Maneet FF : HIS SLAVE *part5/ PG: 27 *

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HIS SLAVE


PART 1

Geet was 18 and had been in the ' boarding house' for two years now. she was 5'5, had long deep brown wavy hair and eyes that could hold anyone's gaze. Every saturday morning she would clean her room and put on the small white summer dress, that was required by the master of the house, and travel down to he main hall for inspections. Most girls would get excited, dreaming that a young handsome man would spot them, make them their darling wife. Geet was never excited. she knew the truth behind the sales. Girls were sold to rich young men to be abused, neglected and then sold on again. prostitution was a lucrative yet very rewarding business, and as many men couldn't afford to by a girl ' renting' one was next best thing.

By the time the girls were older most were left in organisations, forgotten and used for breeding, a lucky few were bought by kinder men with whom the grew old with- but this was rare.

Geet watched silently as the girls flicked their hair and fluttered their lashes, trying to gain attention. young men, most in expensive suits, floated around the hall pointing and winking at the girls. Geet snorted at herself, stood with her lips slouched and a stern look on her face. she didn't want the attention.

she would do anything to avoid going home with one of these men, she wanted freedom, her own life, happiness.

Each inspection Geet had managed to put off any potential buyers, ingnoring them, snorting and even spitting to get them away, and each time geet had been told off and escorted back to her room.

She should have been sold the second, She turned 16, her slender body and stunning eyes should have meant men were fighting over her, but no man wanted a challenge, all except the Maan singh Khurana !!!


PS : hey guys i wrote a FF/os on maaneet long back but discontiinued due to some problem !!! but no worry now am back😎 ok frankly this is not my story..i was reading some random story on phone..& this story glued me..i was imagining maaneet while reading this story😆 so thought to pen it down here..hope u guys will also love/like it😳 and ya am not gonna copy whole story..i copy the concept & will write it on my wayy !!😳 in our Geeet's stylee😎 (babajiii , chup bilkul chup😳 and our dhak dhak😳😉) so tell me howz it ??😳

PSS: sorry no devil Maan in this chapter 😈 u know sabar ka fal meeta hota hai so please wait for next part ! 😳

Please let me know should i continue or not !

Part 2



Part 3


part 4


Part 5
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drashmeet12 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shah10

Interesting concept
Love it
Continue plz


thanks dear
will continue soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intresting waiting fr next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res 😉
will comment later
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the concept hope maan is no devil
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting starting...

loved it very much...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting.loved it.continue soon.pm me also.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow great story and cong on the new story
my name is Alicia pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting concept.
Loved the story line n way u hv portrayed the characters.
Geet will become slave of Maan.

Continue soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc start 😊

Cont soon ..

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