ll Saraspatra # 28 ll ~ Jo Dhoop Nikle, Chhaaya Ban Jaunga ~

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What is this clumber of pics?? It is the what the CVs have been showing us ...The same broken Saras then, and the Broken Kumud now...The same Kumud fanning Saras to protect his sleep, and the same Saras fanning Kumud to protect her from the demons of past!! The same Saras and Kumud..coming a full circle...Then WHY WHY...CVs ..under the guise of original story show us a scene which is mind boggling...The ONE thing that had attracted me to Saras was his first actual dialogue in Ratnanagri...Which established him as a man of power and sense...When he saw Kusum in Kumud's attire...he, without seeing Kumud, but just having had a glimpse of her Kamariya on a video cam, told Kusum to give the Kamarbandh to its owner...Thereby telling her that he has recognized, that she is NOT Kumud...Who she was, was NOT important...the main thing was she was NOT Kumud...the guy was smart, sharp and wise...and suddenly, after so many months of staying in the same place as Kumud, he forgot how the Kamariya looks and manages to tie it across the wrong Kamariya?? How is that Logical, CVs...The original story had Saras marrying Kusum ...only for ONE reason...Widow remarriage was not possible and Kumud's family faced a social ouster...NOTHING ELSE...no Meera...no Morpankh and NO Kamarbandh...Please dont torment Govardhanram Tripathi in his grave and Please give the ending he must have wanted, yet was not able to write because of the social embargos!!! Give him the lovestory he wrote with so muc love!! PLEASE!!


Acknowledgements
Few mentions as the names on the sections are not enough...The brilliant team of this Saraspatra and especially Appy and Amor a big jhappi for their wonderful and everlasting support and sweet siggies!!!!Also Appy for this wonderful new banners!!!!And ofcourse, the new wholly NEW NL team...all the members!! All of the new team Sweetgal, Trina, Oma, Omshreejaanu, Shaana and Arshics who are so relentlessly working on the issue...!! A big jhappi to all of my special cuties!!
And Special Thanks to the Members who helped us choose the important scenes for this section Nikki_SAS-holic, pasumarthisa, SK_GRfan, tryforceful, dazzling and believerintruth


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When Saras came back home with a traumatized Kusum, Kumud broke down seeing her sister's state. As soon as Kumari took her inside, a livid Kumud rushed to the Adhikari's mansion. She slapped Pramad and called him a shameless man who can stoop very low. She also taunted SD for not raising her son properly. Saras reached there and stopped Pramad for raising his hand on Kumud.

Kumud warned Pramad again and left with Saras.

Back home, Saras told Kumud off for going to Pramad's house alone. Kumud also told him off for lying to her about Kusum. They started arguing. Finally Kumud broke down in Saras' arms. Saras reassured her that everything would be fine. Kusum witnessed the scene and cried and... confessed to herself that she is in love with Saras! Guniyal heard it and was shocked. Kusum ran away without any explanation.

Alak left BD's mansion with her husband. She refused to live with a criminal like Pramad. Finally SD slapped her useless son who was not all repentant.

When Kumud came to meet Kusum in her room, the latter asked her to hide the kidnapping chapter from the family. Kumud agreed but not Saras.

SaMud again had an argument. An angry Kumud told Saras - yes I have erred but no need to remind me of it every occasion u get!

Finally Saras confessed to her that he cared too much for her.

At school, Kumud was still not herself; she was upset with the way she had fought with Saras the night before. Saras came and said sorry in a cute way and they both patched up. Saras was to wait for her class dismissal but suddenly realized what he was doing. It was wrong and people's tongues would start wagging about them. He left and ignored Kumud all day.

An alliance came for Kusum. Kusum has accepted to get married and Guniyal was reassured. But it was from a 50 year old widower. Kumud refused and the family supported her. Koti baat maami went livid after the family left. She also taunted Kumud and how her jinxed destiny would ruin it all for the daughters in the house.

When Saras learned about it from Danny, he dumped all his self imposed restrictions and ran to way. He calmed her down and cheered her up and promised to be there for her.

Diwali was here!! The Desais were at the market. They bumped into the alliance people who humiliated them. Kalika joined in to add fuel to fire. At home everybody was happy. Kusum was making rangoli and described her ideal hubby to her sister looking at Saras. Kotibaat maami again taunted Kumud. Kumud left to clean up the chandelier. Saras came there. He knew she was upset and once again boosted her moral.

At night Saras came with gifts for the family. Happily they all went for puja but just then Kumud got a call. It was kalika to report to her what happened at the market. A hurt Kumud went upstairs where Saras was taking the chandelier down. She started breaking all the lamps and cursing her fate and how she would never get a second chance in life. Saras unable to see her in such state took her in his arms as Dugbaa looked on.

Later in the night, Saras came in Kumud's life to check on her. She was having nightmares and was restless in her sleep. He fanned her. Dugbaa came and Saras went to talk to her in the corridor. Finally Saras told her that he would like to make Kumud his because she needed him and his support and that he would never leave her.

Kumud heard their conversation. She was happy and started dreaming of a new start with Saras at her side. Suddenly her past came back to her and she turned all sad. She refused to put Saras' happiness n life in danger because of her past. On the other hand, Kalika informed Pramad about the market incident and how she only needed a chance to enter the Desais household to teach Kumud and her family a lesson. A frustrated and lonely Pramad (his parents too had left him) threw Kalika out of the house.

The next morning, Saras was daydreaming and all happy to meet Kumud. He heard the sounds of her kamarband chiming. He moved towards it. He found it about to fall, held it and tied it around Kusum's waist, thinking it was Kumud. He realized his blunder when the latter turned to him. He went away embarrassed.

During the aarti, Kumud ignored Saras and left the aarti plate with Kumari. All night she avoided him. Finally when he went to her on the terrace, he coerced her to say what was wrong. Kumud refused to talk about it and left, leaving Saras worried.

Later the family had gathered in the yard to celebrate. Dugbaa came to bless Saras and Kumud. Suddenly, amidst the firecrackers, Kumud started feeling uneasy. Her traumatic experiences in Pramad's hand and how he was pushing her into that fire to kill her came back to haunt her again.

Unable to stand there, she rushed inside. A worried Saras followed her, calling her but she would not stop. Finally he managed to grab her but she turned hysterical imagining it was Pramad!! She started shouting for help and calling Saras.

Look at me Kumud! Everything is fine. Everything is beautiful. There is no fire..It's only the firecrackers.

Saras' voice finally reached her ears. She broke down again in his arms and a worried Saras took her in his warmth to calm her down.

Precap: Kumud is telling Saras to move on and never look back!! She moves away and Saras looks on completely devastated.


The reason this HAS to be the scene of the Week is the sweetness of this gesture itself. The way Kusum stops Danny with her pinky finger..the way Danny looks back and sits besides her...I am here..going no where...and then just the two of them...Danny not speaking a word, and the concern written all over his face..It was not only a cute scene..but something I would love to tell the CVs that they have benchmarked and a word to the wise...Dont change it...Make Kusum realize that Saras might be her saviour in person, but it is Danny she seeks when she is alone and desolate!! The one who actually keeps her demons at bay!!

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Sweet moment between Samud - Saras asks Kumud if he can wait for her after her classes and the sweet smile that was shared between them.


Remember the first time Kumud saw Saras (And we saw Saras baba and his gorgeous legs😆) When she saw him in the reflection of the mirror and realized he was tormented by the heat, she instinctively took the fan out and calmed him...Even when she was so angry and miffed with him...the bond they shared then, and now...when Saras feels Kumud is tormented by her demons, he instinctively comes and reaches for the same fan, and calms her down, in her sleep...even in that slumber she feels him, his strength ...his presence chases away the demons...What could be more Sarasmatic than this!!!


The moment saras tried to apologize to kumud - it was funny as hell as the Harvardchandra misspells Sorry😆 and sweet at the same time as he reorganizes the girls to say sorry and then explain the same in Hindi!! Mujhe Maaf Karo!
totally awww !!!!


As our Dear SCian believeintruth said - "when kumud imagined the firecrackers to be the fire and then thinking Saras as Pramad started shouting for help from saras. It was heart breaking !"
And so yes, the scene is chosen by believeintruth

The scene proved how much the incident has scarred Kumud for life, the same Kumud who was never somebody who had cold feet.
The firecrackers during the Diwali celebrations suddenly reminded her of the fire she was thrown in to burn alive and... her heart started racing with fear.
"Run, run, run", yelled her senses.
And she ran, stumbled n fell... in those arms which are always ready to embrace her, to be a sheath to envelop and protect her.
It was heartbreaking to see our strong and "himmatwaali" Kumud so vulnerable and soul bared!!

The terrace scene as aptly selected by Nikki_SAS_holic
An extremely upset and down Kumud is on the terrace, her eyes glistening and coveying all her discouragement and hurt after her kaki has taunted her without reserve.

As soon as our dikra learned about it, he dumped all his reserve and self imposed societal restrictions and rushed to her.

He listened to her calmly and effectively cheered her up and finally Kumud flashed her 1000W smile and Saras muttered -
i wonder what will happen on Diwali night!!😳

Well Saras we really don't know what will happen but we surely know who is the sunshine in your Sundari's life
.😳
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The Dobo scene has to be hands on this..Saras in the all serious and protective mode..Style maro Chandra got tai tai phissed bad time as he managed to tear the dupatta he was so heroically trying to save..Ijjat ka Bhajipala ho gaya, Dobochandra ka!!😆
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Errr did I see right?? Andhi Mamata suddenly got hands to slap her useless son?? The way she stopped BD, I was like again?? But na! SD decided to take the credit of slapping the useless Putra and Slap went the hand!! On other hand..I have really come to feel for this body double of Prammy...the poor man has as if come to suffer slaps..First Kumu and then SD...Looks like Anshul is gayab for this very reason😆

Chappal marna to banta hai iss scene ko.

Remember the scene on the Right?? Where Saras without seeing Kumud, just having had a glimpse of her Kamariya, sitting Saat Samundar Paar on the Video cam manages to unravel the mystery of the Kamarbandh and tells Kusum who is in Kumud's attire, to give the Kamarbandh to its rightful owner and to tell her that he is not going to leave without seeing her...And now he manages to confuse the Kamariyas??

Jis kamarband se Saras aur Kumud ke pyaar ki kahani shuru hui...Usi kamarband ki itni insult dekh ke chappal Marne ka man toh karega na ...Toh jab after all this time Saras pehchan na paya Kumud ki Kamar

Toh hamare dil ka haal hua bura, aur awaz ayi ' chappal maro'


The more pankh was blah enough...but the rant after, as Kusum narrates the STERLING qualities of her Deam Man🤢 I mean we are not interested in the Devdaasi Roop of Kusum and they actually manage to give us the narration of her Dream Dev..arrghhh wanted to ...
. Show me a wall please!!
The Kusum and her mor Pankh ki rangoli was annoying ...Wake up girl and stop mooning around, Saras is not for you, never was and never will be

And this obsession with mor Pankh...
That was so blah!
🤢
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I think this time dhat tere ki scene has to be the market scene

People like that cradle snatcher aunty and kalika were standing and saying

Insulting things about Desais in public, and VC just stood there silent, and meek

Yeh to theek nahi laga, I kept expecting him or Dukhba to roar like lions, but they just stood there

Meek as mice

Dhat tere ki!!

The Saraswatichandra creative team

Minutes of the Meeting

Agenda: To decide the upcoming track

Attended by : 1. Creative Head And Channel Head All-in-one - Chacha

2. TRP Increasing Expert - TRIPE

3. Director Off Beautiful and Original Scenes - Dobos

4. BEliever in CHaracters And Reasonable Ideas - Bechari

Chacha - So what do we have for the next week?

TRIPE : kuch TRP dhamake wala lao

DOBOS : Saras and Kumud char kadam ki doori, hit tha, usko repeat karenge

Bechari : But it wont make any sense...

( is ingnored)

TRIPE : 3 hugs to daalna hi hoga

Bechari : but how, 4 kadam ki doori and hugs ...

DOBOS : daal denge, sir trip fall catch formula hai na!! ho jayega !

TRIPE : Good idea, aur kalika ko desai house main plant karo, vamp se TRP achchi hoti hai

DOBOS : Sir ek great idea hai, uski shaadi karva dain - Saras se, nahi to VC se, kya twist

rahega boss Kalika Kumud ki maa ban jayegi

Chacha - oye logic ki vaat mat lagao, this is a great story adaptation

TRIPE : sahi bola sir ne, stepmom track Guman ne kar diya hai, ab original idea lao

DOBOS : Step chachi bana dain? Achcha nahi? Chalo Yash ko le aate hain, kalika se shadi

karwa dete hain, logical rahega.

Bechari : Lekin logic kaise hoga? Yash is away to sheher, where did kalika meet ...

DOBOS : kahan mili kyon mili yeh sab bakwas hai, socho, kya dhamaka hoga

Chacha : Great idea. Ekdum original, vamp as bhabhi... ab kusum aur saras ki shadi karvao

Bechari : But sir, that is impossible I mean Guniyal will never agree and...

TRIPE : iss bechari ko bahar nikalo yaar,

DOBOS : death bed and blood group wali track daal dete hain, super popular chalta hai...

TRIPE and DOBOS get a big pat on the back from Chacha, Bechari gets a kick on the backside

Aur hum... hum dil de chuke sanam, samud ke ho gaye hain hum...



I am extremely thankful to Nikki_SAS-holic, pasumarthisa, SK_GRfan, tryforceful, dazzling and believerintruth for their contribution help and support.

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Kumud...The character has gone through so much this week..From finally smiling her old smile, the bratty teacher was back, when suddenly Prammy and his deeds caught up with her..and she broke...so scarred is she...Reminds us of Saras in the beginning na...The character definitely goes to her!!
Jenny stole the show...Is it my imagination or she looked practically like a doe...all over the week..her eyes speak so much ...she laughed and she cried, she stood strong and slapped Prammy and consoled Kusum ...and then broke herself to collapse on Saras...She rocked every scene!!

Do I need to say more..The gold with a bit of red sprinkling and green collar...Saras carries Traditional so well...be it this one or the Peacock blue...he is effortless..the Chandra of Fashion world in Ratnangari...he looks damn good!!
As per our voting poll, the irritating queen Kusum wins hands down over all contestants namely Sunderi aka Koti baat maami, the lady who came for an alliance for her 50 year old brother
and Pramad 's BD🤣 (selected by the genius SK_GRfan)

I guess audience is not finding anything divine in the love for Saras by the auto proclaimed Meera.

Besides her flip-flopping stand is irritating big time.

One day she says- "i don't want anything from him" and the next day,looking at Saras with a completely smitten look, she is describing her life partner: " i am looking for a husband who will love me endlessly n unconditionally",
Oh Lord have mercy!!

This time there are two Rishta who claim this Prize..First one...Saras and her Mai...The way he put the sandals on her feet...Hats Off to GR!! who does such scenes without any hesitation!! The simple relation Saras shares with her Mai..so reflected in this scene..when he put the sandals who would take away her pain...So right na...he is taking away the pain by claiming Kumud...And the other one..Danny Kusum...the scene where she stops him with her pinky finger, to the one where they are rolling on the floor laughing...to the impromptu hug that Danny gives Kusum...there is a SARAS Rishta developing and we all are CHEERING!!!

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Awesome , and thanks for acknowledging our opinions, but the real hard worker are you all !!!! congrats , love this nl, infact finally mera intezaar khatam hua ,
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Fantastic NL!! 👏
Thanks to all who worked hard & Congrats to the winners!

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