FF:Melt Like Snow [Chp 33 Pg 76 ] - Page 41

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ridizzz thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part.
loved it
Knew it knew it it was Adi.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow that was a wonderful part
bani jai ko aur bhi bacche chhiye 😆
so start working on it already 😉
pls cont soon.........
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Posted: 18 years ago
I loved it, but felt sorry 4 Jai!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey all! Thanks for the comments, this again is a short part, but it ends with a surprise. Hope you all like it!

Sobia



CHAPTER 26

Bani woke up as she felt Krishna's soft hand on her forehead.

'Mom?'

'Hmmm' Bani looked around her room. She was on her bed, Pushkar near her feet and Krishna by her side.

The setting seemed strange to her, last she remembered she was in her family room pleading with her Adi Bhaiya to let the secret of her whereabouts be unknown.

'Pushkar, I had the strangest dream, you were in it, and Krishna and…and Jai and Raashi and Ranveer they had a kid as well, Rahul. Adi Bhaiya was there also. First Ranveer and Raashi found me, because of out house looking exactly like the Walia Mansion. And then you went to their hotel to get their stuff with Ranveer and Jai was there and he followed Ranveer home and then we had an accident went off to cottage country and then when we came back Adi Bhaiya was here. It was so weird.' Bani stared dreamy eyed at Pushkar 'It was a dream wasn't it Pushkar?'

Pushkar shook his head, 'No it wasn't a dream you fainted while pleading with Adi Bhaiya. And all of them are downstairs right now. India se phone aya tha, Massi isn't feeling too well. Jai Bhai is really worried, he was here with you, I sent him downstairs.'

Bani like a robot got out of bed and went down the stairs. The house pitch black, only the light being reflected by the soft angle like white snow on the ground shone in through the windows.

Silence rang through the house as if no living soul occupied it, Krishna and Rahul, who usually caused a terrible lot of noise were nowhere to be seen or heard. Pushkar and Krishna had followed Bani out the room had disappeared in the darkness of the house.

As Bani descended into the darkness her every thought stray back to the times she had shared with Massi. It was because of Massi that she and Jai had fallen in love. Massi had been like a mother to Bani. A pang of guilt hit Bani as she stopped in the middle of her tracks. It was her, she was the reason that Massi was sick, she was the reason that Jai was still in Canada, she was the reason for everything.

Bani hurried her pace, she was ready to go back to India, even if it meant that bad memories and taunts would flow her way, she was ready, it was the least she could do for the two people who gave her life.

A jerk and Bani was now facing the opposite direction. Her heart beating against the chest she had leaned on many times. Her palms now sweaty. Her knees weak and her lips trembling.

'Tum?'
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Posted: 18 years ago

Sobia darling,

This really was toooooooo short an update dear. Hope fully the next part will be long.😉😃

Aww....so Bani is ready to go to India and face the past for Massi dear as she is not feeling well.😃

Now who is that tum for????😕 I really hope not Pia.😡

Till your next update dear.😃

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
Sobia
loved it.short and sweet.very interesting.looking forward to the next part.cant wait. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Why did you put a cliffhanger? You know how much I hate them, right? Hehe. Lol. Its okay.. Make sure you continue soon, k? I hope the person is not Pia or any other negative character!!

Pls update soon & I'll try to be on time.
ZAHRA 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Please not Pia, 😭!!! U scared me in think it was all a dream!!! Poor Massi!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Fab part.
Bani thought it was all a dream....poor girl.
Now who did Bani see.....hope not Pia.
Massi is sick Bani decided to go back.....goood girl
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww bani thought it was a dream
why did u leave it there, plz update soon
i wonder who is there,

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