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Posted: 12 years ago
mona headache chaligayi nahithi aakar sar dabadu
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi laks ,office mein ho kya..??



hi lils..

nahi aaj nahi gayi...

lappy se hi thoda kaam kar rahi hoo...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

mona headache chaligayi nahithi aakar sar dabadu



arrey waah... mona acha moka hey ... mat chod...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya bolu halat khraab hai ..

kal dophar se light nahi hai .. kuch major prob hui aur abhi tak nahi aayi ..

raat bhar soyi nahi ..heasache tha aur subah stoamch pain hone laga garmi se..

ab pata nahi kab aayegi..

inverter ka charge khatm and phone n lappi ka bhi ab ho jaayega ..

mera kya hoga mumyy 😭


Fir bhi new thread open karne aa gayi 😛😆
Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Kya bolu halat khraab hai ..


kal dophar se light nahi hai .. kuch major prob hui aur abhi tak nahi aayi ..

raat bhar soyi nahi ..heasache tha aur subah stoamch pain hone laga garmi se..

ab pata nahi kab aayegi..

inverter ka charge khatm and phone n lappi ka bhi ab ho jaayega ..

mera kya hoga mumy


Fir bhi new thread open karne aa gayi 😛😆



mona... 🤗

GF bhi ajeeb hai... lappy nahi, net nahi, power nahi... lekin phir bhi hum log yahaa jhaknaa bandh nahi karenge... 😉

i really hope ke power jaldi se waapas aaye...

head ache and stomach ache... both?? mona take rest dear...

i really wish that u will feel better and will be here with us at nite for our gupshup time...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



mona... 🤗

GF bhi ajeeb hai... lappy nahi, net nahi, power nahi... lekin phir bhi hum log yahaa jhaknaa bandh nahi karenge... 😉

i really hope ke power jaldi se waapas aaye...

head ache and stomach ache... both?? mona take rest dear...

i really wish that u will feel better and will be here with us at nite for our gupshup time...


mona tum net nd lappy ke saath apni bhi nasar utar,dont worry about updtt , vil wait .take rest agar ho sake to gappe ladane aajana...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
haawww so cute
maan lift geet in his arms
so dreamy ...love their cute
manofying each other...great work mona
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 55
awesome...
smart and naughty Maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago




The Downpour... Part 65



Geet started sweating when she got her mother call. Her mind would not able to gather anything which she could say in term of this sudden event. She looked toward Maan with helpless eyes which had fearsome tears. She could not even speak a word with the numb condition of her body. Everything was unexpected and unthoughtful which she was not ready for. She was stood just like statue holding phone in her hand.

Maan saw her and scared with the weird state of her. He rushed to her,

"Geet whose call is this?''

Geet looked him and could utter only "Mama…''

Maan understood her dilemma even SD felt bad for her. She could understand how she would be feeling. She walked to Geet and kept hand on her shoulder, pressed little in assurance. Geet looked her with guilt and with feel of shame. She did not have courage to face this gentle lady. She knew SD must be angry and thinking bad about her character. She wanted to fall on SD feet and apologize. In this entire term ring stopped sounding.

"Dadima I'm sorry'' Geet spoke with hanging head and moisten eyes.

SD smiled. She held her chin and made Geet look her. Geet was still thinking embarrass. Before SD could say consoling words Geet again got her mother call. This time she could not miss talking her. With trembling hand she pressed call button and was to talk when SD raised her hand to her,

"Give me Geet, I'll talk her''

Geet got more scared. She looked Maan who blinked eyes in assurance. Geet with seamless fear handed over phone to Dadi and looked her with curious.

SD went far in alone to talk while Geet eyes followed her in tension when Maan pressed her shoulder making her calm. Geet turned to him.

"Maan Mama would not talk me now.. She will be angry on me what I do!!'' She cried. "She would not see my face again I know!!!''

Maan tried to make her calm down but fear had made home so deep in Geet heart she was not able to see peace on Maan face. She was just crying and sobbing in unseen fear.

"Geet don't cry jaan everything is alright..''

But she was not listening. She was uttering her fear only in shaken words and that made Maan force to take rigid step. He dragged Geet with him, "Come Geet!!''

"Maan where are you taking me!!! Maan Dadima … she would mind Maan leave me.. I have to talk Mama.. what are you doing Maan leave me please!...''

He dragged her to the study room and closed door. He kept hand on her lips and made her shut with force. Geet stare him amazed.

"Calm down Geet .. shant ho jaao..'' Maan used soft tone. Slowly he removed hand from her mouth when found her breath was normal.

He cupped her face with both hands and pulled her closer, "Everything is fine Geet nothing bad would happen..You just calm down Jaan''

Geet was calm now. She was shedding silent tears. "Maan Mama.. Dadima.. I broken everyone trust upon me.. ''

"No Geet you did nothing wrong. It's not your fault Geet and no one can raise finger on you. Got you!!''

"But no one will believe me .. and Mama papaji.. what they would think about me.. ''

"Geet look at me..just look me !!!!... Can you see trust in my eyes hmm!!''

Geet nodded.

"Then no one… NO ONE Geet can raise their finger on you, I wont let anyone do this.. I promise you!!!!!'''

She nod head slightly having small yet clear smile on lips. She let her face be rested on his chest and let arms enfold around his waist. She heard his heartbeats; it gave her certainty of future.

"Mai ghabra gayi thi Maan. Everything happened so sudden that I could not understand anything. I thought I broke my parents and Dadima trust. Mama Papaji had sent me here and I had promised myself that I would make them feel proud upon me but everything changed suddenly''

"Hmm I can understand Geet'' He caressed her hair and kissed on head. He made her look him. '' But do you know the most important thing here?''

"Kya?'

She wiped her tears..

"That you have won trust of Maan Singh Khurana and he have such power that he can change even the way of flowing wind if he want.. Then what Dadima and Mama Papa can do!!''

He said it with such attitude that made her smile.

"Achha!!''

"Hmm.. '

"So you don't fear them?''

"Of course not Geet.. you can try me''

"Hmm.. so you mean that MSK doesn't have fear of anything right" She walked some far and stood with crossed arms.

"Bilkul!!''

She turned him. "Toh fir thik hai.. Now its bet that I will make you feel fear. Are you ready!!''

Maan was happy that he was succeeded to make her forget her tension. "I'm so ready Geet!!''

She raised hand to him, "Bet!!''

He kept hand on her hand, and then suddenly pulled her to him. He stroked her hair from her cheeks and breathed, "I accept.. but what I would get in return hmm!!'' he caressed her lips softly, she looked down with shy smile then nodded. Maan was in no mood to leave her and she knew it very well. He bent close and then more close. She was waiting for his touch when his phone rang both startled. For few second both did not understand what happened.

"Maan your phone is ringing'' Geet chuckled. Maan glared her and saw.

"Dadi?''

In their moments they had completely forgot that Dadima was talking to Geet parents and now Geet fears gain came back, but this time it was little.

"Maan Beta agar aap dono ka romance khatam ho gaya ho toh can you both come down''

"Ji Dadi'' He said embarrassed. "Geet Dadi is calling us in hall''

Geet nodded. "Don't worry everything will be fine okay''

Geet smiled. Both came down and saw Dadi was sitting on couch. They could not what she had talked with Geet mother. "What happened Dadi'' Maan sat next to her and asked when Geet phone again sounded. She talked in private and after few minutes she came back almost on edge of cry.

"What happened Geet'' Maan asked worriedly.

"Mama wants me to come back leaving my job!!!'' She said…


Precap : Asha Ka Gussa 😆


Part 4 UPDATED

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amazing update...👏...thanks 4 the links of ur ffs...😃...

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