~My broken heart~MG FF THREAD 4 pt 38 pg 33 14 oct

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Should I say I hate you for you left me

Alone in the middle of life's journey.

Or should I say I love you for you are the one

Who helped me to begin my new journey.

Should I say I hate you for now you seek another's love

Or should I say I love you for you are the one.

Who taught me to love.

Should I say I hate you for now you are in

Another's arm.

Or should I say I love you for once you

Lent those arms to me.

Should I say I hate you for now your eyes

Look at someone else.

Or should I say I love you for once those

Eyes conveyed to me thoughts innumerable.

Should I say I hate you for now your dream

About someone else.

Or should I say I love you for once we

Dreamt together of a beautiful life ahead.

Should I say I hate you for now you are

No longer mine.

Or should I still say I love you

For once you were mine.

And I cant stop loving you

Even after you broke my heart.

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CHARACTER SKETCH

MAAN SINGH KHURANA


He was a play boy during his college days and he played with geet's feelings by making her fall in love with him.He broke her heart because she was the cause for his best friend's pain.After he come to know the truth he was shattered and now he is the owner of khurana construction and he is an angry man


GEET HANDA


She loved maan during her college days but after he left her she was shattered.He left her in journey of life when she needed him the most.Even after breaking her heart she still loves him


MAHI

as suggested by maangeetcrazy


as suggested by aarthirajendran (you can choose whichever you like)

When she comes to office maan falls in love with her and she becomes her jaan

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nice awesome story... continue soon dear...
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Congrats on the new thread...
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Hiii...Congrats on da new thread...Loving da story...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Congrats on the new thread..
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congos on d new thread cont soon
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new reader!!! I cheated and read the last few parts! Time to start from the beginning!!

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