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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

APOORVA...

Really Elaborated way...😊

I must Appreciate that U know How to Tied Reader By Ur Excillent Imagination...👏👏

Somehow Team work was Minimum rather U already told it CID INTERNATIONAL but I did not find much Investigation from Team of TRIO or Others as well...😊😊

MC DAVY, I like His End...😉😉

The MYLOSIN was a Good Idea...👏👏

I Enjoyed it...😛😛

Next Time, Little Detailed and yes try with Minimum Characters and with More Working Skills of Team...👍🏼👍🏼

Thank You so much...😳😳

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Anjali

@anjali_mahajan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Will read soon ... very soon 😃

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: KS_Shreya
Looking good Apoorva! And do continue soon! 😃

Shreya di story is finished up😛😊

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: gadhadada

APOORVA...
Really Elaborated way...😊
I must Appreciate that U know How to Tied Reader By Ur Excillent Imagination...👏👏
Somehow Team work was Minimum rather U already told it CID INTERNATIONAL but I did not find much Investigation from Team of TRIO or Others as well...😊😊
MC DAVY, I like His End...😉😉
The MYLOSIN was a Good Idea...👏👏
I Enjoyed it...😛😛
Next Time, Little Detailed and yes try with Minimum Characters and with More Working Skills of Team...👍🏼👍🏼
Thank You so much...😳😳

Yes Gd thanks for your frank and wonderful review😳Its little hurried because i cant write long stories and yes team investigation more next time...it was less because one of them was the culprit and i wanted to prove that they did not know each other well and conducted seperate investigation and how each of the characters felt...Thaank you😃

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan
Will read soon ... very soon 😃

Sure di😃

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Pushing up...please do read :) I'd love to get more feedback

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: pappais
lovely story apoorva

Thank you ranju (papaya) 🤗

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Soni.

@Soni.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

One fine day...fab poem..love the concept of Adi sir coming out of the gift. Must be one of the best gifts you ever got. Lovely...

I am confused with your other stories. Are they all the the same story with continuing parts or different ones. Why have you posted them one after the other...?

Will try my best to read them all soon

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nsapo

@nsapo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Soni.
One fine day...fab poem..love the concept of Adi sir coming out of the gift. Must be one of the best gifts you ever got. Lovely...

I am confused with your other stories. Are they all the the same story with continuing parts or different ones. Why have you posted them one after the other...?

Will try my best to read them all soon

Sorry for the confusion Soni ...they are all seperate stories...Except CID International all others are in the order they were written in...Ya sure😃

Thanks a lot😳 it was but sadly its just imagination😆