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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _lehar_

thanks for double treat

loved both parts
god can save maan from geet
she is functual and perfcionist in her work maan has to admit that
he cant say anything to her ...
geet is freindly with everyone how easily she made muskan come out from her nervousness...
why i have a strong feeling that vicky is related to khurana family...
waiting for the next part
continue soon



double treat won't be often 😛. I give double treat but then I only get single comment😭. Not fair...


Originally posted by: _lehar_

wow what a wonderful part

loving this geet and maan...
maan delebratly gave her more files and told her complete whithin one hour
he asked her coffee but she ignored and started her work maan barged into her room and shouted at her for not giving him the coffee
she handed him coffee mug ...maan saw coffee machine and asked whe did the coffee machine come geet told him she brought the coffee machine
geet got call from muskan clinet want to meer her one hour before than actual time geet told her she is coming
geet told maan that he is rich rude and arrogant he is nothing special in him if he gives her respect she gives him respect and saying this she went away leaving maan in thought about what she just said
please update the next part soon na it's getting intresting ...cant wait long



Glad you are liking the plot. And are also keeping up with it... My last story was too complicated, many couldn'T follow the story line...

Originally posted by: _lehar_

nice part

loved it
geet thought that maan didn't attend the party but maan's mother forced him to go there.
loved the convo between maan and geet



Another situation to bring them together...😃

Originally posted by: _lehar_

wonderful part

loved it
maan thinking about geet and her indifferent behaviour towards him...
he wanted to know about her but he didn't get anything from her employee file
interesting precap
now who is asking whom ...may be maan asking geet or may be geet asking maan 😛
waiting for the next part
continue soon



placing on the safe side by giving both options 😆. But that also means that you are right in one way 👍🏼

Originally posted by: _lehar_

nice part

loved it
maan called geet and asked her come to office...
maan question about feelings bring back past meomories of geet...she was at the edge of crying but she controled herself and answered his question...
maan saw geet wiping her teares it pinched him he added some more questions to his questioneer...hope soon he will get the answres for his questions
waiting for the next part
continue soon



True, one by one he will get all his answers... thanks for all your long and regualr comments. they are appreciated and liked 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 6
nice...
Geet is Soham's widow...
poor her...
shes coping up...
but this bubbly Geet is coming out...



Originally posted by: spvd

part 7
awesome...
interesting Maan is getting affected by Geet...
cont soon dear...



Originally posted by: spvd

well update is more imp but reply to the comments are also nice...so try to do the latter too...



Usually I never find the time for replying but for this story I thought I will only update after I found time to reply to comments. It is a little difficult, especially after everyone is eager to read further...

Originally posted by: spvd

part 8
awesome...
Geet is very bold...
and Maan glad he didnt do anything harsh...
cont soon dear...



Originally posted by: spvd

part 9
awesome...
so Maan still doesnt shes the MD?
cont soon dear...



Originally posted by: spvd

part 10
nice part...
Maan is intrigued by Geet...
cont soon dear...



Originally posted by: spvd

part 11
nice part...
Geet is trying to close her emotions and feelings to keep herself stable...
cont soon dear...



Dear Deepa, thanks for your regular comments. I love to see regulars who take out time to tell how one finds the writing... It is much appreciated. Thanks...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tyro

lovely part...


poor maan...this is just the start...



Originally posted by: Tyro

still he doesnt know...

nice part...



Originally posted by: Tyro

so now he is obsessed abt her...nice...



Originally posted by: Tyro

so he wants to knw more n more abt her...



Thanks for liking the updates. Maan will find out about Geet in his own time, he is still playing detective and in the process also falling for Geet...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

Superb update...
Geet going to make maans life hell as his.Secretary...
Loved the update...



But Maan called it upon himself after forcing her to join 😆

Originally posted by: Ash1991

Loved the update...
Geet irritating maan so much...



Glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: Ash1991

Superb update...
Loved it a lot...
I guess maan is asking geet...



👍🏼 Right guess...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

ystrdy found dis stry nd rd all prts,,,,amazing stry ,,,,ur writing style s osm.geets chrectr s ry strng ,handld everything maturely nd nt dpended on maan,maan as usual sadu msk ab geet isko seedha karegii,,,,😆coffee sene mast tha yaar,geet ne sirf sixer hi maare hei contract cnditions se leke ist dy at kc tak...aur geets driver made maan rstless,,,,abhii tym lagega accept karne mein kyon mr msk...😆lov adi nd Vicky taking care of geet as frends ,it seems Vicky hs sm cnection wid msk ,,,,kanhi vsk to nehiii,,,,,??count me 2 in ur fan list,,,,,waiting egerly 4 nxt prt,,,,kab milega,,,???😳



Welcome to the story. I am happy you enjoy reading it. Yup, Geet is strong and making Maan think about her. Raj is making Maan restless, naturally a person like him will feel a little insecure.

Originally posted by: LILY111144

u r amazing ,super stry nd flow s osm,,,,,,main thing of dis stry s geets character ,very strong nd I lo v it...I like de way geet showed mirror 2 mann,,,👏👏👏👏👏I also want coffee 4rm dis mashine,,,,,😛😆ab nxt updttt milne ka chance kab hei,,,,,,,??😊alrdy waiting,,,,,😆



I can recoomened the DeLonghi... I love it 😳. Every time I see black coffee, I think about Maan 😆

Originally posted by: LILY111144

I noe u r bsy ,,,still cant stop myslf 4rm buging u,,,,,,😛😆waiting egerly 4 updttt,kab milega,,,,,,,????Photo Image



I love to be bugged, so don't apologize... Sorry to keep you waiting for updates. Uni keeps me busy...and on top of that I had decided to reply to comments before updating but obviously it isn'T always possible as I have figured out.

Originally posted by: LILY111144

😛 I sandwichd de updttt,,,,,😆
lov cnvo btween maan nd geet,,,
s Vicky maans brthr,,,??
kya hoga jab maan ko pta chalega geet md of mc...??



Maan ko jab pata lagega, tumhe pata chal jaega...😉

Originally posted by: LILY111144

maan influencd by geet,,,lov de line...for vry long he ws waiting on platform 4 rite train 2 take hm awy 4rm de hell ...lovly updtt,,,thnx 4 updttng,,,,😊I think dis q askd geet 2 maan,,,,don't tesase us yaar ,,waise hi updtt kar do na ,,,butiful stry,eger 4 nxt,,,,😳



Thanks for liking that particular line...I love to tease you guys. I was planning on some cliffhangers but it might not be possible due to the way I split up the chapters.

Originally posted by: LILY111144

emotionl updtt,,,maan ki list bad rehii hei,,,,maan geet ko sadness se nikalega,,,hope geet ko jaldi hi happiness mile ,,maan ke roop mein,,,bt kya hoga jab man ko pta chalega geet s hs opponent,,,,,



I have planned my own twist when he finds out who Geet really is. I hope you will like it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shruthe

Just read all the three updates...

awesome and its getting very interesting...



Thanks, please continue to read, comment and like !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk-1

first update then reply 😉
am very eager to know wat gonna happen next ..



Originally posted by: mrk-1

loved it !!!! i cant help but ask you to update the next part soon ;)



Thanks... I would like to update quicker but I find it important to reply to comments too... Please continue to give in your view...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JayaR

very interesting story line. ...
loving the way how geet is having an upper hand on maan



Thanks for liking the plot. I wanted a strong and not a demure Geet. Someone who is level to level with Maan...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

just read all the 7 parts
loving it a lot😊
eagerly waiting for the next part



Thanks and welcome to the story

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

just awesome part👍🏼
maan felt bad when geet said nothing special



But Maan needed a reality check !!!

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

Cute part
Maan didn't turn up after geet said those words...geet too felt bad
Both meet at party...but maan did come to know about geet
I have a doubt is vicky maan's brother



Maan's and Vicky's relation will be solved soon...

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

nice part😊
man want to prove that he is special👍🏼
he wants to find about geet ...but couldn't find
i think geet is asking maan



wrong guess but good try anyways... Maan definetly is intrigued by Geet...

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

Beautuful part
Geet remembered her & sohan talks
Maan felt bad seeing her tears
Waiting to see what details maan will find from his list



Maan will get his answers one by one... keep reading to find out more...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



Geet started working as Maan's secretary...

and on her firs day itself she gave him big jhatka...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...



Now that he forced her to join, he has to indure all this 😆. It's his own fault...

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




wonderfully emotional updates...

sorry for late reply...

I was on vacations...

so Maan's list is increasing...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...




Hope you had a nice vacation... Please continue to comment and like the further updates...

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