MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 86

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angle.

IT WAS AWESOME UPDATE
LOVED IT




thanku so much dear

Originally posted by: -Meri-

fantastic update
Do update next part





thanku so much for ur love




thanksa lot dear



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pia-

mayur were so adorable
loved the way mayur replied to Esha



thanksa lot dear
glad u enjoyed it


Originally posted by: ratibob007

Amazing,fantastic update.

It came after a very long time .
Its worth waiting.
Thanks for the pm.




thanku so much dear
glad u liked it



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Amazing update...just to good api...simply beautiful
Mayur scene to kiya bolo bohat bohat he pyara tha..dono naughty h..cute ..funny..romantic..emotional..ek dam perfect h
N their scene with esha..I just loved it the way mayank rply her..os bandariya ka sath aisa he hna chahiya tha..maza a gaya mujhe..
N plz janu api next update me mayur ka zada wala romantic part likhna plishh..jaldi jaldi update b dna
Love u ..tc..
Allah hafiz



thanku so much dear
glad u liked it..
yeah wala ff tu ny late read kiya ... kyunn..
han sab ko band bajany k maza aya

next will not be too romanitc part... us k baad wala i will try as mein ny likha nhi abhi tu i will add sum romance

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for ur love.. rplyed to u all

Chapter: 30

It has been 3 months from than in total almost 8 months to their wedding, he has been back to work..routine of life has started and people are now into a new character sketch... ur confused let's take u inside the Sharma Seattle mansion... another correct we have to make.. There has been change of name.. Nupur Mayank Home... the word mansion doesn't have woh wali feel... as per MR Sharma...

It was 7 in the morning and it was chilling outside... the two souls were completely entangled with eachother basking in the warmth in such cold weather... and there was aloud sound... nah nothing to worry about it was alarm clock tht started to rung...

One of them tries to move knowing its time to wake up... yet other pulled more close and throwing a pillow on the clock making it land on the floor... it's the 25th one tht breath its last today..poor soul..

Nupur: mayank wakeup..

If u were thinking it was nupur who threw the pillow darlings ur mistaken... its mayank Sharma who these days is hating the thought of leaving his wife, his home, his bed...

Mayank: 5 mins...

Nupur: mayank... sweety she said ruffling his hair who was pouting ... its already 7:10 u have a meeting with my father in law... isn't it right

Mayank: so...he said annoyingly

Nupur: tht so at 8:15

Mayank: I give a dam.. he can wait.. he said snuggling more close to her... its dam cold out side...

Nupur: so... u live in a centrally heated house... and so is ur car and ur office... get up at once...

Mayank: donot u think as time is passing ur getting ways to make me go away from u..

Nupur: aha ... this sint working this time... okay u cant emotionally black mail... mayank ur worse than a kid..

Mayank: wht

Nupur: ya seems like a kid is wincing for going to skool...

Mayank: and ur a wicked mom... im tired wana sleep whole day..

This was true sumhow .. he has been working day n nite from past week and hardly getting anytime for her n himself...

Nupur: she kissed his froehed and caressed his hairs...aww I know.. and I miss u..

That did made him raise his head to look into her eyes... he cradle her face and caress her cheek with his thumb..leaning to make her know he missed her too...

Mayank: I miss u too... but no issues.. one day left from this project and all... ur father-in-law will be gone from here thank god...

Nupur: mayankkk

Mayank: and then we will have along vacation..

Nupur: how mazing... u work 6 months and than along vacation... Sharma emperor is shuting down I m telling u... my babies will b poor...

Mayank: oh hello ma'am..even if I donot work we have so much in the name of investments tht they and our grand children n grand grand children.. can live happily everafter... huh...

Nupur: okay now move grand pa... u have work to do...

Mayank: im telling granny ur so unromantic... wht we are going to tell our grand children in the name of our lovestroy... just think

Nupur: ya ya... reserve ur romance for work after...

Mayank: just wait n watch .. im cuming home on time today... I will see how u save urself...

Nupur: sigh.. she encircle her arms around his neck...moving her finger seductively from his forhead to chin... kaun kambhakt bachana chahta hai...

Mayank: aaah... thts mean... tempting ur husband knowing he has to leave...

Nupur: nah darling tht is called playing safe...

Mayank: we will see.. he kissed her sharply and went off to bed...

Chuckling on she too went for arranging his breakfast cloths and all..life has turn so domesticated and she loves it ...

Mayank was off to office after so many tantrums and asking for perks for leaving her.. she just can smile from her heart on having him in her life... She knew pretty well he does this all on purpose... He is a early riser, on weekends she will always find him all awake early in morning and enjoying the view of her sleeping beside him.. yet all week days he will behave like a kid...

Mayank being made wakup.. breakfast and thworn out of the house literally she chuckling at the role reversal... . it has been 250 days to their wedding and she is waiting for therr 300 days anniversary... he celebrates yes he does.. and the amzing part is tht unlike her he remembers it always... 100 days 200 days, 3 month, 6 months... all.. because of all this evry now or than they have a reason to celebrate... she has everyday to celebrate when he is with her...

She knew she is been blessed, she feels like god's most special child when she look towards her life with mayank... he has made everything so easy, so beautiful, so like those in heaven...

The ringing phone took her attention, and she smiled she was waitng for his call from office and she knew if even a second he will get he will call her for sure... tht makes her time away from him cherish able..

Nupur: heloo.. the smile in her voice cannot be hided.. it was so loud

Gunjan: ohh to disappoint u its not ur hubby... its me gunjan... Mrs Sharma..remember me..

Nupur: who gunjan pardon I meet so many people evyrday.. have I ever meet u MS ..wht u said aah Gunjan...

She was suppressing her laugh knowing gunjan's mouth must be a perfect o right now... and she must tapping the toes of her glittering stilettos.. playing with her ffrench tip nails

Gunjan: see I knew it .. I so knew it .. u must have forgotten me way back.. Mrs nupur mayank shamra.. this is so not good I m telling u

Nupur: gunjan.. stop being so dramtic... I was kidding.. so hows my kid sister...

Gunjan: hows my kid sisiter...huh .. u n ur husband does vene care...

Nupur was use to her extravaganza now... she is like tht. The most amzing caring and loving person but exaggerations has cmae to her with her class...

Nupur: aaw..how can u even say tht dear... tell me wht happen why our kid is so upset..

Gunjan: u know na whts next week

Nupur: wht is next week?

Gunjan" huh.. my stars.. OMG im stucked between such people .. but whom I m even complaining the girl who never remember her anniversary ..how will she remebr her lovely brothers birthday...

Nupur: oh hello thts not next week its just after 5 days and I remebr

Gunjan: gee.. im gonna tell bro tht ... today is a historic day ... nupur mayank Sharma remembering a date..

Nupur: shut up and tell me whts abt tht..

Gunjan: I don't know im just so nervous I mean it's his birthday and he is gonna be CEO if Sharma emperor all together and I just want this evening to be so grand and perfect.. im sure I m gona mes it up... oh god..

Nupur: just relax... oky clam down ur not messing anything... we wil b cuming there days early so we will help u in all.. and ur so best in all this.. chill...

Gunjan: im sorry nupur

Nupur: for wht

Gunjan: CEO was bro' position and..

Nupur: its oky gunjan... me being in his life has taken many things away from him, his family and now sumthing he owes from always.. yet it doesn't matter its smarat who will b having it... and technically its good to we are here headoffice it is at NY so its better samrat take it

Gunjan: is bhai oky with it...

Nupur: absolutely... he was so happy when he heard tht.. he was saying he deserve it more thn him.. so u both need to relax and enjoy this big moment Mrs would b Sharma

Gunjan: donot u dare start it again.. why u always call b tht..

Nupur: cause ur sumday will be mrs Sharma... for now would be mrs sharma...

Gunjan: u better get ur self here im telling u..

Nupur: donot worry we are cuming...

Gunjan: and ya donot be nervous oky... evrythings is gonna be oky..

Nupur: I hope so... im worried about mom more...

Gunjan: she is gonna love u...

Nupur: chukled... thanks love ya... tc

Gunjan: tata...

She laughed at gunajn seriously a kido

Mayank: mine mine my wife is laughing with herself... care to share the reson darling

She turned around in surprise.

Nupur: ur home... early..

Sarah took his bag and he asked her a cup of coffee...

Mayank: see wifey u should start taking me seriously I told u I will be early... he threw himself on the same sofa... and place his head on her lap...

She has stop scream sarah is here n there...as he doesn't care.. porr lady herself has to be careful to avoid embarrassing herslf in front of thse love birds...

Nupur: ur sister in law called... and she was in oh I m dead mood..

He chuckled...

Mayank: reason must be samart's party ...

Nupur: yes

Mayank: she is a darma queen... just wasy to make us cum home early...

Nupur: n I have promise her we are cuming early

He looked at her in false glare..

Mayank: I had an off not for serving as event manger...

Nupur: mayank... tths bad she needs us..

Mayank: ya ya she has 300 workers on her serves...3 even mangers and she needs us for wht

Nupur: moral support...

Mayank: deafing us with her ..omg omg.. she slapped him playfully laughing with him ... and then there was silence..

He loked up to her she was in deep thoughts.. he took her hand wch was caressing his hairs.. and placed near his lips...

Mayank: nervous or sacred...

Nupur: she smiled.. nervous. A lot..

Mayank; thts oky than .. nervousness is natural... Mom is not hitler I tell u.. she is just pretty india I tell u.. she is the only prson in our home whom u will see in sari.. and traditional wears

Nupur: really she knew how to wear a sari...

She said so exctitelly..

Nupur: wao I love sari...

Mayank: waoo... mom will love ur such amzing aspect.. but I m afraid she is a very restrict person on her belives.. specially abt me... she might not be oky like samrat...

Nupur: I understand .. donot worry...

Mayank: nupur donot push urself to much with mom... just be wht ur ..oky...

Nupur: oky...

Mayank: she likes u good..if she is not oky with u.. tht is oky too.. nothing changes tht

Nupur: but it will add a person in my life and u family to...

Mayank: ya I know tht.. nupur u haven't taken away family from me they are there with me still and she is too... but I donot want u to be extra pushy to urself... relax.. and be oky with it... no hard feelings... its isn't ur fault... u have to belive it

Nupur: hmm..

Mayank: one person I need to warn u from... Dad...

Nupur: wht abt dad

Mayank: u know how he is rite... ur not gona be humble with him.. his taunt if he dares to ... U will b give him a sharp reply got it.. no Indian bichari bahu... pls... plus one more thing

Nupur: wht is tht

He took a deep breath and she was now concern whts cuming up

Mayank: never ..evrer.. even if he is dying or saying any such thing ..ur not gonna go or be alone with him..

Nupur: Mayank..she gasp ..

Mayank: im not exaggerating it... He is not a safe person around nupur... I just donot want to risk ur security around him... just be very very careful nupur..

Nupur: nothing such can happen mayanak

Mayank: such thing can happened.. he has forced a girl before... and he hates u and he donot respect u... so pls.. listen to me this time okay...

Nupur: oky.. donot worry I will be with u always will not remain alone...

She kissed his forehead who has so much of distress on his face.. she wonder how can he b so different from hs own father.. it was strange... born n bought up in such environment he is sumone who stand out so amazingly..


Edited by drfizaahmed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
when we will get next update😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinan2050

when we will get next update😛



woh tu mein ny abhi likhi bhi nhi hai 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
love birds..
I hate mayank's dad...🤢
hope he wont do any disgusting things with nupur or any other lady..😡
thanks for PM
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Di Di Di..
you are just amazing..so as the update...the lovely-dovey romance of Mr.and Mrs.Sharama was oo awesome...
love it to the core..so cute and adorable pair..
It's Mayank who sed to remember the dates..wow..
He such a gem..indeed Nupur is so lucky to have Mayank in her life..I am feeling jealous of her..i wish i also could get a man in my life like Mayank..so understanding and loveable...Haaye...

Mayank is so genuine person he even warned her about his Dad...seriously how two person could be different yet living in the same place...

Nupur-Gunjan convo was also great
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous, amazing update.
Loved it.
I have waited for it for so long,but it is worth waiting.
Thanks for the pm.

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