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Ramlath thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice writing... Update soon...nd tnks fr d pm...😃
Ramlath thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dear ...👏
Thanks for the pm n please update soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update ❤️
loved it...
continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb!!! asad is continously humilating zoya...but I am happy she is staying at his place...make things good soon...i know ayra,nikhat,dilshaad n najma will surely help asya sort out the past...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love da way story progress...
Such a nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

Hey hun...thanks for respondin...n m so sorry for takin a few days to get back...but just been so out of it lately..yeh kambakhat snow ne to hibernation mein bhej diya hai...😭..LOL..neways..m glad u responed...soch hi rahi thi ki kaha ghum ho gayi???😆 ..neways..street food..well we get a lot of desi food..but yes woh taste nahi jo India mein hai...but I come home all the time..n thats wat me n my hubby do...Hog on street food😃...

M glad u liked Zoya teasing Asad...yaar yeh bhi koi baat hai..not eating street food😲..of course Zoya will tease..😆..
N i guess the Love u..was needed to see where Zoya stands helping with the coming chapters..Asad needs to come around too..n with every encounter he does..n the kiss just added on to it..😳😃
Fighting goons= gettin Asad riled up=helping with the next chapter...
N i guess now u already know what the paper was...😉
N hey Asad will be ..u knw wat..so stay tunned..cya in my response to ur next comment..😃



heyoo di...its okay...u responded back na...tat is wat matters😳

i wud loveee to seee some snow...yahaan mumbai mein toh hoti hi nhi hai😭

u both hog on street food😆 but i wud agree wid asad...its unhealthy😉

yeah i know wat tat wonderful paper is🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

HMM..k then..here's the trick...I pour my heart in my writing..n then wait patiently..for comments...n wen I get such amazing and elobrate comments as urs..I gett very very elated...that just motivates me even more...n put in even more of my heart n soul into my writing..n come up with the next update...n such is the trick..keepin the wheels turning...its an ongoing process...😉
M really really very flattered that u liked this update...it surely was an important update..the high of the story..n m relieved that it didnt go that bad...PHEW...n hey I stayed true to my words..by hopefully giving u the dhamaka I was talking about...marriage and divorce papers...😃..but all will be gud...so dont ya worry...gal..n Dilshad ka bhi time aayega..filhaal let the 2 premi..get past their issues... Ayaan will be of gr8 help n longer a nuicance now that he knows everything...he will help out..N I guess Asad is a lil numb n maybe hi drunken state will allow for Zoya to be around him...😉 n help him...Dilshad n Zoya love each other..n care a lot for each other..n in such strong relationships..its easier to let go ..n move ahead...n Zoya bein Zoya..a girl with a golden heart...took the 1st step..in lettin go..n now its all bout Asad letting go..n so many ppl r gonna play cupids here...😆...
HUN...so very very happy at readin ur comments..n u likin it so much...took me out of my hibernation for a bit..now thats magic dont u think..😆 Aashna winters mein hibernate hi karti hai..n its hard to pull her out..other than flying off to a beach...n now ur comments...so CHEERS on that...
N gal..dont u worry bout commentin late..I guess we r even now..main bhi kaafi late respond kar rahi hu..😳
N hey dont get upset...this is not a sad story..infact..ab to fun hoga..naa...SF ka time aa raha hai..n ab wat else can go wrong..n upar se..Zoya is back..so she will make it all rite..n Asad has no chance to stay down n sulk...Zoya wont let that happen...so cheer up...n 😃


YOU POSTED SUCH A BIGGG REPLY ON MY STUPID COMMENT!😲😳 thnk youuu😃

ur trick is amazing...i know u pour ur heart n soul into this ff tabhi toh we get such amzing updates😃

it wasnt bad AT ALL...why wud you even think tat😕

DHAMAKA...it was much more than tat...realyy...my brain was about to explode🤢

seee...dint i tell you tat i had put a spy on you n now i know ur black magic tricks...hahahaha

yes i know some sad updates were needed...you will make everything fine soonn⭐️


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

AWWW...come ere..🤗..BIG WALA BEAR HUG..(even though m not a hugger..😳)..c..thats how happy u made me..wen I read ur comment...ur shout out to all the readers...haai...m so so so...happy n touched...AWWW...here comes another one..🤗..Wat the hell...lagta hai..seekh gayi tum...black magic..making me wanna hug u..that too twice...LOL..btu still u made me very happy reading it...n takin the time to promote my story...I bow down to u in appreciation..thats was truly very sweet of u...cheers!!!!😃👏



yayyy now i finally know ur trickss!!!!!!

seee you hugged me twice...and u know wat i hugged u right back then itself😳

pleasee dont bow down now...ofcourse i had ask the silent readers to respond to you...⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
YOU HAVE AGAIN UPDATED TWO CHAPTERS😃
will be back wid my comments soon🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Aashna,
Okay before I start with anything, there's a request. 🤔 Can I have Mango for a day, please, pretty please. I am in love with her! God, how can she be soo cute??
hmm now to the part, waisey I wasn't expecting you to post right after my comment, I thought it would you a bit longer. but I'm all too glad to read it. took time kyunki this story gets to my head & in this one, by the end of it, I had tears rolling down. Gosh, how do you write so well??
So now Zoe has all the support & help she needs to straighten that Akdu, great 😉.
You gave me a shock when you said he didn't return home for 10 days 😲 . I understand his situation. so it does affect him if Zoe doesn't call him n ask about his whereabouts.
the part where Humi tells him that Zoe left the house, I knew she meant settled in her own house, but never had I thought she'll come to stay in his house itself. that's a wow. well this really is her HOME. couldn't help but laugh at Asad's response.
so typical Asad-Zoe to fight, kill the other with their constant bickering but looking out for each other's well being.
these thugs proved out to be even cheap than what I thought. I thought Asad's punch had taught them a lesson but nopes. okay but Asad but this is being unfair. how can you blame all on her, you were equally involved in whatever she was doing to you.
I know you are hurt & Zoe is responsible for it, whatever be the reason but still it doesn't mean you insult her so much. everything you said was pure frustration & the rage building up in you. I know once you cool down, you'll realize your folly but still it did hurt, a lot.
I appreciate Zoe's attempt to stop Dilshad from speaking the truth.👏 how much ever I want Asad to know the truth & stop accusing Zoe, I agree that this isn't the time for it. because it will not do any good, instead Asad's going to break beyond repair.
He needs time to face everything & besides that the most important thing he requires is Zoe's constant love & presence in his life to cure all the pain. he wants her to take his pain away, like he himself said in drunken state but isn't acknowledging now. so all that is needed is to fall for again, crazily like he was earlier.
okay now enough of my bakbak. you are supposed to bring in the next part soon. I know its not going to be real happening cox it wud look odd for Asad to be all okay so soon but yup when Zoe's there, some excitement is bound to be there & that too with Ayaan 😛. hey its going to be fun seeing both driving Akdu insane, if you plan on doing so.
lots & lots of love 🤗.
Edited by Rarepearl - 11 years ago

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