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Posted: 11 years ago
phew...mu cleared...was scared for geet...glad that the mu is over ..ty 😊
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part 37
nice part...
oh ho Meera is helping Armaan like this...
and Maan is thinking its all Geet's doing...
oh no poor Geet...
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part 38
awesome...
OGM he hurt her so much...
poor Geet...
but still she cares for him...
Adi cleared the confusion and Daya too helped by saying Meera's name...
what will Maan to to pacify her now...
cont soon dear...
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mu clearing update
awesome maan now feeling guilty
and have to say sorry to geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
Thank god mu got over soon
Waiting to see how will maan say sorry to geet
When will u update 'remember me'
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing story ...

read all in one go and its superb

but sad to see the situation of geet.

waiting for the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago


Read the whole FF till now. Have no words to express how I feel after reading it. U have written amazingly.

Geet n Maan marriage. The circumstances in which they were married was bad but Geet respects Maan n Maan in two days attracted by her unknowingly.

Maan is a very firm man. Jo decision le Liya he sticks to it no matter what. Geet's different welcome in km.

Loved how u hv shown her character. Simple, cute n innocent like baby. Keeps Maan's order at top n jo bhi bolta hai she will follow blindly as he is her role model. How she used to get scared at Maan n make a baby face n talked to her baba ji abt him. Loved that.
Dadi n Dev cupid of house with a mission of making Maan n Geet as Maaneet.

Maan takes full care of Geet but gussa kar ke. How he supports her at every step was beautifully shown.

Liked Jhalli Geet so so much. Good that she realized her feelings. How she behaves wen Maan is in close proximity to her. Kabhi table ya door se bhid Jana, ya Kabhi slip ho Jana. Her body fails to work. Only her heart beats erotically.

Armaan n Meera... Both r innocent but y they have to live like in a hell. They r in constant fear of being caught. When does it will end???

Geet joining office. Loved how she entered by doing Maan ke sath drama. Office scenes were lovely. Jealous Shasha in action. Adi n Pinky r great.

Maan doubting Geet n its increasing day by day. Y can't he ask her directly instead of shouting her.
Scared of next part. Specially for Geet.

Its a romantic story with a blend of mystery. Very well written. I m loving it.

Sorry if I bored u with my long comment.
Edited by crazydream - 11 years ago
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Part 37 & 38 are awesome...
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Marital Tie - A Journey In Marriage


Part 39

One huge Sorry In Heart

Dev walked down the hall and stopped in the midway hearing Rahul speaking about Geet, "Nakul Kaka, I am so worried about Geet ji, after all she is such an nice person, Maan Sir, should not have done that," Rahul said out his heart unable to control his feelings, "Rahul, this is their personal matter and you have not right to speak about that, now go and do your work," Nakul bossed him,

"Nakul," Dev's voice made both Nakul and Rahul stud and they both turned to face him, "what was he saying about," Dev asked and they both looked at each other, "Nothing Dev Babu," Nakul said as he looked down, "Nakul say it, I will not say anything to anyone," Dev pressed and Rahul was have an temptation to say it but he looked at Nakul and looked down,

"Are you going to say or should I call Bro," Dev said and they both looked at him in fear, "No, please," Nakul said and turned to Rahul, "Maan sir was a bit anger on Geet Madam ji, yesterday that's what he was saying" Nakul said covering up, "A bit Angry, Nakul Kaka is lying, Maan sir was yelling so high that even the people outside the mansion gate would have heard, Poor Geet ji, she was crying all night and haven't eaten anything till now," Rahul said with a sad face,

"Bro, was angry on Geet, for what," Dev thought, "Did you hear anything in detail," Dev asked, "No Dev sir, we just hear him telling something about office that's all, we didn't hear much," Rahul said, "Dev sir, sorry, I know it's above my limit to hear or speak like this, but I can't see Geet ji like this, that why I spoke out, please forgive me," Rahul added scared and Dev smiled with a nod and went away.

As Dev reached Geet's room, he saw her sitting on her bed holding her knees starring at the wall, he went in slowly, "Geet," He called and she looked at Dev, "Dev, what are you doing here, you are suppose to take rest," Geet said freaking out, "Sorry Geet," He said slowly, and Geet looked at him and his upset face,


"Dev what happened," She asked as he sat down, "Did Bro get angry on you? Did he hurt you?" Dev asked and Geet looked at him shocked, how did he, "Dev nothing like that," Geet said and smiling a bit, "Don't lie Geet, promise on bro, tell me the truth?" Dev trapped her and she shook her head a yes, "But don't ask me the reason please," Geet said as she looked at him,

"Ok, But tell me, is it connected with you going to the office?" Dev asked and Geet nodded a yes, "sorry Geet, because of me and Dadi maa only you joined the office and because of our completion only you accepted to work with him, but I never thought that, because of this even your happiness will be gone, sorry Geet," Dev said as tears filled his eyes, as he saw Geet,

"Dev, please," Geet said holding his hands, "I am ok, You haven't done anything wrong, if my fate doesn't consist of happiness what will you do," Geet spoke with pain raising in her voice, "Geet, enough, you no need to go to the office anymore, enough of everything, I will speak to bro when he comes home," Dev said finally, "No Dev, please don't do anything like that, don't make him more upset, I can bear my pain but not his, please,"

"But Geet" Dev argued, "It's a promise on me, Dev, you are not speaking a thing to him," Geet said and Dev nodded finally, "now go and take rest ok, I will bring the lunch to your room even," Geet said and Dev stood and went away, as Dev reached the door, he was shocked to see Maan standing there right outside the door, he don't know how to react, so he just went away,


Maan went in and stood there, and he guilt was killing him inside, and he really have no idea how to make it work, he do bought her a gift, but he knew it was not enough, never enough for what he had done, Geet turned and saw Maan standing there looking at her and she immediately jumped down and went towards him,

"Maan tell her you are sorry and that was a big mistake," Maan's heart begged him, Maan looked at her and she was too looking at him to say something, but her hands were trembling due to the fear, she thought he might be still anger, Maan saw her hands and nervousness and it made him to feel more guilt, "Geet," he called and she saw him with her big shining eyes,

"Can I get a black coffee," Maan said, "Damn, what am I saying," Maan thought and looked at Geet, Geet nodded at him and went past him, and Maan suddenly caught her hand and she stopped and she turned nervous, "Maan tell her, tell her" his heart was screaming, as he saw her, Geet slowly turned around and looked at him with her fear filled eyes,


"Ji," Geet looked at him, Maan looked at her and his heart was beating high, "Nothing, I will wait here even" Maan said and Geet looked at him puzzled "Wait in my room," Geet thought and Maan let go of her hand and so she went away, "God, how will I say this, how," Maan thought as she went out, and after a few minutes Geet came back to her room,

As she came to her room she found her room empty, "He said he will wait here but he is gone, Baba ji, now what's in his mind," Geet thought scared and turned to leaved and suddenly she heard a phone ringing in her room, "Did he left his mobile here," Geet thought and looked around and the ring came from her dressing table,

Geet went and looked at it and found a Red color phone lying on the table, "It's not his phone, nor Dev's, whose phone is this than," Geet thought and looked at a little note there, she took it and looked at it and a was shocked to see what was written, "For you, Maan", Geet can't believe this, Maan gave her this phone,

Geet was surprised to the core, she read those three words again and again, "Am I dreaming Baba ji," she said as she looked at the phone and a smile appeared in her sad face, and she stood up and walked out, with a big smile on her face, and rushed to the kitchen, Maan watched her rushing to the kitchen with a smile and it made him feel a little better,


"But it's not enough for the pain I had given you, I have to say a sorry," Maan decided and went to his room, Maan didn't go back to the office after that, he decided to go after the lunch, then Geet made everything ready and asked Nakul to call Maan and Maan too came and sat there and Geet served him,

"Where is Dev?" Maan asked to Geet, "He is sleeping, and he had his soup," Geet said and Maan nodded, then there was a silent for a few seconds, "Ji," Geet called and Maan looked at her, "Thank you," Geet said with a slight smile, "For the mobile," Geet finished, "Ya, you often tend to disappear and there is no way to contact you so only I thought of giving you the mobile, a easy way to find you when you are lost" Maan said,

Geet was spell bound by his reply, and looked at him with her mouth opened, "he is making fun of me", and Maan looked at her and her reaction gave him a smile, "and you are welcome," Maan said with a smile and Geet looked at him frozen up, "Baba ji, he smiled, he smiled at me, I am not dreaming right," Geet thought as an happiness spread in her wounded heart, healing the pain, she smiled a bit bright,


"Geet, I am going to the office now, will be back in the evening only, ok," Maan said and Geet nodded, and Maan went away, and Geet was now jumping with joy, after a hour when Dev saw her he was confused with her big smiling face, "Geet, what happened," Dev asked surprised, and Geet showed him the phone, "New mobile?" Dev asked surprised again,

"Yes, your brother gave me," Geet said slightly blushing, "What? Bro? I can't believe it Geet, oh my god," Dev smiled big, "I too can't believe it," Geet said, "I thought he was anger on you, and now he gifted you a phone," Dev asked confused, "You Brother na, Dev, is just like a god, what he will do, why, how, only he will know and no one else can even guess," Geet said with a smile,

"So true," Dev smiled up, "Hey can I get your number Geet," Dev asked and Geet grinned, "Hey Geet, let's call Adi, no, no, let's call Pinky," Dev said and Geet too nodded and called Adi and Pinky and they were too shocked and the noon went with happiness, and Geet waited for Maan at evening,

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It was around 7 when Maan came into the house, and went to his room, Geet immediately went and made his black coffee and came to his room, as she came near the room she saw him, standing there with his hands folded, "Ji," She stood near his door step and Maan signed her to come in,

Geet went and gave him the coffee and turned to leave, "Geet, go and wait for me in the garden terrace," Maan said making Geet shock, "Garden terrace, now," she thought but didn't say anything, just shook her head and went away, Maan watched her leave, "God, I have to ask her for sorry, somehow, until I tell her, I will not be able to breathe in relief, after doing such a big mistake, I am suppose to say sorry," Maan made his mind up,

Geet was walking in the terrace not know why he called there, "is it about yesterday, is he still anger, Baba ji, why did he call me now," Geet was burning with tension, she then sat on the fountain wall there, looking at her own reflection in the water, and suddenly she saw Maans reflection in the water and she turned immediately and stood up as she saw him,


Maan too was so nervous, he don't know how to say and what to say, he looked into her nervous face and he took a deep breath, "Hmm, Geet, about yesterday," Maan started and paused, he was actually struggling for words, and this made Geet more nervous and shocked, she looked at his face and she can't guess anything, his eyes was directly staring at her,

Geet then broken her eyes contact and moved forward, "I am sorry," she said and Maan looked at her puzzled, and went and stood behind her, "I should have told you that I met him at the hospital, I didn't say it actually because I really didn't want to think about my past, but still I should have told you, I am sorry," Geet said,

Maan suddenly turned her, holding her shoulders and he looked at her as he held both her shoulders, "Geet, you didn't do any mistake, you did what you thought was right and there is nothing to feel sorry about it, you have all the rights to forget your past and, and," Maan was trying his best to say the sorry word,


Just then Maan noticed Geet who was frozen with her wide eyes opened up, her breathing getting speedy, Maan got puzzled by her reaction and just then he realized he was holding Geet so close to him, his hands holding tightly on her shoulders and his breathe hitting her face,

Geet was staring at his big black shining eyes looking at her, now she was feeling nothing, she was totally dazzling by his closeness and captivate by his hold on her, she wasn't hearing anything, she wasn't belonging to this word at the moment, she was just dream feeling his hands on her and his eyes looking into her eyes, her air filled with his aroma,

Maan knowing that her state was due to his closeness, took his hands off from her immediately, and broke his eyes contact from her, and stepped back, looked away, Geet just looked blank as if she was realized from hypnotism, she felt embarrassed for starting at him like that, she looked at him standing there turned away,


Geet without a word ran away from there, and after a few minutes he saw Geet and she was not there, "god, where did she go", Maan thought, "Maan, you can't even say that single word, what kind of an businessman are you," Maan asked himself, "But it was so hard to say it, must be my ever sleeping ego" Maan thought,

Then Maan too went down and saw Geet was in the kitchen, Geet was not doing anything but starting at the blue, "Baba ji, what's happening, what would have he thought, but what am I suppose to do, whenever he comes close to me or whenever he touches me, it feels like I am lost somewhere, it takes my breath away, and I don't know what I am doing,"

"And looking into his eyes, feels like I could live in those staring black world forever," Geet thought as she saw his shining deep black eyes in her mind, even thinking about it gave her a shiver, "Baba ji, please don't make him upset because of this ok, please," Geet prayed and started to make the dinner,

Precap: Saying sorry turned romantic,

(Thank you all for your wonderful comments,,,, Love you Dear ones... Love you all)

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense emotional fab update! Maan confronts n blames her! Geet upset seeing him like dat! Geet wants to prove herself innocent! She tries to talk to him bt Maan stubborn! Maan wrking out n Geet sad seeinh him in pain! She feels guilty n stops him! Geet talkin to her babaji! She wants all Maan's pain! Maan hears ! Next day - Dev home n hurt! Geet stays to take care of him! Adi tells Maan abt teh keys n Armaan in the helmet! Daya tells Maan abt Meera! Maan upset n realises tht Geet is innocent! Maan rushes home! Js read part 39 nw! Terrific update! Nakul n Rahul talking bat wt happend n Dev overhears n demands to knw! They tell him! Dev asks Geet bt she tells him nt to say anything to Maan! Maan home! trie sto say sorry! Maan gives a mobile! Geet happy! she serves him lunch! Dev n Geet talk! Maan home n tries to say sorry bt she says sorry! Geet leaves terrace! Wonder abt her reaction! awesum teasr! superbly written! update soon! Pls update Remember me n the girl...thanks
Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago

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