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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ratibob007

Fabulous, amazing update.

Loved it.
I have waited for it for so long,but it is worth waiting.
Thanks for the pm.




thanksa lot dear
glad u loved and enjoyed it

sorry abt the wait thing cant do anything i only write whn i really feel like
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Woww lovely update...full on MR N MRS SHARMA ❤️
Beautiful warm mornings .. seriously its look like dream acha h akela rah rha h dono kise k nazar na lg jai ina...
8 months ho b gyi abi b lg rha h pehla week h shadi ka goshh kitna romantic h Mr sharma..
Hmm so mayur wapis a rha h..waiting for nupur n mayank mom scene..I know wo bohat pasand kara ge osa.. 😊
But mayank dad is hd tk ja skta h.ayank na jo kaha me soch b nhi skti thi .. 🤢
Waiting for next part n plzz make it more romantic plishhh
Continue soon
Love u janu api 🤗



glad u liked it thanku
han bus ab jaldi jaldi time jay ga bus...

few chapter remaing to wind up the ff...
there is just one thing after this update tht i want to focous on
will update soon
it wont b romantic to much
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Posted: 11 years ago


thanksa lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GauriLuvsRP

Nice n lovely upate Fiza😊

Both are naughty n romantic...😳
Oh God his dad 😲




thanks alot dear
gald u liked it


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sara92.

fantastic update
Do cont soon




thanks alot dear
will do soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayan-

wonderful update
loved mayur scene
beautiful




thanksa lot
glad u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago



thanku so much

Originally posted by: Pia-

loved ti totally
Do cont




thanksa lot
will do soo soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Shocked u must be... mjhy yaad hai k im writng an no actually three stories... There was a time I use to updated thrice a week n now... sigh... cant help...

Have rplied to u all...

I know not upto mark, I have to add this part and the next to show the family influences too I cant just omit it... I kknow this chapter seems to bhi kyunki saas bhi khabi bahu thi types... next will close the newyork trip.. more or less 3 chapters left in this ff.. and I will try to close this one before newyear... Hopefully

About MJHT Season2 I have done it half way will do it soon...

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Chapter: 31

It seems to be like back to square one.. but than it doesn't feel so... Newyork was never a place where she rome round, shop enjoy or anything it was always about just living till ur breathing... But today whn she step outside the door of her private plan she felt like sum princes as her hand slips in his.. she feel the air of the same city wch has taken evyhting from her so much pleasant... it is the same city wch has given him to her... And today she has nothing to be ashmed of rather she is proud of her luck and her life...

She is abit nervous still yes she is more to the fact that mayank said they are not going home they will b going to his suite ..the same where the meet frst time... to one side she is really glad to be there again.. yet to other side she knew she has taken mayanks home from him...

Nupur: why not we just go to ur home for sum moment... I mean I will stay out or u drop urslef there n I will cont to our place...

Mayank: nopes... frst things is tht I want us to go to OUR place as u said.. it feels strange nah.. strange kind of joy in it...

Nupur: hmm so ture... she said resting her head on his shoulder...

Mayank: and two I will go home alone... I donot whn the unpleanties to welcum u... if they want to meet its oky...no tu we will see them in party..

Nupur: u sure it will b oky to be

Mayank: nupur we have discus this a lot and I seriously donot want any more discuions on it... Bus... see here we are at OUR place... u remember u have sum un finished business here...

He said pulling her insdie elevator...

Nupur: wht ..

Mayank: hoo ... u remebr last time u came there to serve a prupose ...

Nupur: mayankkk... ur such a ...

Mayank: im such a ya... n I love to be suchaa...

...

Samrat: bhai .. hi great to see u home...

Mayank: hi sam... how is everyone... Hi mom..

He bow down to touch her feed and she looked back at him thinking he came alone?

Mayank looked back to her and did read the question

Mayank: I didn't brought nupur with me... didn't knew she is allowed or not... didn't want any one insulting her...

Gunjan: than u should knowing the fact she has her right to be here...

They look back at the door and mayank look a bit angry towards gunjan and nupur who were at the door...

Gunjan: donot give her tht look I lied to her and brought her here... common nupur...

Samrat: hi nupur...

Nupur was hell worried when she read the board at the door... and now she feels she is not at all can do tht... adding to the fact th mayank donot appreciate this... plus the way his mom was looking at her... though she was decently dressed..

She placed her flicks behind her ears and said a nervous hi to samrat... with a forced smile... and than she looked at mayank hoping he knows tht she didn't did it...

Mayank sigh and than ask her to cum in and she looked at his mom and than slowly came in...

She joined her hands and than bow down to touch her feets to her luck if she didn't said anything she even didn't moved away...

Samrat: welcum home nupur...

Mayank: are we...

MM: sharma's never say no to the guest.. I will ask the servants to serve food... u might b hungry...

Maynk: ya sure..

Nupur: thanku.. she said with being really thankful

And she just noded her head and moved in... yet nupur smiled... Not bad start ... really not bad...

She left and thn nupur turned to mayank

Nupur: I am sorry I didn't...

Mayank: its oky... I just wanted to talk to her frst ...

Nupur: I think u should do tht ...

Samrat: no tht can wait... but frst u need to have a look at ur in laws house and specially bros room... so whts say bro..

Mayank: better idea... And gunjan.. I will see u

Gunjan: oh im so scared... go go have fun I have to tell servants lunch has to wait...for sum hrs or u need more..

Nupur: gunjannn... I m just cuming few mins...

Gunjan: we will see ut time starts now...

...

The luch was served and eaten in silence just with sum fun added by gunjan n samrat... they can sense the tension all around and mayank knew he has to talk to clear it soonish..

...

Mayank: may cum in mom...

MM: sure u can...

He came and sat beside her...

MM: how r u

Mayank: how do I look ...

MM: how long ur gonna stay

Mayank: are u still angry on me...

MM: no im not.. I think I have lost the right to b...

Mayank: mom plss... it has been 8 months... I really love her so she does... doesn't u feel I m happy with her... mom I just want u to give her one chance...atleast accept her as my wife if not as ur daughter in law...

MM: mayank I haven't threw her out of my house...

Mayank: and ur not going to do tht.. I know thn just be oky with it... Mom she is part of life...

MM: mayank ur father will never like her here...

Mayank: tht doesn't matters... Wht matters is tht u r oky with me n her living her for sumtimes or nt.. If not..

MM: its oky... u can I donot want to sound sum evil mom...

Mayank: ur not n u know tht... btw thanks for tiara ..it really meant a lot to us tht day.. thanks..

She wasn't to oky with mayank being with nupur yet she cant deny tht she was happy to see her son after 8 long months... and sumwhere she was more happy to see the mayank she wanted to... content and at peace... but she was still afraid of the fact tht nupur might cause him damage .. and tht pain he will go through she doesn't want it to happen..

MM: it will b better for u both if u leave in the nite and cum in the morning... I donot think so u will like to see ur father .. nor he will like to see her ...

...

Nupur: wht happen. Mom is angry

He lyed down in her lap and smiled at her...

Mayank: nopes.. she is I think err mm

Nupur: scared...

Mayank: mayb...

Nupur: tht I will hurt u ...

Mayank: hmm... but one thing she said right we should leave in the evening I donot want dad to create a fuz or insult u...

Nupur: no we should not

Mayank: nupur u donot understand

Nupur: frst hear me out... Mayank u might didn't saw but the smile on ur moms face whn u bow down was so amzing and she was so happy to see u here... u know she already araanged ur favt on lunch... she is happy to have her son after 8 months.. don't take it away from here... Whn ur dad will cum I will not stepout of the room.. shh... its oky.. we here for 1 wk... u can give these seven days to her.. pls... I owe tht much to her atleast who has given me u..

Mayank: u know I love u so much... And this was sumthig I want mom to see... wht makes me love u so so so much...

Nupur: ur such a flirt u know tht

Mayank: oye im pretty serious ma'am

Nupur: n I love u

Mayank: sigh tht is the issue u know... I too love u

They both chukled... and there almost kiss was disturbed by a knock

Mayank: who the hell is spoiling are so few gotten romantic moment ... ignore

Nupur: mayank... she hitted on his shoulder... very few ya ya.. get up n go... go

He with a irritating expression on his face open the door... wch turns into smile

Mayank: mom... cum in..

MM: no its oky

Mayank: cum on mom cum in pls...

Nupur hurriedly got up and mayank dragged her in and make her sit... He sat on his knees near his mom and nupur stod inside not knowing to went out or to stay... as now she cant go out and staying in might just wont let them talk ...so she thought the balcony is perfect... she was abt to open the door..

Mayank: stay nupur

Nupur; no its

MM: its oky... I have just came to ask whn are u leaving... So I shall serve the dinner

Mayank: mom actually we r not leaving...

MM: mayank u know everything even thn... are u trying to make a fuse at home... she looked at nupur in an accusing manner ...

Wch made her bow down her head

Mayank: listen to me frst... actually nupur came up with an idea tht she will stay in the room will not step out in dad's home hrs and we will get sum more time together...

MM: or she is afraid tht if u leave her at hotel I might b able to snatch her away

Nupur: no mo... I mean MRs. Sharma .. I donot mean tht ... I can go to hotel its now issue

Mayank: than I will b leaving with her too mom... u need to understand this very clearly

Nupur; mayank

Mayank: no ... not a word nupur ... Mom u need to get it... nupur n I are not two people... she is my wife the person on whom my evry being depends... im gonna be there where she will be... it was she who was asking me to stay here so tht u get sumtime to spend with me... but if u think all such rubbish and ur not on any cause ready to give her chance its better we both leave to hotel

MM: I didn't said any such thing ... ur making an issue...

Mayank: I m making an issue.. ur making an issue... I nevr ever oppose ur any desicon... even the dam descion of having esha in my life...but u whom I thought will be the frst person I will share my happiness whn I proposed nupur... u were the person whom I loved so much and always looked up to... u actually told me ur really wife of Mr Sharma...

MM: mayank

Mayank: who cnat think or see a person beyond the tag... thn wht happened today ... she is Nupur Mayank Sharma... now see her as my wife... and respect her...stop accusing her like sum Indian old mother in law... Mom I will not tolerate any indecency or disrespect to my wife

Nupur: mayankk pls

Mayank: not a word I said nupur... mom u have to get out of tht world of urs were she is here to spoil me or break me or hurt me... cause she was the only person whn I was broken ashamed and was nothing but losser came in my life, hold me, taught me, made me believed tht I need to b proud of myself... tht im sumone worth living and she made my life worth living... When nobody was there not even u ever came to me n said son ur n were right... U too accused me than...she was.. Im not blaming or taking any revenge for than now... Im just putting facts on u... u donot get to judge nupur...whn ur living with ur husband without any issues...

We will be leaving in few mins no need of dinner... im not hungry at all... thanku

He stod up and faced his back to his mom... he was really hurt about wht she said and wht she believed and sumwehre with the fact she still donot trust him n his love... She cant do this for even him... silence was there in the room nupur was helplessly standing in farthest corner... mayank was really hurt abt all the nonsense ... and his mom was in deep thoughts sumhwere he touch the cords ... sumwhere he showed her such facts tht she never want to .. nor she ever thought tht in all this ... even whn it was at time of esha and now... mayank is being pulled here n there...

She with slow step she went to the door, and stood there to collect her courage

MM: I didn't knew tht u have been in tug of war among us... I m not judging ur wife... I was just putting fact... I think it better I should stop giving my POV on her n on ur life... n I will

Nupur: pls... I really donot mean any harm to him or ur family... plss its just a weak u both are here.. pls donot spoil tht

MM: u can stay here as along as u want to ... but be really careful about other things...

She left and mayank sat on the bed ... and nupur went to him and hold her

Nupur: mayank... pls donot make things more issue here thn already are... pls...

Mayank: I donot want to nupur... but its height I just cant hold it anymore...

Nupur: pls.. make it with mom... I will try n make it with her too... no...n ur not gonna cum between us...i did handle with Samrat na

Mayank: hm...

Nupur: tu .. I will do this with her too...

Mayank: are u sure

Nupur: yes.. be sure about me... Oky... I will take care of it

Mayank: be careful oky...

Nupur: u be carful... Oky.. with ur words..and this anger... Ur such a patient person thn wht gets in u... relax...

Mayank: oky...

Nupur: now go n tell mom tht ur having dinner.. I will have it in room... no arguments no way... N specify her go...

Mayank: he moved forward and kissed her forehead... Im blessed

Nupur: the feeling is mutual... she said with a nautghy glint... and pecked his lips,.. now go

Mayank: lay how I will now.. he leaned more to her and she pushed her and he chukled and left...

He went to the kitchen to find her mom.. almost asking winding up the dinner... as she was not too in mood to eat

Mayank: mom... aren't u serving dinner...

MM: u said u were not hungry

He sigh and went near her...

Mayank: im sorry mom... but pls for once try n understand me... pls.. im not worng

MM: hmm... N im sorry for being absent whn u might need us..

He smiled... and hugged her..

MM: I cant promise to accept her like I do gunjan

Mayank: I understand I just want u to be oky with her... Can I have dinner now im really hungry

MM: sure ... call everyone I will ask servants to serve...

He knew she means nupur ...

Mayank: nupur will have in her room... dad will be around anytime...

...

After dinner the most avoided thing happened was Mayank's father arrived ...

MF: oh I m glad that Mr Mayank Sharma graced us honor of vist.. wht happened ur wife ditched you after taking all your money...

Mayank: he smirk... Ah I m sorry Mr. Sharma... disappointment u will always get at this matter.. why I m here and wht I m doing I think u should not be bother... I am heir of this house ur wife's son... I can cum n go whenever I wish to...

MF: I think I made u clear tht day not to step in my house our...

Mayank: and I think I made clear to u tht im here in my mom's house, as per legal documentation of my grandfather I m 35% share holder of everything... I think u will never want me to claim tht... Anyways.. have a good nite... Mom im off to bed a bit tired...

His mom was really surprised to see him tth confident.. speaking with tht indifference to his father, he has always been escaper when it cums to facing sumthing harsh.. but this time tht mayank who has arrived home, is much more stronger and has all the ability to face anything cuming up... And to fight back too...

...

Edited by drfizaahmed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lodss
sryyy to unress it after so long
bt m glad with the current situation n how things turned out
n m sooo glad the way Mayank answered back to that old jerk 😛
n abt Mayank's mom somewhere i kinda dont like her as i feel like she does not take her stand as always talks as The wife of that old Sharma 😛
bt atleast she was ok with Nupur..
bt i didn't like Nupur having dinner in their room though
missed Gunjan-Samrat part here
bt hoping soon things from Mayank's mom side will get better
loved it lodsss
love u lods API 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 11 years ago

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