SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013 - Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah. finally I am here. not that I had done some efforts to review. not much, at least not today. I had read it day before yesterday itself, but itna time nahi tha that I would have given a proper review. And today I have finally dragged myself here. 😆
Sorry anyways..

Okay, now I better start the thing I am hete for. Review!

The way you started. Swayam wakes up by getting slap, though gentle... but still, ijjat hi nahi hai... he is her mate, and above all... Alpha... aur uske saath aisa treatment. so not fair... hum isske khilaaf andolan karengey... 😃

Waise how is it no one knew that Sharon was hid mate. And ab everyone knows they are seing eachother. Yeh part mujhe thoda sa confusing laga. I think you could have better elabirated this. Sirf yahi tha.

Haye. the way he was searching for her. ek dum majnu lag raha tha. Wandering here and there... from where do you get such ideas 😉

Smells trouble, I am talking about myself. Laga hi tha that there's something wrong. aur ab prove ho gaya. There packs. This is the reason I hate politics. kuch logo ke wajah se sab ki zindagi barbaad.

Arun, handsome hai kya? 😳 Well mujhe kya. but poor soul is gonna get hell lot of gaalis. after all usne Sharon ke sapne dekhe hain.. joh hum jaante hain sirf aur sirf humare majnu ki hai,, Swayam ki.

And guesses for the last thing, of course they will let her go with Swayam.. Reason, they love their daughter a lot.

I found the entire update on a whole very interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg...ye kya ho gya??!! 😲
I had expected somethin else!!
But this was indeed a nice chapter..I likd it vry much..!!
Finally we can see how much swayam cares for Sharon..:)
Update soon...n btw..Wat do I see??:o
Demand??!! 60 COMMENTS??!!!😲
Uaan..u know it vl take a lot of tym..:'(
Not fair..!! :'(
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

Omg...ye kya ho gya??!! 😲
I had expected somethin else!!
But this was indeed a nice chapter..I likd it vry much..!!
Finally we can see how much swayam cares for Sharon..:)
Update soon...n btw..Wat do I see??:o
Demand??!! 60 COMMENTS??!!!😲
Uaan..u know it vl take a lot of tym..:'(
Not fair..!! :'(




Arre no no.. not 60 comments!

60 likes and 10 pages spam.. may be wahan wrong likh dia mene..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
my god in single update so much of twists and turn..!!! Definatly many things are cooking in your mind...bt yet what i thought reading last update it washed off... 😆while reading this.
Love the swaron story heading ahead...
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Posted: 11 years ago
mai abhi se shuru ho jati hu... 😆
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update yaar..
more interesting plot i guess..
loved it n enjoy reading it alot..
swayam was super awesome in this part😳
full on alpha attitude hehe..
thanks for the pm ..
update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh parh ke nah janney kya ho gaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
whn yu take so long to update we readers are

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