TUMNE JO NA KAHA - RANTARA SS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys mi bck wid another trial this time wid an ss hope you guys will like it..!!! actually nt happy aaj ka episode dekh ka so putting my point of view.. want pm add me..😊
special mention - NIYAZ you guys nailed it today jst amazing..👏
proud to be your fans..😃

i m starting frm d marriage bt in a different angle..

TUMNE JO NA KAHA
-RANTARA SS

Antara was ready to be mrs.Raghunath naik she was happpy n blushing she was in Naik saidan DM welcomed they she asked her to sit in a room n den she will be called..
Bt suddenly disturbing her thoughts came machmach..
Antara - arre machmach yaha par kya hua.
MM - woh yedi yeh tera liye bhai na diya hai..
Antara - mera liye yeh tape recorder kyu kaha hai woh..?!
(she asked being confused she felt that something was wrong definetly machmach was all sad n was crying since long she did make out)
MM - tu dekh le yedi mai chalta hu.. dhyan rakh apna..
Antara ons d button..
Antara she hears Raghu's voice mera liye tu meri jaan hai mera jahan hai meri zindagi hai aur mai teri aankhon mai khud ka liye nafrat nae dekh pauga.. mujhe maaf kardena misscall tera bigar jee nae sakta isliye teri aankhon mai nafrat dekh na ki takat nae mujhe tujhe ek saach batana hai mai woh insaan hu jo ek mohra tha anjane mai maine woh box rakha tha jise tera papa ki maut hui thi.. yehi batana tha tujhe mujhe maaf kardena hosakta toh mujhse nafrat mat karna..
Nd it stopped khush rahna Antara mai jaa raha hu teri zindagi se durr...

Tears made der way Antara was crying nw badly she culdnt believe Raghu was the one who killed her father he was d one who ruined her life.. bring her to hell n he was d person whom she loved the most..hurt all that was visible frm her eyes😭
Antara ran as fast as she could to MM
Antara - Raghu kaha hai machmach
MM - bhai ne apun ko kuch nae btaya bs tujhe yeh dena ko kaha aur chalaga..
Antara - mai usse kabhi maaf nae karugi kabhi nae..😭
Antara ran towards her house the marriage was called off.. Satya tried his luck hard on Antara bt culdnt get her..

After one year -
Antara - ek baat kahau Machmach
MM - haa bolna yedi
Antara - agar kabhi tumhara bhai tumhe phone kare toh usse kehna maine usse maaf kiya anjanne mai usse woh hua tha.. uski galti nae hai bs usse kahao ka wapis aaje pls n she had tears again😭 tears bcoz after her papa it was Raghu whom she loved d most n he was gone too leaving her all alone again to handle herself alone in dis city which was still unknown to her yes her brother took care of her MM was always der fr her little she knew Raghu was behind everything frm getting a good job for herself to Ishan 's education in a good reputate school, to her mother getting well n MM always saving her fr bad eyes of DM and her son Satya.. All dis wasdone by Raghu only..

Another strange which was happening was Antara receiving letters every month fr somewhere addressing her as..
"MS.C ANTARA KAUL"
She never understand that c bt always dat letters where to motivate her n takcare of her family n herself too..she didnt get it where it was frm she tried to find out bt in vain..

After 2 years(in total 3 years)

Bck in Kashmir in a beautiful bunglow besides Kaul mention there was a bunglow really amazing n entering the hall photos of a girl all over the hall could be found it was none other than Antara 's photos in a king size room there was a man sleeping and his Alarm clock waked him up... there was huge photo of Antara at the bedroom wall..
It was RAGHU yes Raghu in those years he had become a businessman earned his name n money bth.. There wasnt a day he talked to MM always to know abt Antara n her Family he made sure that she wasnt getting any trouble by DM n Satya yes he knew abt DM's illegal work n today was d day she was been taken to jail Raghu never had a peaceful sleep as he had last night bcoz he knew DM had no choice nw yes he was d master plan behind dis he informed the police abt it..
Raghu - looking at Antara's photo good morning jaan😊 aaj bahut imp din hai tumhara liye jst be strong ms.call..pata hai aaj 3 saalo ka baad situation yeh hai ki Antara marathi mulgi ban gae aur mai kashmir ka vasi(citizen)i love you Antara n moves to his daily work

Bck in mumbai -
Police was taking DM to jail.Everyone in d basti was shocked
Police comm - aao daya mai tumhe tumhara ghar le chala intezar kar raha hai waha sab chalo le chalo isse..MM thank you
MM - aare apun na sirf sach ka sath diya hai aur kuch nae
Police - haa aur Raghu veer ko bhi..
Antara head was up now hearing Raghu's name she thought it must be Raghu bt in vain it was some RAGHUVEER..
Dm was in jail nw her story was done nw Satya left d place due to shame..
Antara did received those letters still she decided to find it out..after much of her finding
Antara - kashmir..?!! kashmir se kon likhta hai mujhe yeh letter mujhe Kashmir jana hoga she decides to go to Kashmir..

PRE- CAP -Raghu - HAPPY BDAY TO YOU
HAPPY BDAY MISCALL he was saying all this to her photo..
MM -________
Raghu - kya hua miscall ko..???!!!

Okh guys done wid part - 1 this would have 3 parts..
chappal n tamatar welcomed hai..
i hope you guys like it
takcre

- harshita<3😊




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honeybees22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow really nice yaar i loved it cont soon and what happend to antara😲
Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaar ur concept n story is too too good.!
nd u write so well.!
update soon.!!
nd pm me.!!
precap a bit scary!
Edited by shivam4387 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb fantastic start harshita
thank god antara forgave raghu
but u kept them apart 4 3 years ? 😭😭😭
c means chintu ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

superb fantastic start harshita

thank god antara forgave raghu
but u kept them apart 4 3 years ? 😭😭😭
c means chintu ?

hey thanks you so much..😃
yes thank god..
i m sorry bt i had too..
na c means something else wait n watch😉😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raghu left antara 😭 dm in jail 🥳 satya gone 👏 loved d update continue soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow really nice yaar i loved it cont soon and what happend to antara😲

thank you honey😊
wait nthing gonna happen😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivam4387

yaar ur concept n story is too too good.!
nd u write so well.!
update soon.!!
nd pm me.!!
precap a bit scary!

thank you so much..😃
surely will..
add me in ur buddy list fr pms😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Twinks..

Raghu left antara 😭 dm in jail 🥳 satya gone 👏 loved d update continue soon 😛

thanks you😊
surely will😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshita1996

hey thanks you so much..😃
yes thank god..
i m sorry bt i had too..
na c means something else wait n watch😉😊


am waiting 😛

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