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Posted: 11 years ago
Woohoo...super love ur update...been waiting for it 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved their fight
also dinning table scene
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another Awesome part by u... Day by day i m getting addicted to this story... Loved how Zoya took care of Asad n Asad's anger towards Zoya... N their cute little Nok Jhok is just superb... How much they love each other bt their past always come...
Hope Asad gets to knw the truth soon n confronts dilshad soon...
Thanks 4 d pm n do update nxt part soon...



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~JAZ~
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Posted: 11 years ago
WAT AN UPDATE YAARR...BUT HATE ASAD'S CHARACTER FOR TREATING ZOYA THAT WAY...WHY IS HIS MOTHER LAUGHING WHEN SHE IS SUPPOSED TO BE TELLING ASAD SHE IS THE MAIN REASON BEHIND THEIR SEPARATION SO THAT ASAD WILL STOP HATING ZOYA...HOPE ZOYA GOES BACK TO THE STATES AND LET'S SEE WHAT ASAD AND HIS MOTHER DOES THIS TIME...
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Posted: 11 years ago
emotionally packed update, hope asad gets 2 know da truth soon.
can't wait read more of u r ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heya,
Thank you sooo much for the shout out. a tight wala hug from my side too just for you, 🤗.
okay now before I come to the part, tell me how do you get songs so similar to your chaps, like yaar I fall in love with the lyrics. they just say it all in a jist. I could so feel Zoe saying all this to Asad. just awesome.
now coming to the part, why were you uncertain about it? it of course was progressive & as good as all have been, 👍🏼
I seriously feel sad for Asad, poor thing is so vulnerable at this point in life. he wants to move on in life holding her hand but the past keeps hindering their way to it. his tears & words just made me so upset. I really can never see Asad cry, it's heart breaking, 🥺. he felt to me as a lost baby, who had his favorite thing in the world in front of him but still couldn't have it.
even in his deep sleep his mind & body can recognize, feel & be in sync with Zoe's. of course it must have been soothing to have her like this in his arms while sleeping after ages. but then of course Akdu was supposed to bounce back.
well have to give it to Zoe for giving him back his attitude. I know he's hurting but still his words were disgusting. how can he even say that about her?
Ayaan, poor thing. being new to the whole AsYa fights is worried. I agree with Dilshaad, Asad needs to let it all out in his arguments to get back in peace.
I just loved Zoe's outburst as she came out of the room & couldn't stop laughing as she burst on Ayaan.
okay the flashback part. it was beautiful. I really coud get the feel of how elated AsYa must have been at their wedding, though simple, it meant the world to them just being together.
now where is Asad off to?
that heading on the top, of updating in an hour, kab se lagayi hui hai? I mean, like seriously you're updating in this day?? 😵
lots of love till then..
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Posted: 11 years ago

So here goes the next chapter..nn well...read it lemme know...


Ch16b



Nikhat and Humeira stood up as they saw Zoya arriving with Ayaan, Nikhat running up to her and hugging her,breathing a sigh of relief seeing her all right.

Nikhat- Zoya aap kahan the?? I was so worried for you. Humeira called me to tell me that you weren't home the whole night...kya hua Zoya sab theek to hai naa?? Asad kaise hai..is he Ok...

Hearing his name from Nikhat's mouth shocked Zoya..

Zoya- Uh..Nikhat..wwat do you mean..I uh..I dunno about Mr Khan..

Nikhat..-Zoya I know everything...I have known it since I talked to your aapi...she told me everything and asked me to take care of you..and when..she started crying..as she took in for her hug..

Seeing Nikhat so distressed and realizing that her best friend knew all about it, took all the guilt she had been holding away. She hugged her tight as she cried along with her finally having her friend by her side to help her through it.

Ayaan and Humeira looked at each other, humeira realizing that the secret was out. She looked at Ayaan wanting him to tell her all about it.

Nikhat- Zoya sab theek hai naa..Asad is alright??

Zoya- Nikhat Asad is broken,he found..he found the divorce papers and I know that its killing him inside...and I don't know what to do. I want to help him but he is pushing me away...She sobbed..

In the meanwhile Ayaan had pulled Humeira aside and apologised for his behavior, ending their conversation by sharing what he had found out. Humeira was shocked.

Humeira- What they were married??

Zoya-Haan yeh sach hai..and I am very sorry for keeping it from both of you. It was just a part of my past I didn't want to deal with or talk about it. But I guess fate had other plans in mind, but its for the better. Now all of you can help me get that Akdu Ahmed Khan out of his past, rite?? She smiled through her tears, receiveing nods of approval from all the 3 as they closed in to Zoya taking her in for a group hug.

~~

Asad didn't come home that night, making the excuse of being busy with another shoot, followed by his assistant packing up his bag the next day and letting Dilshad know that Asad would be gone for a bit.

~~

It had been around 10 days and Asad had still not returned, disregarding every plea from his family of coming back.He would just make up a story of being busy in a shoot, but they knew better and stopped calling him after the first few days.

Asad had been living in his home away from home, in Mahabaleshwar, allowing himself the luxury of silence. Finally after the phone calls had subsided he had let himself get lost in the vaccum of nothing. He spent his days in quiet retrospect, staring into nothings and ending the day with voiceless thoughts. He enjoyed sitting on his drafting table and refreshing his architectural skills, his time becoming nothing but a fleeting moment when he immersed himself into the predictable and regulated lines and measurments, giving him a sense of control in this otherwise out of control life. But despite the stillness of the moments he was spending, a ripple came about everytime a thought crossed his mind.

It had been 10 days and everyone from his team, his friends and well wishers and no doubt his family had called him, wanting to know where he was and when he planned to come back. But Zoya never called, no one ever mentioned her, or about the turn of events leading upto today. It bothered him, it made him insecure...Did she not care for him?? It made him scared?? Did I say too much the last time we fought?? It made him anxious...was she alright??Did she do something stupid and get into trouble..like she always does??? And what made him pack his bags and turn back was the most prominent and nagging thought...Did she leave?? Again?? He shoved his bags in the car and made his way back home..his need to be in solitary confinment evaporating in the heat of his concerns.

Asad got back home and stepped in, his mom walking towards him and hugging him, seeing him arrive.

Dilshad- Aa gaye Asad?? How was the shooting...she emphasized on the word shooting...gauging at his reaction..

Asad didn't quite meet her eyes when he responded with a good, making his way to his room and neatly restacking his stuff. He changed into his home clothes, heading out to look for Ayaan to discuss about the next schedule for his movie, subconsciously hoping to stumble upon some information regarding Zoya.

Asad- Ammi aapne Ayaan ko dekha?? He is not in his room

Dilshad- Haan woh bas aata hi hoga, here have some coffee.

Asad sipped on his coffee, just as Ayaan and Humeira walked in, hand in hand lost in each other eyes, making Asad's heart contract. Their love reminded him of what he and Zoya had shared..but seeing where his thoughts were taking him, he stood up, wanting to distract himself.

Asad-Ayaan, Humeira how are you...he spoke as he made his way towards the living area.

Both looked at him, their surprise apparent in their eyes.

Ayaan-Bhaijaan aap aa gaye?? Kaise rahi aapki shooting..again the word shooting was emphasized..making Asad gulp down a sip.

Humeira-Haan bhainjaan Ayaan bata rahe the ki aap kisi shooting mein kaafi busy the..

Asad-Haan it was good..but forget about me..you guys tell me...hows everything..Humeria aap kaise ho ghar mein sab khairiyat...he looked at her, masking his anticipation.

But Ayaan and Humeira sensed where his question was aimed at..

Humeira- Haan bhaijaan sab khairiyaat hai, bas ghar thoda suna suna ho gaya hai..

Asad-Woh kyun??

Humeira-Kuch nahi rehne dijiye...

Asad-Arre kuch serious hai kya??

Humeira..looked at Ayaan to see where and how should she proceed..Ayaan winked..

Humeira-Kuch nahi bhaijaan..jabse Zoya aur Mango ghar se gaye hai..ghar kaafi viraan ho gaya hai..

Asad almost spluttered his coffee,hearing of Zoya's departure..

ASad-What?? Zoya left??

Ayaan turned around not able to contain his laughter..but Humeira held her own..

Humeira-Ji bhaijaan..Zoya decided to leave after Valentines day.

Oh..was the response..as Asad abruptly walked to his room, leaving Humeira and Ayaan breaking into fits of laughter.

She left?? Asad still couldn't believe what he heard...he paced around his room...running his hands through his hair, trying to make sense of the situation. How could she leave...I don't understand..was I that rude?? Was I the one to make her leave, Omg where did she go, what if something happens to her...his mind was plagued with such thoughts when a bark broke his turmoil.

As he looked up, Mango came running, jumping on him...showering him with wet kisses..

As he lay on his bed, Mango licking away, he heard her laughter..or was he dreaming. He didn't know what was going on, as he stepped out of his room and walked in the direction of her laughter.

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Zoya's vivaciousness was what greeted Asad when he stepped out. She was busy laughing with Najma, Ayaan and Humeira, his mother 100% part of the group.All seemed to be oblivious of his presence enjoying their own private joke.

Dilshad's gaze finally fell on a very puzzled Asad and her laughter stoped, promting the others to look in the same direction.

Zoya's eyes locked with Asad's and the world stood still..Her heart seemed to beat faster trying to compensate for the days she had not seen him. He was back, back to his old self, confident, strong, and arrogant...He was still a jerk and she still hated him for what he had said but still ,seeing him sane again eased the ache in her heart. She involuntarily sighed...Making Asad frown in confusion..

Asad-what are you doing here??

Zoya-I live here..

Asad-what the hell are you talking about..this is my home..

Zoya-Well you got that right..but its my ammi's house too..and she invited me to stay over, until I am here in India.

Dilshad-Haan Zoya ko maine hi kahan yahan rehne ko..aakhir who meri beti hai..

Asad-What is she doing here..he repeated himself..

Dilshad-Asad just calm down..she lives here..and you'll have to deal with it..

Zoya-Yes deal with it Mr Akdu Ahmed Khan..I am here for my ammi..so stop with the questions..

Asad- Zoya just shut up..this is my home and she is my ammi...so don't interfere...

Zoya- Well its my ammi's house first and then yours...so you shut up..

Asad-What the hell... He darted towards her..just as Dilshad came in the way..stopping him..

Dilshad-Bas karo Asad...enough is enough..Zoya is staying here and that's final..now shut up and come have dinner..you both can continue your fight afterwards.

Asad-Ammi..

Dilshad-Asad..go..sit.. She ordered.

~~

Dinner was an interesting time in the Khan Villa...with everyone other than Asad enjoying.Asad even though felt relived to see Zoya alright, was getting madder by the minute. Seeing her laugh and chat with others, as if unaware of her doings, just made Asad'd nostrils flair. He pushed back his chair and walked out to his room, leaving the rest perplexed.

~~

A few days passed,Asad and Zoya acted the way they always did, Zoya stayed true to herself..happy, chirpy and talkative, while Asad sulked around, leaving no stone unturned to put Zoya down, to fight with her..It had become a routine between them, arguing with each other, fighting and making the others life a living hell, but that was just a pretense.Underneath it all, they constanly looked for the other when one went missing, caring indirectly if something went wrong, the only reason why everyone let them be. They had 2 more weeks before they headed for San Fransisco.Mango was the only exception to their setting, she only went for her walks when both of them accompanied her,making her one happy dog, walking with 2 angry owners...

Asad and Zoya had just returned from their walks, another fight resting at half time.Both made way to their rooms, located across each other, Mango choosing to follow Asad. He had just changed when his phone buzzed, the conversation making his blood boil.He stomped out of his room and switched on the news channel..only to be slapped by images of him kissing a girl whose face was hidden by his head.

Asad- F**K F**K F**K F**K..he sweared...as the news continued with ..additional accusations on the star..the thugs had lodged a complaint against him, his assitstant calling him to say so.The news channel was fishing in information by interviewing the thug he had punched, asking him inappropriate questions and the thug eagerly responding.

Thug-O ya he was making out with some S**T..and when we tried to stop him telling him about the policeman, he just came and punched me in the face..arre yaar..superstar hai to kya hua, arre humne ek comment kya de di dekho kya haalat kardi, and woh jab rules tode to unhe aise hi jaane diya jaata hai..yaar ..ladkiyaa ghoomnane ka itna hi shauk hai to jaaye hotel mein..yahan raat ko public place mein...chi chi chi..

Asad was fuming... and as the interview ended.. he lifted the tv in his rage, unable to listen to this crap anymore and hurled it around the room, a loud CRASH filling the house.

Dilshad,Najma and Zoya rushed out, concerned and seeing the plight of the TV..they were shocked..

Right then Asad crashed another vase off the table, making Zoya rush to his side wanting to stop it..She grabbed his hands before he dropped anything else, but he just shoved her off, his force making Zoya fall onto the couch..

She got up again..Asad stop...Allah ke liye stop...

Dilshad and Najma were too shocked seeing Asad in such a state to react..

He pushed her away...Get the F**K out of my way...and my life...ZOYA...this is all because of you...ever since you cam into my life again..you have taken the peace away...you have infected every part of my life...with your...god damn it..just go...I don't want to see your face again...

Zoya-Asad mind your tongue...don't you dare accuse me..har baat ki ek hadd hoti hai..I've had enough with this already..

Asad- You've have had enough of it..you...Ya rite...It should be me...that should be using those words...

Dilshad-Asad please tell me what happened...

Asad-Ammi is ladki ne meri zindagi tabaah ki hai..and even then she is not content...and today because of her..my name is being slashed in the media...

Zoya- What the hell are you talking about...what hell did I do to you...

HA HA HA...you are a genius Zoya...I am the one that has been played for a fool...I should have known that nothing good can ever come out of it...n stupid me..I wanted to give our relationship a second chance..i should have known better...

Zoya-ENOUGH Asad stop it..

Asad-NO I wont..now its your turn to listen...

Zoya- Then bol do..aaj job hi hai sab bol do..let me see how much hatered you have within you..come on speak it out..her eyes brimming with angry tears..

Asad-Why did you kiss me Zoya..why did you pull me in..why did you say I love you..when it means nothing at all..I fell for it once again and forgot everything..wanting to move forward..but I should have known..n ab dekho..it is the talk of the town...Superstar..ki aiyaashiyann..Mr Asad Ahmed Khan found making out on the beach, has no reagrds for rules, punched a concerned citizen for stopping him...How far has he gone...

Zoya couldn't believe what she heard..

Zoya-Asad..OMG...what will happen now..

Asad-That's none of your god damn business..you have done enough damage already...

Zoya- Asad maybe I can help..I can clear things out ...

Asad- What help..havent you done enough already...Zoya...u cant help anyone..a girl that only sees where her interests lie cant think of anyone else then herself. I know as I have been on the receiving end. You made all the promises in the world when we got married, made me believe in the possibility of a happily ever after and when the going got tough, and when Miss Zoya Farooqi had to deal with hard times, when I needed her by my side..what did she do?? She ran away, she sent me the divorce papers with her signatures.She couldn't take the responsibility of a marriage, the most sacred union amongst a man and a woman, she couldn't bear the weight of being Mrs Zoya Asad Khan...so she ran away..and cut all her ties...Miss Zoya Farooqi cannot help anyone..she just knows how to run...RUN RUN RUN...So no I don't need you help Miss Farooqi..I can take care of myself..I am no longer blinded by the illusion of your good heartedness. You are a selfish woman, who has no value of anything in her life..

Smack...Dilshad's slap on Asad's face.

Dilshad-Asad today you crossed all the limits of civility...today you disgraced me by speaking the words you did...Arre what do you know about the reason why Zoya did what she did, if you knew anything about it..you would want to punish yourself for the words you have used...

Zoya-Ammi please kuch mat kahiye..

Dilshad-Nahi Zoya I need to do this..I need to smack some sense in my son..he doesn't know what he is talking about..and its high time he knows..

Asad stood their in shock, not able to believe his mother had slapped him...

Zya-ammi nahi please aap aisa kuch nahi karengi..aap chaliye mere saath..

Dilshaad-Let me go Zoya..aaj to baat hone do..

Zoya-Ammi..

Asad- Why are you stopping her Zoya..let her speak..let her also speak high of you..maybe that'll make you feel guilty for tricking the woman that loved you like her daughter..his voice spewed of anger.

Dilshad-Bas karo Asad..agar tumhe kuch bhi andaaza hota ki Zoya ne kya kiya hai..to aaj yeh gussa tum mujh par nikaal rahe hote..you would have been disgusted by your own mother..

Asad-Ammi please don't take her blame on yourself..she doesn't deserve it..

Zoya could see the immense trust Asad had for his mother and if today Dilshaad reveald the truth behind their split, then Asad would break beyond repair, she had to take the balme on herself, to save their relationship..

Zoya-Ammi aapko meri kasam aap kuch nahi kahengi..With that Dilshad's tongue stammered, unable to speak any further, her eyes filling with pain...

Dilshad-Zoya yeh tumne kya keh diya...she looked at her her eyes filled with tears..

Zoya-Ammi its for the better..With that she walked up to Asad and looked him straight in the eye..

Zoya-Asad I had my reasons to leave you and I felt guilty for doing so.I have suffered more than you have, bearing the guilt of leaving you stranded.But after today, after hearing what you said, I no longer feel the guilt. I guess Allah made me take the right decision, despite of what I believed for the last 5 years. I might be selfish Asad, but atleast I didn't say things that would live in ones heart for eternity. I did you wrong and I was ready for penance, I was ready to take in all the venom you had harbored within you, but not anymore...you wiped the slate clean when you accused me of disrespecting the piousness of marriage, when you questioned my intentions behind my love for you, when you accused me of running away from my responsibilities. We are even now Mr Asad Ahmed Khan and from here on it will be Allah's call what he wants from the two of us. With that she walked away, only to turn back to finish off with the last remark

Zoya- And yes I am sorry but your desire of me leaving your house wont be fulfilled. I came here to live with my ammi and I am selfish enough to live here, to be loved and taken care of by her, so DEAL WITH IT!! With that she walked out, leaving a broken Dilshad and a speechlees Asad behind.


I KNOW I KNOW..I am making Asad very mean...but please have a lil faith..the extreme the rise and fall..the more prominent its reaction..so please bear with it..it was a lil on the sadder side...but it will TURNAROUND😉..I promise..picture abhi baaki hai boss😆..n for all of u that are questioning why Dilshad is not opening her mouth and clearing the doubts..well there are 2 reasons..

1-I want Asad and Zoya to sort it all out between themselves and fall in love again..become strong again..become inseparable..without any outside tools..

2-Its still a little premature..in my head to make Asad go through another trauma...his respect for his mother will fall immensely..if the truth comes out now..maybe in the future when his internal strength comes back..courtesy Zoya...it will be a better stage for that revelation..

So please bear with that also...

Another justification for Asad..(I guess the only reason I am justifying it is so that u dont wander off in another direction..) He is hurting inside..and finally he is letting it all go..he is puking the poison..so it is bound to get a lil messy...I knw he is hurting Zoya with his words..but she is no less she put him in his place..everytime..and things will TURNAROUND😉..so have some patience...


Now tell me how was it??? COMMENT LIKE COMMENT LIKE COMMENT LIKE COMMENT LIKE COMMENT LIKE COMMENT LIKE COMMENT LIKE ...n dont forget to comment for both the chapters..I just love to hear from all of ya..n I love responding to ur comments..N i guess I am running out of creative ways of saying thank u to all u single word lovers.😆 JK...So maybe 2 words???😃 I wont push u for a full sentence...baby steps..😉 I know SanFran is still pending but it will come up in an update or 2..bringing with it its own bag of wonders...LOL..

Next update..I'll try to make it lite..but if I wanna stay true to the story..it mite still be a lil👎🏼..but Zoya is the BOMB...she will bounce back her personality untainted..so stay tuned for the next...I'll try to update that in a day..Lets c..😃...


Chalo..leave ur comments n I'll cya on the other side...

Until Later...umm...I am off for a cozy good night🥱

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice going...loved the way zoya gave back...waiting for the next...one hour is up...i guess
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second opne is good...but a bit sad...best part...zoya ways of handling...sensible... continue soon..thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
ya allah...!!! it was a really heavy nd sad update... m literally cryin...!! bt i think its high time asad should let go of being mean...! how much more will he hurt zoya??? d only part i liked was wen humeira tells asad dat zoya left her house nd d way asad was frustrated nd concerned...!! bt plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz now bring bak our old asad hu was hopelessly in love wid zoya... was wonderin if to bring bak hamare purane asad miyaa u wud show a mangalpuri asad...??!! juz a suggestion...! :P
bt i liked d update...

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