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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

fst danx shivi fr letng us knw abt ds ss

loved d ss

d way u described abt arhi n f=dr felling s awsum

plz do pm me fr fy=utr updts

danx

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nagina

@jeb1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Great start

Like it

Thanks for pm me

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Ho my just loved it a beautiful concept so well portrayed. The whole flow of the story line was beautiful. Just awesome so simple but yet heart warming. Reading all the chappy at a go makes me crave for more. They are speaking threw eyes and he had asked her hand before itself gosh the last part was emotional. Excited for the next update. Pls do pm me dear.

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sand88

@sand88

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Amazing👏
continue soon...

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

nice concept.. Looking forward to read more waiting.

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zarnan

@ZARNAN

Beginner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I have removed my work, due to personal reasons. I hope you all will understand.

Thank you. Much Love.

Edited by ZARNAN - 11 years ago

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Wow...that's a very very wonderful, soulful..romantic story...loved it sooo much...

Arnav n khushi both r smitten by each other...

Arnav is so disciplined ... Focused ...and so sure about his feelings for Khushi...

I loved the way he directly approached Khushis parents...that too before he left for Delhi...

The terrace conversation 2 yrs back is more clear now...they always understood eachothers unspoken words...

Wow...finally NIKKAH done,.. But I dint understand that the wedding was after 3 months n NIKKAH now...I thought both were same...

Can't wait for romance to bloom...

For a first time writer...ur are doing a fantabulous job...

Do continue...

Edited by jyothim78 - 11 years ago

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Wow!.lovely story..read all the parts in one go.
Loved arshi in such a different backdrop.i would love to read more of them.
As i'm quite slow in responding to pm notifications,i will follow the story in this thread itself

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Loved it...
Sara was annoyed bcuz her all plans of playing cupid went down the drain... Dadiji knew that still she pretended to be unaware... I was laughing at sara's annoyance...
Loved Arnav desperation for Nikkah... He is head over heal in love with Khushi ...
Loved their terrace scene... He couldn't wait even a day to hold her, to take her in his arms as now she is his wife... That was so soulful moment that I had goose pumps... Beautifully written...
Continue soon...