had imagined. Not at all like this. She went near the window to take a last glimpse of him. She saw his car disappearing from her sight. She extended her hand to feel the rain and remembered their KISS. "Am I falling in love?" Zoya thought to herself.

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"What? You used to call Ammi FATTY and Ammi had her first kiss when she was in her Pajamas?" Zaara laughed imagining the scenario. And then they heard a voice "KISS? Asad what is she talking about?" "Oops, I am in huge trouble. I was not allowed to share the KISS part with anyone. Asad, be ready for some drama." He said and swallowed the lump in his throat. "Zaara baby, tell me what did your abbu share with you? Won't you tell me?" Zoya asked...

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Part I : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96137497

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A/N : Hey peeps !! Here's the PART II. This is utter crap I know🤔...But I had to post it to destress myself from exams. I hope you all like it because it didn't turn out to be like what I wanted. But yeah here's the update. I don't know yet whether it will be a TS or more than that😕. Thank you guys for the amazing comments😃. I love reading them. Feel free to give any kind of feedback, And yeah for PMs buddy me. If you like it then do hit the button.

Much love❤️

-San🤗

Edited by -SB- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
wow sanika...u rocked dear!!!
such a beautiful start!!!
i loved their chemistry...
idiot zoe !!! will go object my own...seriously !!!
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great udapte , very nice continue soon please 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi sweety pie, i am sorry i haven't commented on the first part. i read the first part while i was in office and i couldnt get a chance to comment and later i forgot😛 now here i am to comment. kiss at first meeting?😉😆 not bad Asad😆 well, technically it is not their first meeting😆 but anyways i loved it.
Oho. looks like Asad is in trouble😆 he is not supposed to share the kiss part with anyone and he shared it with his little daughter🤣 waiting to see Zoya's reaction😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
nice...😊 pls continue soon..😊

Gulaabo thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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for the second part...seriously asad shared the kiss part with his daughter !!! hahaaa...i hope he'll be alive in the next update !!!
continue soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

wow sanika...u rocked dear!!!
such a beautiful start!!!
i loved their chemistry...
idiot zoe !!! will go object my own...seriously !!!
continue soon!!!


Thank you..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akaswan

Great udapte , very nice continue soon please 😃


THANKS😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Hey this is nt crap...
Awesum part.. Haha asad is in trouble nw...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG !!
You are so good buddy
I loved the whole update and felt like it was too short 😆
I loved it how he told her to smile after their first kiss
and the daughter-father convo is so cute !!
I am loving it continue sooon

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