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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream



Wat a beautiful FF. Must say it has an amazing concept.

Geet introduced to d business world after her husband's death. She is shattered...

Adi n Vicky helping her d most. Vicky an intern Became so important for company. Liked how u developed each character.

Geet had a miscarriage... She has turned lifeless after her life going haywire. Adi n Vicky n infact Pinky helping her so much that now she became to smile atleast.

Maan wants the M.D. of MC as his secretary at any cost. Lol.
He wants revenge from her n at d same time wants her to work for him.

Geet's first day. Already giving him tough time... lol. The bubbly Geet is seen.

Raj n Muskan. Two new characters. Loved their personality n how Geet behaves with all of her staff.
One minute late n fired !!!! OMG. What is Maan made up of???,

They two also will have a role in Geet's life. I think so.

Will be waiting for next. Continue soon. Liked Ur writing style very much.



Glad you liked it...

Originally posted by: crazydream


Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.

Waiting for the update.



Sorry to keep you wiating but love that you bug me... it is a good reminder for me to update 😆

Originally posted by: crazydream

I want an update.
But u can do whatever u feel like. As exams are important.

N I like spamming the thread with Waitings. Its my favorite thing in IF.



Do spam, I won't mind😉. I really want to reach a second thread this time, I usually don't even get to 50 pages because I update so quickly and people don't comment so much...

Originally posted by: crazydream


Beautiful update.

Geet's second day at office... Again not giving Maan coffee...
Maan surprised to see her own coffee machine. Finishing her work quite efficiently.

Taking to riya. Showing Maan he is not superior as he thinks abt himself n boasts abt him. Showing his place as an ordinary man. Good going Geet.

Continue soon.
N all the best for Ur exam.



Thanks, exam went rotten, but loved to read all you comments...

Originally posted by: crazydream



Beautiful update

Maan just kept thinking abt Geet's words. It was distracting him.
He is smiling n family is happy to see that. Indeed he smiles rarely.
Loved how they enacted.

Maan actually sad that he is not meeting Geet. Jotting down d points he. Needs to know abt Geet. They r many.

Mr. DeMello coming. Not satisfied with the project.
I think Maan will give it to Geet.

N Maan is asking Geet abt d question.



Right guess, 👏, Maan asked Geet.

Originally posted by: crazydream



Beautiful update

Maan in a fix wat to do for the project. Last mein Geet ki help leni padi.
Geet shocked by d question. Maan had to say please for the first time ever.

Geet went thru pain opening up Geet heart. Maan Geet ko dekhta hi reh gaya.
Cudnt stand her tears.

Another set of question. By the time he starts knowing her he will have 100 questions for her with no answer.
Is he jealous of Raj???




yup, Maan doesn't know that Raj is Geet's driver because she told him that he could be in his casuals. That is why he is jealous... And don't worry, Maan will get his answers one by one...

Originally posted by: crazydream

Ok. Will wait patiently as u will update.
Good news ki Aaj update milega



Bus kuch hi replies baki hain, uske baad direct update...
Edited by Mina420 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

wow so geet in KC hmm waiting to know what would happen when maan knows it...

nice Muskan is now working with geet, atleast she will have a support...



Originally posted by: zaara2212

lovely update 😊 maan ki tho halath kharab 😉
oh poor maan was hurt 😭😭 wondering what would be next



Originally posted by: zaara2212

such a beautiful part
so finally maan and geet were able to talk it through hmm waiting for the face off 😉



Thanks for all your comments. Please continue to contribute to the story... I fell really encouraged...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

read all d parts...
really gr8 updates...loved them all...
continue soon...



Originally posted by: mishtypiya

gr8 update...
continue soon...



Originally posted by: mishtypiya

nice update...
continue soon...



Originally posted by: mishtypiya

nice update...
continue soon...



Welcome to the story, glad you are liking it. Do continue to comment and like...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

lmao
Cant stop laughing
Awesome updates dear



Glad you liked it...

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

clash

* BAMM *

Lol
Awesome update dear



When two equally head strong people collide, we can only expect BANGS 😆, can't we!

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

lol
Maan is falling for Geet
Nice updt



Yup, Maan is falling for her because she isn't like the girls he has come across so far...

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

awww ... Restless Maan ... Curious to know abt Geet
Lol


Lovely updt



He is not only curious but also a little jealous baby... did you notice how he is suspicious of Raj, Geet's driver...

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

more questions added to Maan's query list
Lol


Awww ... Poor Geet
Its so difficult for her



Answers will be added to his questions soon... Geet will have to go through all the pain to be able to take a step forward in life...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

Read all parts dear!amazing ff :)



Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

Awesome part. Maan trying to annoy geet but geet kuch kam thodi na hai lol.wow geet's new coffee machine :)that scene was nice dear.hmm geet's words hurt maan koi baat nahi malham tho aakhir geet hi lagayegi haina ;)



Welcome to the story. Mujhe ek strong Geet chaheyi thi. I am glad you like her... please continue to comment and like and hence support me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Note:
All replies from page 41 onwards. If I missed any out, please forgive me. I had to go through over 20 pages of comments to reply.


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Chapter 12

Geet went straight to her apartment. Raj had seen her wipe off her tears but didn't know if he could ask her. Once Geet entered she fell on her knees and tears started to spill. She shook her head in hope Sohan's memories would go away but she knew it was her heart that didn't want to let go. Geet filled a tub with cold water and dipped in. She held herself under the icy water for as long as she could. The coldness had the desired effect. Her body and mind froze and when she came back up she felt much better.

"I can't let myself be affected by all this. It was a simple question Maan had asked about feelings and yet I almost lost control. I need to forget, I need to move on" Geet kept saying.

Maan put the phone down. The car was registered to a Sohan Mishra. He made a note on his paper. Mishra was a very common surname yet it was very likely that he had a connection to Mishra Constructions. He finished his work on Mr DeMello's project.

Vicky had just had a talk. He had many of these talks and just like every time he went to his room with a bad mood. His dad had been after him to join KC. He had even sent off the application but it was rejected as it came in too late. His dad had accused him for doing it purposely and even though Vicky had denied it, he had to admit to himself that it was true. He never liked being told what to do. As an intern in KC he would be bossed around and had little say in matters. At MC tough Geet had given him a lot of free space. Geet managed pretty well now and could even do without him but yet she had given him the place of Executive MD along side Adi. She hadn't done it as a favour; she did it because she had seen Vicky's enthusiasm when it came to work. This was the main reason KC was not a place he would want to work. Maan Khurana never appreciated other peoples work; even Dev had complaint about it. But sooner or later Vicky would run out of excuses to tell his dad. He dreaded the time he found out but since that time was not now he shrugged it off and prepared for his evening out.

Naintara was sitting in front of the TV and watching her favourite TV serial. It was the typical stuff about monstrous mother-in-laws and failed love stories. Her mother-in-law and Dadi both joined her. She was utterly thankful for having a mother-in-law who had seen her as a daughter and not daughter-in-law. Both shared a strong bond and the care had increased when Naintara had informed her about the soon to come new addition. The family had been overjoyed at this news and even Dev who spent most of the time in office was making a point of coming home earlier to make sure she was alright. She was in her eight month now and her stomach had grown big. She complained about not being able to see her feet and having really bad back ache. Dev was at a loss. "I so wish this baby to come soon, Naintara's complaints are unbearable" he had muttered a little too loud under his breath and Naintara, having a moment of hers, threw the next thing she could grab at him. It was a vase and she hit right on his forehead.

"Ouch Naintara, this was so unnecessary."

"Of course it was. You are not the one with such a big stomach and horrendous back pain." She started to cry, not for the first time.

Dev knew how to cheer up his wife again.

"By the way, I was thinking of buying a crib today. We have been putting it off so many times now. What do you think?" Her tears vanished and a big smile came on her face. A chance to empty Dev's pocket's she never missed out.

"I must say, Riya has out done herself this time. We are hoping for very high results in her forthcoming finals" the principle announced cheerfully. Geet felt proud of her.

"I will try my best to come for her last exams to pick her up then. Armaan finished a week earlier and I want to make up for the time I have missed if it is alright with you."

"Absolutely no problem. The little boy had had a hard time so I will grant him this pleasure. If you want I can arrange for lodgings on campus so you can stay near Riya as well."

"I don't think this is a good idea. She will only get distracted with my presence. The last thing I want her to do is lose concentration shortly before her exams."

"As you wish Geet. Good bye"

"Bye Sister Margret."

Geet felt cheerful. In a few weeks she would have both Riya and Armaan with her again. She would arrange for Riya to stay here in Delhi to do her further studies and Armaan would join his old school again. Now since MC was doing so well and she managed to balance her work much better it would be easy to spend some more time with both. And she would quit work at KC. She wanted to do it since she had to help in the project but some how never got a chance. She typed her resignation letter and put it into her bag.

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Edited by Mina420 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
YAYEE ME FIRST !!!!

Will comment tomorrow feeling sleepy now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update! But no Maaneet! 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
Geet wants to leave kc
Vicky happy working with geet than kc
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago


Maan has started his mission --know Geet...he get to know that car is registered in name of Sohan...so he is getting close to know Geet's true identity...what will be his reaction when he will come to know that Geet is MD of rival company...he will think that Geet came there to cheat him and get secret information...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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