~A HUNDRED YEARS~(TR FF)~*On hold* - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Lovely update
Swaron are smart kids lol
I love the name the pick for their brother and sister ;)


Thank you...aur ss se itne carry away mat ho...unki harkatein dekhna to abhi baaki hai meri dost
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
awesome concept ...
taarey born same time ...yupeee
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
awesome update
loved it
sorry for late comment :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Heya guys...Itni badi good news milli hai ki mera to dil garden garden ho gaya hai...haan pata hai main late hoon..par ek to kanjoosi karte ho upar se jaldi update bhi chahiye... do stories hain donon ho alternatively post karoongi...aur alternate days pe to bilkul nahi...aur kuch kaam nahi hai kya? Accha bohot hui bakwass..pls like and comment...aur main keh rahi hoon har chapter ke dates timings sab dhyaan se padhna nahi to aage confusiya jaoge...Enjoy

CHAPTER 2

2 years later...

5th September,1982
1:00pm
Shekhawat mansion

There were packers and movers running all around ..packing things and loading them into trucks...the shekhawats were moving to another city...
A room in the house..
Taani was crawling here and there when suddenly a boy came in the room...
Ta:bhai!!!
Swa:Are princess aap akele yahaan ghum rahe ho...he picks her up in his lap...although swayam was just 5 he very well understood his responsibilities of being a brother...
swa:to taani aapko pata hai ghar mein kya ho raha hai..
taani cutely shakes her head in a no while pouting..
Swa:to main bataun...
ta:shouts, haan!!!
swa: kitna chillati hai..shaitan..ab sun..hum log na delhi chod ke jaa rahe hain...mumbai..dad ka bussiness mumbai-oriented ho gaya hai isliye jaana padega...ab aisa muh mat bana ki sab samajh aa gaya..mujhe pata hai sab kuch tere sar ke upar se ud gaya hai...
Ta:matlab?
Swa:matlab ,watlab kuch nahi...jaldi chal...khana khane...
Taa:Chalo...

Mumbai
Singhania Mansion
1:00pm

servant:Baby ji, pls khana kha lo..
Girl:Nahi,sharon ko nahi khana...

This is our very own tantrum queen sharon..

Servant:Pls na baby ji..thoda sa kha lo...
Shar:nahi nahi nahi..sharon nahi khayegi...

Suddenly a toddler comes crawling to the servant..picks a piece of roti..dips it in dal..and goes to Sharon..
Toddler:di,ye lo ,tha lo(Baby tone)
Shar:Rey,ye kya kar rahe ho..mujhe nahi khana..
Rey:plsss...
Shar:Accha baba..kha lungi..and she places a peck on rey's cheek and goes off to have food..
Rey(Wiping the kiss):Gandi..kissy kyo kiya..Rey ko nahi pasand..
Servant comes up to and picks him up:Thank you rey baba...

Delhi
5:00pm

Ranveer(Swayam & taani dad):while talking on his mobile..Haan Ranvijay...hum log kal din mein pohoch jayenge...samaan aaj hi pohoch jaayega...itne purane dost to the hi hum..ab padosi ban jayenge...

Other side of the line...mumbai..
Ranvijay(Sharey dad):Haan bhai...aur tu samaan ki chinta mat kar ...wo yahaan hum dekh lenge..they talk for some time and then end the call...

Shar:Dad..aap kis se baat kar rahe the...
Ranvijay:Beta...hum ranveer uncle se baat kar rahe the..
Shar:Wo kaun hain?
Ranvijay:Wo..daddy ke best friend hain.jo kal hamare neighbour ban jaayenge..aur unke bhi 2 kids hain..unki daughter to rey ke jitni hi hai..aur ek son bhi jiski age aapse 2-3 months badi hai..kaho to wedding fix kara dein..(he jokes)...
Shar:dad!!!
Ranvijay:Accha baba sorry..ab ye chocolate kise chahiye...

Delhi
6:00pm

Swa: mom,mom main aur taani apne friends se last time milne jaayein...
Richa(taayam mom):Haan baccha..pakka jaao..aur suno ..apne sab frnds ko ye chocolates bhi de dena...
Swa:Thank you mom..he gives her a hug...
Swayam goes..
Richa:Thank you god...pata nahi kya accha kaam kiya hai maine ki mujhe swayam mila..believe hi nahi hota that he's just 5...

Taani'a room
Swa: chal princess ready ho jaa..tujhe friends se nahi milna...Maria didi( taayam's caretaker)..ise ready kar do..
Maria:okay..chal shaitan ...tayyar hona hai..
ta:yaay

Mumbai
9:30pm
after dinner,rey's room

Sharey were playing...
Shar: Rey tujhe pata hai..kal na hamare neighbours aa rahe hain...unki naa ek daughter and ek son hai..daughter tere age ki hai aur son son meri ka...par unke names nahi pata..and she keeps blabbering...
Sha:Tu kuch bol kyun nahi raha?
sharon looks at rey who was fast asleep..
Shar:Rosy di(sharey's caretaker)..Ise sula do ..main bhi sone jaa rahi hoon..Good night..
Rosy:Good night..

Delhi
9:30pm

Taani was playing catch with swayam were he was letting the ball go intentionally...just to make sure his sister wins...
Ta:bhai..taani sweepy(sleepy)..
Swa:accha chalo so jao...he puts her to bed..and goes to sleep...


So guys how was it..I know thoda boring ho gaya...par ye chappy to swaron ka intro tha...taarey ke thode bade hone pe unka bhi intro milega...pls pls pls ..like and comment kar dena aur thode lambe comments pls..

Love
Sandy




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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Loved it..a lot...Who really said it was boring...😡..update n ya pm..me 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Cute n lovely update
Taayam nd sharey r so sweet
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Awesome
taayum and sharey
Loved it
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
it was damn awesome...loved taayam and sharey...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
luvly.. i luvd toddler rey n taani talk n antics..!!
sharon tantrum queen n swayam awwie so carin towards his sis..

sweet update..

tayam n sharey parents r bst frnz n wud b neighbours r rely nyc...

thnx 4 pm n update ;))

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
res/unres
nice update dear😃
o god taani& swayam
talks r soo
sweet & also
rey & sharon
their dads
r best friends
very good
& now would be
neigbours
cool 😉 😉
overall this update
was superb😊 😊 😊

Edited by navk - 11 years ago

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