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Hey Friends...Here is a new OS ...Its a bit different from my regular work...i am writing a light OS after long time..hope you will like this OS... plz bear me with the mistakes..didn't get time to proofread ...๐Ÿ˜Š

This is kind of Remix OS ..why ...you read and tell me๐Ÿ˜†(Warning..its not at all good)

This is dedicated to all my sweet readers...for being with me always ...๐Ÿ˜ณ

A special thanks all my readers who nominated and voted for my OSs...getting nominated among all these talented writers feels really amazing...winning one of the categories means a lot...thank you so much for such love and appreciation...i am touched๐Ÿ˜ณ

Title credits...Surbhi ..thanks baby ๐Ÿค—Nami ,Snigs , Payal,deetha Thanks for the help๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿค—


I hope you all will like it...SPEAKERS ON ๐Ÿ˜ณ

WARNING: THE UPDATE CONTAIN SCENES WHICH MAY NOT BE SUITABLE FOR UNDER 14. KINDLY REFRAIN YOURSELF FROM READING THIS OS IF YOU COME UNDER THIS CATEGORY.


Banner By Himani..thanks baby for the lovely edit...๐Ÿค—






~~SwaRon OS : Anklet Love~~

He entered their house...loosened his tie with one hand and carrying a briefcase in the other hand... It was a really tiring day for him ...back to back meetings with company board of directors...clients...



Sharon...Sharoonn...where are you? he called her name...while entering the hall...

Koi ghar pe nehi he kya?he asked himself...

Suddenly light went...it was all dark...

Bhagwan Kaka...light kyu chala gaya...jara check kisjiye na...he shouted...

Nobody answered...

Sharon...kahan hooo?

Chhhunnn...chunnn...chunn...chunnn

He heard a sweet sound...he recognized the sound...it's the sweet melody of her anklets...

He tried to know the direction..the sound is coming from...

Chhhunnn...chunnn...chunn...chunnn

The sound moved towards upstairs...he followed the sound...whole house was in dark...only the moonlight coming from the windows was helping him ...showing him the path and HER ANKLETS...leading him towards her...his destination...it led his to the terrace...

Where are you sharon...tadpa kyu rahi ho...samne kyu nehi aati...he pleaded...

Chhhunnn...chunnn...

He smiled at her innocence ...

Ohk my princess...you want to play the game...THE GAME... u want me to search for you...no problem...but Swayam Shekhawat always plays fair game...i can hear the sweet melody of your anklets...

Ooopss...she bite her lips...& tried to take out her anklets...

Don't bite your lips baby...that's my job...leave it to me...he teased her ...



She blushed ...to the deepest shed of red...gosh...Swayam why do you have this effect on me...i can't think straight when you are around...u work like my personal drug...she whispered to herself..

He finally spotted his angel trying hide herself from him...he stood in a distance admiring her antics..her innocence...

His deep dark brown orbs were fixed on her angelic face ...her beauty was beyond words to explain ...her glowing complexion was enhanced with the moonlight falling on her ...creator must be so proud of this creation of his...he thought while admiring the angelic beauty in front of him..



Her divine beauty ...her angelic face...the beautiful smile playing on those perfectly carved lips...the pair of heavenly green orbs...her failed attempts to irritate him...he wanted to crash his lips on her and erase all those signs of annoyance from her face...




Her petite frame adorned in a beautiful white saree bejeweled with adornments...her halterneck blouse was hugging her curves perfectly ..her almost bare back with only the thread to hold the piece of cloth in place teased his senses...She had let her hair open with curls settled on her shoulders which was making her look even more beautiful...only if it was possible.. She had accessorized herself with a sleek diamond necklace with matching ear rings..bangles dancing on her delicate wrists were creating a heavenly melody in the deep silence of the night ...his eyes roamed all over her...her bare midriff titillated his imaginations...his eyes drank her image shamelessly ...all he wanted to do that moment was to take her in his embrace and place the signs of his love all over her...



He decided to take his sweet revenge for the hide and seek game ...and snaked his arms around her...

She felt a strong pair of arms around her tiny waist ...



Ahhh...meri jaan...i can hear your heart beats from thousand miles and you are whispering here...and you think I can't search you...he whispered softly...in her ears...he hugged her from back...



He moved his fingers on her creamy and soft skin of her waist...her heart started beating harder...as if it would jump out of her chest any time...he moved her hair from her back ...his fingers caressed her bare back playing with the delicate thread that held her blouse on place...he untied the thread and kept it half-opened...a slight touch can undo the cloth covering her torso...shivers ran through her frame sensing his touch on her bare skin...he moved his hand towards her neck...making patterns on her back...her breaths became heavy with the movement of his fingers...she was loosing her senses...he planted a trail of wet kisses on her creamy back... ...moved toward her nape...teasing it with his lips...he played with her ear lobes...with his tongue...continued moving the other hand fingers on her navel...



Swayammm...she moaned his name..she was helpless... that very moment...she just wanted to be HIS...HIS SHARON...



I love youuu..swayammm...she somehow managed say this line...



I love you too my love...HAPPY CONFESSION DAY ANNIVERSARY love ...he said huskily near her ears...



You..you remembered...this day...she asked...



Of course baby.. today was the day you made your way to my house..my life..my heart...forever...how can I forget this day...he said...still rubbing his lips on her neck...



Ohh...swayam..she turned around...now she was standing in front him..facing him...her hands rested on his chest...which was beating loudly..chanting her name...he saw her angelic face...the silver melting moonlight made her glowing skin shine like silver...her eyes...her lips...her cheeks...her hair...perfect creation of the creator...HIS SHARON...he was lost in her angelic beauty ...



Swayam...



Ummm...he replied ..still lost in her beautiful face...



Make me yours...she said in a seductive tone...blushing and feeling shy at the same time...



He smiled at his angel...



But you are already mine baby...he chuckled ...



Umm...she was trying hard to find words...she was playing with his shirt buttons...simultaneously ...she had opened almost all the buttons...by now...her fingers were moving on his bare chest...



Swayammm...she said in fake anger...



Next moment she felt his soft lips on hers...he kissed her gently with all his love and affection...she responded to the kiss in no time...she parted her lips and gave him a better access...his tongue entered her mouth and their tongues danced in unison..to the beautiful melody of love...their pure love...he picked her in his arms... and walked towards the bed without breaking the kiss...she had arranged the bed on terrace and decorated it with rose petals...to celebrate their togetherness...



They were lost in their world of love and passion...moon was peeping through the window...he was the witness of this beautiful scene...two angels...deeply in love...lost in each other...making love to each other ...two soul mates...



They were moaning each others name...their voices full of passion and love were creating a beautiful melody in the deep silence of the night...



Swayamm...she said while adjusting her head on his bare chest ...in to a comfortable position...



hmmm...he replied...still lost in her addictive fragrance ...her hair was covering his face...he was enjoying her weight on him ...



How did u know?...I was here...even after I removed my anklets...she asked innocently...

He smiled ...and pressed his lips on hers...

I can feel your presence sweetheart...my heartbeats give the sign that you are around...he said against her lips...

His eyes absorbed her silver melting beauty under the moon light...his perfect moon was giving tough competition to the imperfect one shining in the sky...his grip tightened around her delicate frame... she was feeling blessed to be in the arms of her love...the love of her life..

Moon was blushing hard witnessing two souls madly in love ..soon it hid behind the cloud..giving them some privacy...




โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ



hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment ... i will wait for your comments and feedback ...






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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Friends ...๐Ÿค—

thanx a lot for liking my work... i love reading your lovely comments..please continue commenting as they are my sole inspiration for writing ...will be waiting for ur comments and feedback(positive and negative all are welcomed)



Thank u all for liking my previous OS ..๐Ÿ˜Š..thanks a lot for the detailed feedback...its means a lot to me...i am really sorry for not responding to them individually ..its just that I don't want to put a Thank u for ur beautiful comment..due to time constraint i am not able to reply...they are the driving force behind my write ups...ur love and support๐Ÿ˜ณ...


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Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago
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Please add this ID for further PM ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by deepffpm - 11 years ago
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This is one of those aham aham os of ur's .. u very well know what i mean deep ๐Ÿ˜‰ .. its so beautifully written that every words has kinda romantic feelings .. from the begining to the end its just stick ur eyes to it coz not even single bite can be missed as its filled with so much romance. Now cnt say much in details coz i feel shy ๐Ÿ˜ณ .. but honestly this is just too good out and out romantic os .. the chunn chunn bit was so beautiful .. and some cheecky lines there like this one " dnt bit ur lips baby.. its my job leave it too me" ๐Ÿ˜ณ .. and God the amount of time they kissed like i was literally gna faint ๐Ÿ˜ณ ... there is alot that can be said about this one deep but as i said i feel shy to be so expressive and specially when my comments are right on the top so i cnt say much .. it will be embarrassing ... just know that this is a master piece .. absloutly perfect .. and i just feel like reading it time and time again .. which i will surely. Love u for this one ๐Ÿ˜› .. other than that therez no need to say you are one awesome writer specially wen comes to romance so it wont really make difference wheather i say it or not but you truely are the most wonderful writer i know ๐Ÿ˜Š love u loads โค๏ธ ๐Ÿค— โค๏ธ

p.s. still waiting for title ๐Ÿ˜‰ ... maybe i will add more if the shyness gets

You added the title already ... Strings of love .. beautiful.. well i must say strings of love seem to be quiet stong here infact seems a little to stong if u know what i mean

okai this like 3rd time am editimg my comments coz u keep adding stuff [:p].. so i just go to knw this title was suggested by my very own bro sur... wow man this is another side of urz am discovering.. deep side of urz... but thn how can i be so stupid u r deepz frnd so deep to hogi aap ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰



ur addicted reader
ammie ๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres

Deeppp Diii๐Ÿค—
Its superb as always
Actually I m speech less
Its heavily romantic di๐Ÿ˜ณ
u know I love ur writings but this one made me blush like anything
Love these lines
"Don't bit ur lips its my job"
"Swayam Make me urs"
It make me blushโ˜บ๏ธ
Full of love and emotions
Beautifully written as always๐Ÿ‘
The way u penned down the emotion OMGGG I just loved it
Himi ur banner is Awesomeee ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Sur nice title dear same thinking I thought same title when I read it for the first time ๐Ÿ˜ณ
and diii you knw na apki writings k liye I don't have words
P.S: sorry for late u knw na I was very busy๐Ÿ˜”
Edited by Shardha_Swaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah ha ahem ahem ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I have no words left. .
Am all blushing blushing ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
It was so so so romantic. .
Mein fabulous brilliant outstanding yeh sab Nahi bolungi cos u n dis os is beyond these words n dey r very very less to describe how much i loved reading dis. .
As always u made me go awww u made me blush smile like mad..
Don't bit ur lips baby that's my job. . Oh gosh dat was d first line which made me blush like anything ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Uff it was so romantic. .
N d way u described d beauty of d nite d moon. .
N d way u described d appearance of sharon n swayam was magical. .
Only n only u can create this magic just by mere words ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Its always n always a treat to read ur works..
U never fail to make me blush n smile ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Made my day. .
Raat tak wait hee Nahi kar payi to read n comment isliye abhi kar diya ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago
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its beautiful am just โ˜บ๏ธ
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di u call it bad?? itz simply awesome di...loved it... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
it was so romantic and cute... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
naughty swayam and cute sharon... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
loved every part of it... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i just love d way u describe d situation...ur simply best di... ๐Ÿ˜‰
bg tune made it more perfect... ๐Ÿ˜Š
amazing... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by sweetdivya - 11 years ago
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Ahem Ahem Ahem ๐Ÿ˜ณ
so i was not allowed to read this OS hmm ๐Ÿ˜ณ
u shld knw di m a ziddi type of girl jise jo cheez krne k liye mana kardiya jaye wo zaroor karti h ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
firstly frm which angle do u think its bad ๐Ÿ˜ณ
itne romantic OS me COMEDY nhi laani chahiye ๐Ÿ˜†
now coming to the OS...
Ahem Ahem Ahem
let me blush first
it was hell romantic di ๐Ÿ˜ณ
loved every bit f it
aww their special n private moments ๐Ÿ˜ณ
u described it so well that i felt like m watching it on TV ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
keep writing more
nd next time i want pm ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
or else i will find it myself ๐Ÿ˜‰
P.S. Awesome siggy Himani๐Ÿ˜› nd title is mind blowing ๐Ÿ˜ณ
P.P.S. That is one of the longest comments i ever made on any OS ๐Ÿ˜†

nd one more thing
Love u a lot ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
nd i knw u love me ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†


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Omg deep di!!!!This was freaking hawt sensuous & romantic OS all at the same time !!!!
That line said by Sharon: Swayam make me yours... ๐Ÿคช gosh I was literally blushing & grinning like crazy!!! & swayam he was literally playing with Sharon ...Poor Sharon she had to unbotton his shirt!!!!
Wow loved it to the core!!!

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