SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

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unres

amazing marium !!

really cool

first of all really loved the powers that you have shown for the ALPHA...

like the ALPHA is the most powerful person in the tribe...

and then came the villain ARUN... 😡

okay so i think he likes sharon.. and is irritated with the fact that she has found her mate

and then the way swayam handled the situation 👏👏

superbly thought

no anger, no fights swayam's words were enough to show those guys...

swayam's concern for sharon and her family is really good...

i have a question..

how are he relations between sharon's father and swayam..

are they good ??

all in all lovely update

please update soon and do PM me

thanks for the PM

PS. aaj MISS MARIUM ne itna chota sa note diya 😲 😳

yeh baat kuch hasam nahi hui 😆

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago

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lovely222

@lovely222

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Gr8 work nxt update will b awaited the most

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

amazing update!

wolf politics is great to read!!

you are too unpredictable to have any guesses for next update!! sorry

this came as a shock!

after so much of love this update!!

wow!!👏

the swaron part was awesome too!!

ty for the pm.

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User123

@UserM123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Marium 🤗

You update!!

And What an update!

I So SO loved it! 😛

I looved how Swayam knew sharon's Schedule, her likes & dislikes! He would just stare at her even though he would fail in his exams was like Awww 😳😳

And, The perfect anout of love, & possessiveness And Everything! Loved the Update!

And Then Comes ARUN 😡😡

Man, Main soch hi rahi thi ki teri story mein koi villian nahi hai, Strange ? 😕 And Phir Enter, ARUN! 😡

I really HAve a Bad Feeling About This Guy!!! Agar Wo Sharon Aur Swayam KE Beech AAya, toh Main uska Kachumbar ABna Dungiii 😆😆

And Swayam Wants Sharon to live With Him!! 😳😳😳

Okay, So iska matlab we'll have Some Really Romantic, Not To forget HOT Moments, won't we? ☺️

I just Want HIm to mark Sharon, Fata fat and make her his! Phir I will be like, "aao, kisi ki himmat hai toh dur karo sharon and swayam ko" 😉😉

All In alll, I loved the Update! 😳

Honestly marium, i am inn love with your stroy, and a story like yours and a a writer like you should be appicited a LOT se BHI MORE ! 😳

Ab main bas yahi wait kar rahi hun ki, sab log jaldi jaldi comment kare, and then i can Spam, and ophir hume update mile!!

Love You!

-MiNi ❤️

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

Nice update
Swayam truly nd madly in love with sharon.
Swayam nd that new guy convo was nice.
Showdown at sharons home was nice
Swayam showing his power in front of her pack.
Cool update

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

Awesome part!!!

I just hate Arun...😡

may be he is the main villain of the story...

waiting for the next chapter eagerly...

pls update soon!!

thanks for the pm..

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Amazing update 😊

Loved the way Swayam was angry on Sharon's pack for Sharon

Sharon's parents are very understandable

Sorry for short comment

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

Awesome update
Love the angry swayam
Waiting for Sharon to move with swayam
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#499

Well,its so so late that i comment here..I guess my last comment was on 2nd update Page no12 ..So obviously i missed all the previous updates..I missed all the adventurous updates as ur alpha territory concept is like different and damm interesting..Due to time and work issues i am inactive so didnt get time to read ur updates properly..Today i was going though my PM inbox and found ur lot of PM's regarding this FF..So now honestly i will work on it..I will read it and give my feedback as soon as fast..

Till then keep writing

Thanx for ur all PM's..And sorry for being late..I know if readers did'nt comment,it feels bad..really bad..So i will unres my all comment soon

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago