Mohan-Megha A story within a story - updated - part 3 - Page 4

Originally posted by: shinidar

@senpoo

Thanks for the compliments. I know you are an expert at writing fan fiction. So I really appreciate your words.

Originally posted by: maanvir

Hey shinidar!!!!

As promised i read d chapter in one go...its 11:30pm here & i must hv bn slpng by nw to catch school early in d mrng tmw...
Anywys i dnt regret kpng awake so long coz i had a treat to my eyes & mind reading d update...

😊😊

I too was confused lik Mohan in d bgng...all my confusions abt d hero wer cleared by Megha...

There is still a lot more about the hero that is to be unraveled. Wait and watch 😉.

As good as d novel so was the Meghan part...
Thank you.
As i was going thru d modus operandi of the smugglers i really thought it was looking glamorous

& d nxt instant i read d editor cmng up wid d same view...(does dat mean i & d editor think alike??? 😆 )

U actually seem to knw a lot abt such operations...(i wonder r u a part of those smugglers firms 😉 )😃 Let me just say this...the many remote places I go to, certainly serve as an inspiration for the many plot Iines I have included in the novel of the story.

The hero is a very mysterious character of course...evrythng abt him is unusual & unique...he s surely a genious...
Saying dat Niketa is nt a lesser genious either...

She knws hw to get him talk...

They are certainly going to make a dynamic duo as the story in the novel progresses.

I liked d name he gave himself Nishabd- a man of few wrds...

Cool!

If nt fr d comment on ur blog i wud hv gone mad guessing d name of d hero...
(a piece of advice: if ders an optiin to delete comments on d blog delete d one wch tells d real name of d hero...it is killing d suspense).

Somehow that comment got automatically approved. At least it spared you the craziness of guessing the name of the hero😊 Anyway, the original name of the hero is a very small mystery compared to all the other mysteries swirling around in the story and it was anyway going to be revealed in the very beginning of part 4. So I initially let the comment be, but I have now, upon your suggestion, edited the name out.

Its hetting vry intrsgng update after update...wud dfntly lov to read more...

Ps: sorry fr nt being d frst to cmnt. No probs 😊

Originally posted by: Senpoo

*Poo is shocked* 😲 That's too kind and humble of you to call me that!!! I know that anyone can see that my FF still shows lack of experience! 😊

You write like an ace and your writing is very impressive!!! To be frank I haven't read the novel (Megha's novel i.e. the inside story) part in your story but still I could feel the intriguing effect that you have created, through Mohan's words in the outside story 😃! That comes from your awesome writing which looks very professional!!! 😊 I will wait for the novel part of your story to end, so that I can catch up on the same! I have too weak a heart to handle suspense and anything that is out of my control! 😆 So I will wait and read it! 😊

Originally posted by: raokrithika

👏👏👏 a roller coaster😃

👍🏼good writing ...u have got ths writing technique bole toh tricks

u have added rite amt of all kinds of mixtures to ur novel !!

great going...

Originally posted by: Moner_Radio

shinidar :

just to let you know, i'll comment soon on your update ASAP. its right there on the top of my mind, just that i'm a bit busy clearing up my inbox these days and couldnt manage time enough to read the entire update. hope you wont mind.😊