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Like the disappearing fireflies

Beckoning the traveller in the night

I wandered in a strange tide

A place you so sternly hide

From my wanting eyes

This moment that I always strived

Your delicate heart and a gentle smile

It takes me back in time

When a nestling was learning to fly

Frantically trying in a strange sky

Just to accompany you

I knew we are far from through

Even after those blank eyes

Or the times when you lied

And the meetings you denied

With the alibis for your crimes

I couldn't help but agonize

Your importance in my life

What do you hope to find

This town is where you happily reside

But you are invested in an insane race

A big wave towards a foreign place

Impassive faces and rigorous days

Unrelenting snakes on an eternal chase

Strove hard to regain the lost place

In search of the light in your eyes

The tender words and an elusive smile

Amidst the vulture's tired gaze

To welcome the dawn with your embrace

hey guys, this is my first ever work on TAAREY...!!
plz do let me know, ur views on it😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awh! this was such a cute poem 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome..
Superb !! you are amazing at writing poems!!

do write more of them😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

awh! this was such a cute poem 😊

thnk you dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ridzi123

Its awesome..

Superb !! you are amazing at writing poems!!

do write more of them😊

thnks dear...i m glad that you liked it n ya i'll try to write more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome work it was reali good

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajaved

awesome work it was reali good

thank u soo much dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!! soo cute riya!!
write more such Poems!!!
and
merko bhi pm kariyo!! :)
loved it!!!
thants 4 the PM dear!!! ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute poem😃

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