SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#481

N o t e.

Nothing much to say today, except, have a good read and sorry if this chapter sucks. 😆

DO leave your guesses for further chapter.

-60 comments and 10 page spammed after readers are done with commenting.

Luv,
Marium.

Edited by -Marium- - 11 years ago

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nidhi

@nidhi1998

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#482

marium aapi

i tired of praising you

so today i'm going to thank you

i was bored of the

lovey dovey updates

and wanted to see the wolf politics

and tadaaa,...

i got it today

the update was beautiful👏

i loved the way you portrayed swayam

his anger, possessiveness are signs of love

i myself wish for someone like him

and arun,

here comes the villain,

i'm not going to hate him

all i can do is sympathize.

that dude does not know where he's

headed to, poor guy laid his eyes on

sharon, how can he even think swayam will

leave him alive😆

i was waiting for a villain

and i got that too

loved the update a lot

so, thank you for such a beautiful update

and for the wolf politics and also for arun

(bechara, kitni baduaa milegi usse aaj😆)

and yes a cliffhanger😭, i hope i get something

exiting.

P.S : i was sad after reading you pm

i guess you made up with the update.

will miss you

nidhi

Edited by nidhi1998 - 11 years ago

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Okk...surprise and shock words are quite small or negligible here...first I was shocked that in one chapter u open up all the drama...secondly this update was so spell boimdong that I don't know wat I m comment on...

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Reserved
Unreserved
Wohoaa marium back with an update how I missed reading it gal..😃.
Dhansu update tha.. 👏.
You started on a cute note bechare swayam ko alpha hoke bhi sharon ki daant khaani padi..😆.
Then your update gets serious you show swayam's possessiveness and love for sharon.. Following her around in the college, knowing her entire schedule, he has eyes only for sharon..[:->].
Punch maar diya bechare ladke ko siren ne and then she convinces him to say he fell by god..😆.
I saw swayam the alpha coming to surface for the first time in your updates and I was awe of the alpha wow the authority the aura he created he walked and spoke with finality..👏.
Arghhh this arun is gonna be creating a lot of problems for swaron in the future I have an inkling.. 🤔.
Haila ye kya sharon not gonna stay with her parents she'll go with swayam I feel so.. If that happens its gonna be wow..[:->]
Jaldi update karna next part you've stopped @ a cliffhanger gal...
Love,
Kashmi.🤗

Edited by sweet16cash - 11 years ago

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anandita

@blooming_angel

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

😉res
unres..:-)
u just rock queeni...the best writer of IF according to me...
agar aap naa hote toh bhagwaan jaane kya hota mera...
the chapter was superb...just amazing...just perfect..i loved it to the core..
koi bhi kabhi bhi itta aacha nai likh sakta jitna aap likhti ho...
i loved everything..from the intro depicting careless love struck swayam to the new boy and his convo to his getting upseg going to her house...swayam ready to fight the world for his sharon..
his respect towards the other pack to his final decision aap novel kyun nai likhte...
i mean itta accha fiction itta creative mind...god mein toh fan ban gayi...😛😉

ur the most creative person i have ever met...ur the best di..
chahe jitta gussa ho lo aapse..dur rehna mushkil hai aapse aur aapke works se...

thankuu so much for continuing ur writeups...
and sparing some time to update it...i knoe it will sound lame...
but good writeups..provides a reason for a lifeless soul to live...
and i am one of them...

thankuu do much...<3

love,
anandita

Edited by anandita - 11 years ago