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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: pinky118
awesome poems👍🏼
love them all...

Thank you Pinky 😳

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Just finished reading Apoorva...i was surprised that the story ended so suddenly. I thought there's a lot more coming. If CID team was teaming up with international investigation agencies, thete should be a lot more action and twists. 😆 anyway...nice attempt. Looking forward to your next one.

Edited by visrom - 12 years ago

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Thank you vis di...ya little sudden it was cause if i stretched i had to write much much more and ya little bit lazy i became😳 Anyway thanks for reviewing it amidst your busy schedule😃

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

A LOVE STORY <3

This is a tale of Jealousy and Ire

And how a love story set fire

To the happy lives of two friends

Who were unaware of life's bends

They vowed to get married together

And to stay as friends forever

But what did they know what fate held

It broke apart the force with which they gelled

Enter a man of virtues and looks

Who every girl wanted by hook or crook

Such a heart of gold he had

He hardly saw good from bad

They set their eyes upon him at once

Like a cat waitng to pounce

They wanted an oppurtunity to befriend him

Who knew it would turn out grim?

The guy talked to them with equal affection

No difference he saw in friendly interaction

While the girls were busy sketching plans

Cause they couldnt miss the golden chance

Each moment they wanted to spend

With him, they wanted to blend

Each was lost in their motive

That they forgot to be sportive

Gradually they hardly even met

For inside them was brewing hate

For the other out of envy

Their hearts poisoned and spiky

They had no words left to say

For all they said was "Hey"

Even that dissappeared in a few days

Melted were the friendly ways

Once they went to desperate heights

And so violent were there fights

One pushed they other over a cliff

And then she stood stiff

Wondering if he was worth a life?

What if he did not accept her for a wife?

The very thought scared her to death

So she embraced death so they sayeth

The guy aforesaid drowned in gloom

Never like that would friendship bloom

But at last they united he thought

In a heavenly spot

DISCLAIMER:THIS IS NOT TRUE LIFE INCIDENT RELATED😛

Edited by nsapo - 12 years ago

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Reshma

@Reshh16

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Great poem re..!! 👏👏

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Jackles

@Jackles

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: nsapo
A LOVE STORY <3

This is a tale of Jealousy and Ire
And how a love story set fire
To the happy lives of two friends
Who were unaware of life's bends

They vowed to get married together
And to stay as friends forever
But what did they know what fate held
It broke apart the force with which they gelled

Enter a man of virtues and looks
Who every girl wanted by hook or crook
Such a heart of gold he had
He hardly saw good from bad

They set their eyes upon him at once
Like a cat waitng to pounce
They wanted an oppurtunity to befriend him
Who knew it would turn out grim?

The guy talked to them with equal affection
No difference he saw in friendly interaction
While the girls were busy sketching plans
Cause they couldnt miss the golden chance

Each moment they wanted to spend
With him, they wanted to blend
Each was lost in their motive
That they forgot to be sportive

Gradually they hardly even met
For inside them was brewing hate
For the other out of envy
Their hearts poisoned and spiky

They had no words left to say
For all they said was "Hey"
Even that dissappeared in a few days
Melted were the friendly ways

Once they went to desperate heights
And so violent were there fights
One pushed they other over a cliff
And then she stood stiff

Wondering if he was worth a life?
What if he did not accept her for a wife?
The very thought scared her to death
So she embraced death so they sayeth

The guy aforesaid drowned in gloom
Never like that would friendship bloom
But at last they united he thought
In a heavenly spot

DISCLAIMER:THIS IS NOT TRUE LIFE INCIDENT RELATED😛