INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Damn Khushi's story is so sad

The way you describe everything is amazing

At least Arnav has a Nani in his life

Even tho he took the classes and what not I don't think it helped him

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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Another amazing update, so khushi is clean!!!!

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

A Khushi that ended up marrying Shyam. This is a first! It is a difficult story to read and the next chapter appears to take Khushi down even lower. Is it too late for Arnav to save her? I really hope not.

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Omg!

I knew it khushi was inocent

Poor girl!

Arnav need to make great amends!

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Oh Jenny...please let Khushi have her happiness! Sucide attempts? I am so glad Arnav now knows, but the damage he did to Khushi through his words is immeasurable...

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Atyay

@Atyay

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

So Arnav finally learns the truth the hard way, I really hope he recieves Khushi forgiveness the hard way as well. Why didn't he ever check her background and all such facts that were presented to him when he was investigating...

Anyways, brilliant update. 👏

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IPK007

@IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

What a perfect ending to this tale. Just goes to show that people find love (even they don't recognise it as that particular emotion) in the most unexpected ways and places.

Firstly, I would like to commend you on the chapter titles in this story Jen. They speak volumes, even before reading the chapter. Simply perfect. Hence it's no surprise that this chapter - Floodgates tells us the impending eruption that Khushi would have that would inevitably lead to Arnav opening up the heart he had kept imprisoned for the longest time.

You portrayed Khushi's distress over her living conditions, her hopelessness because she had taken Arnav's harsh words calling her a s**t to heart and her anger brilliantly. The way she screamed, pushed, spoke sarcastically and finally walked away from him was painful but great.

Her disgust over his reasons for coming to her was so evident.

Coming to Arnav...how do you salvage a mistake like the one he committed with Khushi. I loved the way he kept on despite multiple rebuttals from her. Shows the man's strength of character. When he is wrong, he owns up. He wants her happiness. he wants her but doesn't believe he can give her happiness. Such is his poor self-esteem due to the murder he had committed. He wanted to die..I feel terrible.

These two deserve happiness and if there's anyone who can thaw him out of that misery, it is only Khushi.

I loved the way you wrote the last part jen. The way she talks to herself about how he gave up, the way she runs to him and clings to him and finally reassures him that all mistakes need to be forgiven and last but no the least...the way she tells him that she likes him a lot. Gave me goosebumps.

May I say, romance is your genre. Continue writing it. Incorporate it into whatever you write because you really do have a flair for it.

I would like to end this comment with Arnav's smile. What a smile? I could see it and he more than anyone needed and deserved that smile. 😃

Good Luck Jen. Love and hugs🤗

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Hey I was here to comment on chapter 7 but you shocked me that next will be last one. I am sad already don't know how long your holidays will be. But it's ok because it's needed. But do come back, take what ever time you want. Going to miss you badly.

Coming to chapter it was fantastic. It's good that arnav is thinking about her, that he should have find out about her first. Some where he is feeling guilty .

And after talking to that officer he is more guilty of his action.

I was also thing same as what that officer said about Khushi. Poor girl had suffered a lot in two years and now she is beyond repair by what arnav did with her. She must be badly shattered.

By the precap we can understand what she might be doing. She is trying to do what arnav had told her at the last moment.

I am about to cry without reading next update, thinking about Khushi's condition. In precap she said right thing to arnav, why is he bothered now.

All your stories are unique and different. Written fantastically. Going to miss them a lot.

Thanks for updating and pm in advance.

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#350

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Hmm you seem to be in a hurry for your break 😉 (Now I know why after reading your note 😲)

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First of all 🤗 for this would be your last update until you are back and the closure for Arnav & Khushi!! Glad Arnav realized his mistakes and made an effort to redeem before it was too late. Before Khush fell into the bottomless pit. Although the confrontation was painful & Khushi hurt Arnav, it was needed to be out so they could start afresh. Both are scarred and only they could heal each other!!

The ending part in the apartment where Khushi tells him to go away but then looks for him in the morning brought goosebumps!! Arnav could see her true person behind the facade and hence never left isn't it? And he finally smiled!! 😊

The chapter title is so apt (infact all of them were)!!

Can we have a small Epilogue where both of them are married and living in RM?? pretty please?? Is it asking for too much 🥺

Know your AD is calling you but we will miss you Jenny 💔

Take care and come back soon 🤗

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago