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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Friends...Here is a new OS ...Its a bit different from my regular work...i am writing a light OS after long time..hope you will like this OS... plz bear me with the mistakes..didn't get time to proofread ...😊

This is kind of Remix OS ..why ...you read and tell me😆(Warning..its not at all good)

This is dedicated to all my sweet readers...for being with me always ...😳


Title credits...Surbhi ..thanks baby 🤗Snigs , Payal,deetha Thanks for the help😳🤗


I hope you all will like it...SPEAKERS ON 😳

WARNING: THE UPDATE CONTAIN SCENES WHICH MAY NOT BE SUITABLE FOR UNDER 14. KINDLY REFRAIN YOURSELF FROM READING THIS OS IF YOU COME UNDER THIS CATEGORY.


Banner By Himani..thanks baby for the lovely edit...🤗






~~KriYaansh OS : Anklet Love~~

He entered their house...loosened his tie with one hand and carrying a briefcase in the other hand... It was a really tiring day for him ...back to back meetings with company board of directors...clients...



Kriya...Kriyaaa...where are you? he called her name...while entering the hall...

Koi ghar pe nehi he kya?he asked himself...

Suddenly light went...it was all dark...

Bhagwan Kaka...light kyu chala gaya...jara check kisjiye na...he shouted...

Nobody answered...

Kriya...kahan hooo?

Chhhunnn...chunnn...chunn...chunnn

He heard a sweet sound...he recognized the sound...it's the sweet melody of her anklets...

He tried to know the direction..the sound is coming from...

Chhhunnn...chunnn...chunn...chunnn

The sound moved towards upstairs...he followed the sound...whole house was in dark...only the moonlight coming from the windows was helping him ...showing him the path and HER ANKLETS...leading him towards her...his destination...it led his to the terrace...

Where are you Kriya...tadpa kyu rahi ho...samne kyu nehi aati...he pleaded...

Chhhunnn...chunnn...

He smiled at her innocence ...

Ohk my princess...you want to play the game...THE GAME... u want me to search for you...no problem...but Rey Singhaniaalways plays fair game...i can hear the sweet melody of your anklets...

Ooopss...she bite her lips...& tried to take out her anklets...

Don't bite your lips baby...that's my job...leave it to me...he teased her ...



She blushed ...to the deepest shed of red...gosh...Reywhy do you have this effect on me...i can't think straight when you are around...u work like my personal drug...she whispered to herself..

He finally spotted his angel trying hide herself from him...he stood in a distance admiring her antics..her innocence...

His deep brown orbs were fixed on her angelic face ...her beauty was beyond words to explain ...her glowing complexion was enhanced with the moonlight falling on her ...creator must be so proud of this creation of his...he thought while admiring the angelic beauty in front of him..



Her divine beauty ...her angelic face...the beautiful smile playing on those perfectly carved lips...the pair of heavenly green orbs...her failed attempts to irritate him...he wanted to crash his lips on her and erase all those signs of annoyance from her face...




Her petite frame adorned in a beautiful white saree bejeweled with adornments...her halterneck blouse was hugging her curves perfectly ..her almost bare back with only the thread to hold the piece of cloth in place teased his senses...She had let her hair open with curls settled on her shoulders which was making her look even more beautiful...only if it was possible.. She had accessorized herself with a sleek diamond necklace with matching ear rings..bangles dancing on her delicate wrists were creating a heavenly melody in the deep silence of the night ...his eyes roamed all over her...her bare midriff titillated his imaginations...his eyes drank her image shamelessly ...all he wanted to do that moment was to take her in his embrace and place the signs of his love all over her...



He decided to take his sweet revenge for the hide and seek game ...and snaked his arms around her...

She felt a strong pair of arms around her tiny waist ...



Ahhh...meri jaan...i can hear your heart beats from thousand miles and you are whispering here...and you think I can't search you...he whispered softly...in her ears...he hugged her from back...



He moved his fingers on her creamy and soft skin of her waist...her heart started beating harder...as if it would jump out of her chest any time...he moved her hair from her back ...his fingers caressed her bare back playing with the delicate thread that held her blouse on place...he untied the thread and kept it half-opened...a slight touch can undo the cloth covering her torso...shivers ran through her frame sensing his touch on her bare skin...he moved his hand towards her neck...making patterns on her back...her breaths became heavy with the movement of his fingers...she was loosing her senses...he planted a trail of wet kisses on her creamy back... ...moved toward her nape...teasing it with his lips...he played with her ear lobes...with his tongue...continued moving the other hand fingers on her navel...



Reyyy...she moaned his name..she was helpless... that very moment...she just wanted to be HIS...HIS Kriya...



I love youuu..Reyyy...she somehow managed say this line...



I love you too my love...HAPPY CONFESSION DAY ANNIVERSARY love ...he said huskily near her ears...



You..you remembered...this day...she asked...



Of course baby.. today was the day you made your way to my house..my life..my heart...forever...how can I forget this day...he said...still rubbing his lips on her neck...



Ohh...Rey..she turned around...now she was standing in front him..facing him...her hands rested on his chest...which was beating loudly..chanting her name...he saw her angelic face...the silver melting moonlight made her glowing skin shine like silver...her eyes...her lips...her cheeks...her hair...perfect creation of the creator...HIS Kriya...he was lost in her angelic beauty ...



Rey...



Ummm...he replied ..still lost in her beautiful face...



Make me yours...she said in a seductive tone...blushing and feeling shy at the same time...



He smiled at his angel...



But you are already mine baby...he chuckled ...



Umm...she was trying hard to find words...she was playing with his shirt buttons...simultaneously ...she had opened almost all the buttons...by now...her fingers were moving on his bare chest...



Reyyy...she said in fake anger...



Next moment she felt his soft lips on hers...he kissed her gently with all his love and affection...she responded to the kiss in no time...she parted her lips and gave him a better access...his tongue entered her mouth and their tongues danced in unison..to the beautiful melody of love...their pure love...he picked her in his arms... and walked towards the bed without breaking the kiss...she had arranged the bed on terrace and decorated it with rose petals...to celebrate their togetherness...



They were lost in their world of love and passion...moon was peeping through the window...he was the witness of this beautiful scene...two angels...deeply in love...lost in each other...making love to each other ...two soul mates...



They were moaning each others name...their voices full of passion and love were creating a beautiful melody in the deep silence of the night...



Rey...she said while adjusting her head on his bare chest ...in to a comfortable position...



hmmm...he replied...still lost in her addictive fragrance ...her hair was covering his face...he was enjoying her weight on him ...



How did u know?...I was here...even after I removed my anklets...she asked innocently...

He smiled ...and pressed his lips on hers...

I can feel your presence sweetheart...my heartbeats give the sign that you are around...he said against her lips...

His eyes absorbed her silver melting beauty under the moon light...his perfect moon was giving tough competition to the imperfect one shining in the sky...his grip tightened around her delicate frame... she was feeling blessed to be in the arms of her love...the love of her life..

Moon was blushing hard witnessing two souls madly in love ..soon it hid behind the cloud..giving them some privacy...





❤️❤️❤️



hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment ... i will wait for your comments and feedback ...






Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Link to the SWARON VERSION 😊






Hey Friends ...thanx a lot for liking my work... i love reading your lovely comments..please continue commenting as they are my sole inspiration for writing ...will be waiting for ur comments and feedback(positive and negative all are welcomed)



Love
Deep



Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeh besties section hai kaunsa??
Effacious thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
ressooo

unressooo

okay well.. Firstly..lemme come to you and Hit you with a Chappal...

How dare u saying it bad??? 😡

it was sooo beautifull... [:->]

Kria's innocence...and Rey making her tensed in his presence and then the romance coming after it is my all time favv thingi..

I Love reading all d romantic stuffs.. 😉

so i just loved the way it was written..

Kria's innocence.. Rey knows her soo well.. he cud feel her all over...

then how he teased her.. I Loved it..!!!

Lovelyyy OS Deep.. 🤗

I personally want to thank u for writing KR OS..considering the fact that u are a Swaron fan...

Thank u.. 😃



Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pehle toh u chorifayo the oon wali line from your other OS... 😆
i just loved the entire concept of hide and seek...

the hearts calling out in sync..

it was just so beautiful..

and so smooth...

i loved hwo you shoed the small things..

it was amazing..

the hearts calling out to other..

awesome.. ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum os..👏
beautifully described..👍🏼
m jzz Speechless.

u r an Amazing writer...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update👏
it was soo beautiful😊
their romance is wow😳
kria is so innocent and rey is teasing her❤️😃
and just loved the way u written
i loved it
amazing
and pls aise os aur lika karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Deep di. . . . .
OMGGG. . . . . .
Dat was such a beautiful OS ^_^. .realy ;-D
i so lovd it. .Hide n Seek game. .mein bachpan mein khelti thi n apne KR ab khel rahe h. .🤣
lovd it. Realy ekdum mast n hatke concept. . . . .
P.s Di. .how dare u say it dat its bad. ? Ittna mast toh h. .:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely os
supab concept
kr were so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

with every OS, I'm falling for ur write-ups more n more

U r an incredible writer when itz about romance..

I so luvd this OS..

hayee their romance 😳..it was so intense, still so serene n blissful..

do write more on Kriyaansh plzzz

Edited by --Shukti-- - 12 years ago

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