Maneet FF : HIS SLAVE *part5/ PG: 27 * - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
awesome ...
loved it!!!!!
do continue it soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nice concept !!
but i dnt read maaneet ff :( can u please write in rishabala version too ?? your using rishabala pic as your profile pic so i think your rishabala fan too ? so please write in rishabala version !!
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
interesting .
do continue soon ...
want mature and loving ,angry hot maan not devil maan here
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2


The three young men walked through the large oak door into the main reception of Dawny Girls Boarding Establishment or DGBE for short.


Maan a muscular young man with deep black hair styled perfectly with touch of messiness, dark brown eyes and a jaw line that made any girls knees weak, looked over his best friend Aidan (Adi ) and grinned. Aidan was litter shorter than Maan and had light brown slightly wavy hair which he kept short, bright excited eyes and broad shoulder. lastly jai, a smaller guy with blonde surf swept hair, a cheeky grin, handed Maan he keys to the jet black turbo range Rover they had parked outside. Maan tucked the keys into his jean pocket. he leaned over the reception desk "I'm here to see mr Dawny" he said smirking at the young woman sat tentatively behind it. " Certainly" she said " His office is the second on the left, sir " she replied while looking down with respect. "Thank you, gorgeous" Maan replied then winked at her and walked away, leaving the young woman blushing behind the desk.

Maan knocked on the thick oak door which was engraved with filigree roses and wines, upon opening the door he was met with the mid afternoon sun glaring through two giant windows which overlooked the whole of the Dawny establishment- from the flower beds in front of the windo to the thick fur tree forest which enclosed the site. In front or the windows was another substanial oak desk, and sad behind that was an older man, around 35 in a smart bussiness suit. " Ah Maan Singh Khurana!" he cooed while stroking his stubble. "How's your father. I trust he's satisfied with the girls he purchased last month, I must say they were two beautiful little things"" Yes mr dawny, they are doing well for us, I'm actually here about a girl myself"

"But you know young man, the sales are on saturdays, today is wednesday, you will have to come back then if your father wants more", Maan leant against the wall, he wasn't going anywhere. " The girls not for him" Maan began "for my 18th birthday my father wants to buy me my own girl, I'm here for Geet Handa ! "Mr dawny widened his eyes, now interested "a private sale huh ? Quite a rare thing, still, the sale is on Saturday, you'll have to come back then". Maan dighed, bored by mr Dawny's antics, he leant down on his desk, levelling their eye contact. I'll give tou $500,000 for her today" "Saturday" $750,00" "Saturday"" said mr dawny's ..1 million" said maan ! Aidan and jai both took a sharp intake a breath, clearly shocked by Maan's offer. Mr dawny pondered for a second, leaning back on his chair " it's clear money isn't an issue for you. you really want this girl, she can be one hell of hand full" " I don't care, I want her" ok fine, make it 2 million and you've got her today" "Deal" Maan grinned as he leant to shake mr Dawny got up and ushered the men out the office, " we can deal wih the paper work later, lets go get your girl.."


PS : Thanks for lovely comments guys🤗thanks for supportting me😳 here you go .. your 2nd part !!! sorry no geet here in next part u will get both maan and geet😳 hope you like this part !!! ok i read some comments .. some people dnt want devil maan😈 they want hot and lovable maan😳 guys chill this FF is dark story ..u will get know about maan very soon..he is unpredictable in this FF😆 you will come to know about him very soon !😳



Precap : Maaneet face off😳


PSS: am free today..if u want i can update next part also but i want my likes and comments for this part 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
interesting a different concept
good update😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
wow great story plz update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
maan is going 2 by geet!!!
sorry he bought geet already !!!😲
intresting!!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i guess i m the one who want hotr nad lovable maan not devil maan 😆
but this maan is different ...
he is buying geet ..
waiting for their journey to begin ...
if posible try to update again ...waiting or that
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
must say truly different concepts
awesome parts

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