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Posted: 12 years ago

HI Friends this Banner is given to me by One of my Close friend.. Hope u ppl like it...

Clarifications: Arnav's action is justified... Being ASR... How can he stand any betrayal or silence from his love? Think ppl before bashing Arnav... Soon the MU will be cleared and This FF will also End..
But Not Before my Ekta Kapoo style Twist...
See this chap for that.. U ll get a hint😈
HAPPY READING😃

PART 21

"Hey, Don't cry bitiya. I am Here. Don't cry" That person started consoling the shivering trembling Khushi.

"Maa. Stop It. She is not Worth it. You better don't take her side." Arnav said gritting his teeth not able to take their melodrama.

"ARNAV. Will you please Stop it. I know what I am supposed to do. Cant you see that her health condition is worse and she also went through such thing and here you are slapping her and hurting her more. I dint know that I taught something like this to my son. Whatever you do, I am taking her from here now. You better don't argue." Aarthi yelled at the top f her voice. After all she is mother of Arnav Singh Raizada.

"Maa. You better leave her to me. I don't like someone turning back when I am talking. Maa. Stop there I say." Arnav too yelled. Aman who came with Aarthi was stunned at this Mother n son.

"Hey Devi Maiyya. What is this? They don't look like Mom n son. They are fighting like Members of parliament." Aman made a baby face.

Here Bhagwan ji was adoring his wife who was dressed in beautiful red and jasmine flowers adorning her hair.

"Devi.. You look.." And there came Aman's voice.

"Arhhh." BJ made irritating face.

"What the? I look Arhh?" DM asked with her hands on her hips.

"Oh no. This Mathur never leaves a chance to interrupt my private moments." BJ mumbled.

"Huh. You should have thought this before making this manufacture defect. Vese why are you even concentrating on him? just lets leave for the Party. Other Devtas will be waiting. And don't you dare to throw your eyes on any Apsaras." DM glared at BJ who was giving his best puppy dog expression.

"And You Nosy Mathur. Mother or Son. They are Raizada's and this act of theirs is most justified. So better don't put ur nose into it. And one more thing, The time for u to call Khushi BHABHI is not far." Devi made her dtatement and pulled BJ to the party leaving Aman who was grinning at the last sentence.

Here Aarthy took Khushi to the cottage ignoring Arnav's Yells and Dhamki's.

"Pinki. Pinki. Help me" Aarthy called entering the cottage.

"Maa. What happened to Khushi?" Anjali panicked.

"I will explain. First call a doctor. Where is her brother? And Where is Chinto?" Aarthy ordered.

"Maa. They are in chef's area. Meetthi and Ansh have gone to bring them here." Yash came there.

"Beta, For now, don't let Khushi do anything. And Please get a doctor now. She really needs it now." Aarthy said slowly to Panicking Yash. He understood and went to call their family doctor.

"Jiji. Jiji" came Aditya and Sanaah. That's when Sanaah noticed Aarthy.

"Maa. Maa, you? When did you come?" Sanaah asked between her shock.

"Chinto all these can be done later. First stay with your Jiji and your future husband." Sanaah nodded her head and went to Khushi. There she got shocked seeing Khushi lying lifeless and Adi crying like a lost child.

"Jiji, Wake up na. jiji. Jiji" Adi was trying to warm her by rubbing her palms.

"Adi. What happened to jiji?" Sanaah's voice was mere whisper.

"Dono re. She just stood up from the bed and was trying to call someone and suddenly she fell back on bed. She is not responding." Aditya cried so much that it was getting beyond handling for sanaah.

"Mr. Sanak, Now leave doctor to check her. Please stop crying and make her feel secure. If you cry it will make her more vulnerable" Yash was explaining him like doing to a child.

"Bhai, Jiji" Aditya sniffed. Sanaah gripped his shoulder and assured him. She took him out. Yash took Doctor to the room were Khushi was lying. All these while, Arnav was standing like a statue near the door seeing his Khushi lying lifeless.

"KHUSHI" Ansh came running.

"Champ, stay here. Doctor is checking her. Wait till she comes out." Yash held Ansh who was wriggling. Anjali was shooting daggers to Arnav, Sanaah was consoling Aditya and Aman was having tough time with Meetthi.

"Meetthi, pls lesten to me. We cannot see Khushi now. Doctor aunty will not let us."

"No I wan to see Ushi damit. Doctor injec Ushi, I fire you" Meetthi gave her threatening look. Aman made baby face.

"Meetthi not face. If doctor gives injection what can I do and after injection Khushi will be alrite. Please. You are Sweetiepie na. Stay quiet baby" Aman said with puppy dog face.

"Injec Ushi ok? Then u no fire" Meetthi understood and stayed Quiet.

Here Doctor came after checking and went straight to Aarthy.

"Aarthyji, She is in very bad state. I mean her physical wounds show me that she has gone through something which you are trying to hide from me. Anyways, now more than that, she is weak Emotionally. She needs emotional support and If she doesn't wake up before morning and respond to medines that I have prescribed, Then I think we have to shift her to hospital and keep her in ICU under severe observation. Now Give this tonic and tablets. All in liquid form. Keep on talking and make her wake up" Doctor's words went like Bullets on the listeners senses.

"Ok Meera, I will take care. Now You leave. Its late. Aman Take her. If anything I will call you tomorrow" Aarthy sent her with Aman and Eyed Arnav.

"Chote, I dono what you will do. I want her to wale up. All this mess is because of you. So it is now your responsibility" Aarthy said and signed all others to leave them alone. Everyone understood and left them. But not before letting in Ansh and Meetthi.

Arnav went near Khushi and sar beside her on the bed while Ansh and Meetthi climbed on the bed with each others help.

"Khushi, are you listening to me? Wake up. I said WAKE UP DAMMIT. HOW CAN YOU IGNORE ME?" Arnav yelled holding her hand.

But there was no response.

"IF YOU LAY LIKE THIS FROM WHOM I WILL SEEK MY VENGEANCE? WHO WILL RETORT FOR MY EACH AND EVERY TANTRUM? WAKE KHUSHI" though Arnav's voice was high, It was not showing Anger. But it was filled with regret and Pain. He thought of showing her pain. But he was receiving the double pain seeing her like this.

DM eyed Aman.

"I said na? your boss will have tough time than my bitiya. See What is happening" Beamed from the party.

"Khushi, wake up. How can you not listen to me. You promised me that You will always listen to me." Ansh was silently shedding tears.

"Ushi Ushi, Me weetu. You no play with me? Wake up. I no angry you." Meetthi started patting Khushi's cheek. Arnav was not able to see all these. Even the kids were able to see the innocence in her. But he needed some answers that was keeping him from breaking down. He silently left from there leaving the kids there. He knew that more than Him they have the capacity to being her back. And he hated himself for putting her in such a condition.

Kids kept ranting and slept on her. Suddenly Ansh jerked in sleep and yelled.

"MAA"

All were heard that and rushed there. But they were shocked to see that Ansh was having a Nightmare that too about his mother whom he never met.

"Maa, don't leave me. Maa. Maa" Ansh cried louder. Ansh was not a kid to cry like this in sleep. He was very much like Arnav in hiding emotions. Meetthi was growing restless. Aarthy tried controlling Ansh while Yash was calming Meetthi.

At that time

"A.. A.. An... Ansh" came a very feeble, trembling slow soft voice that caught everyones attention.

Ansh calmed down immediately and hugged Khushi tightly lying on her. Khushi slightly moved her hands and reached Ansh. Slowly she caressed his hairs and opened her eyes.

"Ansh" she called him slowly. He raised his head and looked at her with teary eyes.

"Maa" he called her.

And this was swet shock for all and HELL SHOCKING FOR ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA.

"What I thought shouldn't happen is happening. Khushi is taking the place of Mother in Ansh's life? But how can that happen?" Arnav mumbled while all the pairs of eyes were on him by that time.

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Done for now..

Do u feel its filler

Well I feel so..

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Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



WHAT A SENTIMENTAL UPDATE MEENU



DID YOU SEE ANY SENTIMENTAL FILM YESTERDAY DAY



REALLY ME CRYING CRYING YOU ARE IMPOSSIBLE



SO KUSHI HUGED PERSON HER MOTHER IN LAW



ARNAV REALLY GOING MAD WHEN SEEING KUSHI STATUS



AMAN JI PAKA MY KIND OF PERSON YAR ALWAYS THINK LIKE ME



AND DM JI WHAT A SUPER SCRIPT WRITER SHE KNOW ALL



THAT TWO KIDO SO CUTE ESPECIALLY THAT LITTLE ONE SHE FIRING AMAN



ADI POOR LITTLE BROTHER



WHOLE FAMILY CRYING FOR KUSHI



AND THE FINALLY MA TWIST YOU GIVE AN SIXER SHOT IN ONE BALL



YOU GOING TO END THIS FF OMG WE DON'T SEE AN SINGLE PROPER RABAVAE NOT FAIR



WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE WITH TISSUES



UPDATE SOON MY DUFFER



Edited by vijiasr08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

kya shyamji humne to hume rula he dia
such an emotional nd heartwrenching updt..humse khushi ka ye dukh aur tadapna dekha nahi jata...
gadha arnav dekh zara kya halat ban gaee hai bichari phool jse nazuk bacchi ka tere pyaar me..
so finally khushi able to meet her future MIL bt was nt in condition to say anything...felt really bad for her...iss arnav ki to me... i agree dat she betray him bt for god shake why he dont jst find out da reason instead blaming her hurt her accuse her da betray which she do for his better future..bt no after all da great ASR why he try to knw all dis as dat arrogant singh raizada is blinded by his rage nd mountain size ego...
even his son nd mithee can see khushi's pain bt nt him all da time he jst taunting her for her deed... 😡
so arnav's mom knw khushi bfore..dat why khushi searching her..bt why??
now arnav repenting for da way he bahaving with khushi..pehele apne pyaar ko dard do phir uss dard ka marham bhi bano..kesa hai ishq haii..ajab sa ishq hai.. 😕😕😕
aww my heart goes to ansh nd meethi how much dey r craving for khushi's love nd become so broken by seeing der fav khushi in dis lifeless condition.. 😭😭
wow ansh address khushi as maa.. nd da great ASR was shocked by dis... 😲😲😲
thank god khushi is out of danger now...
aranv phir se khusi ka dard dia na den hello hii bye bye.. 😡😡
shyamji u better nt make khushi cry anymore..nahi to..nahi to kya..maat rulao usse..aur kya..lol😆😆
waiting for nxtwa..
continue soonwa..
Edited by arshi_sush - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey devimaiya meri bachhi ko tune kya bana diya
aisa emotional update de rahi hain
mummy ko rula diya😭😭😭
Poor khushi..her condition is so bad
all because of arnav babua anger🤢
Ansh cal her ma and she quickly open her eyes..just like our relation
u r going to end this chappy
But before that i want romantic rabba ve moments... understand

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Posted: 12 years ago
maaa...

waiting for secret to be revealed
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update
Loved it
Soo that person is arnav mom
Hayyerr ansh and meethi soo cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing upd
poor khushi hope mu 'll clear soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
thanks for the pm
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wow awesome didu
no words🤗
cont soon
Edited by ARSHIANDI - 12 years ago
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Super Chapter Meenu You Rock . As guessed it was Arnav's mother dat took Khushi into her embarace. WOW Mother-Son fight was fantastic , well after all she is no less dan Mrs.Raizada Aarthi yelled at the top f her voice. After all she is mother of Arnav Singh Raizada ⭐️ .

"Devi.. You look.." And there came Aman's voice.

"Arhhh." BJ made irritating face Belly Laugh.

"What the? I look Arhh?" DM asked with her hands on her hips. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 god Meenu couldn't stop laughing while reading dis part. Poor BJ's defective piece didnot all his creative's life in shanti . Well got to know now wat DM implied wen she said "I said na? your boss will have tough time than my bitiya. See What is happening" Beamed from the party 😆.

Hahahaha Mrs.Raizada left Khushi's well being in ASR's hand and more dan dat it was kids love and effection made us all sad to see these kids crying to bring back der Khushi,Ushi to normal life Crying 1. Yooo Ansh called Khushi Maa , a person who has never seen his own mother and now its Khushi 4 him. WoooHooo atlast ASR's fear came into reality Woohoo 1, really waiting to see wat he'll do to back out his son from calling Khushi Ma. Thanks 4d pm.
Edited by saj111 - 12 years ago

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