Mohan-Megha A story within a story - updated - part 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am back with part 2 of "The story within a story". When I tried to post the rather long part 2, not only did my original post itself disappear but my ID disappeared as well and I could not login again. Funnily, I was able to reregister with the same ID. Not wanting the whole thing to happen again, I have now posted part 2 of the story in a wordpress blog. I have also posted part 1 there.

http://shinidar.wordpress.com/

Part 2 is quite long as I had to flesh out Megha's novel part (in italics and indented) along with the Mohan and Megha part (normal text). If you don't like the novel part (which is a thriller and with main characters quite different from Megha and Mohan) you can just keep skipping to the Mohan-Megha part. If you actually manage to read through and get to the end of part 2, (Bravo! seriously) do let me know what you think of it.

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Since my earlier post on this has disappeared, this is just a background for those who may not have read my first post. I was inspired to write Mohan-Megha "A story within a story" by a comment that suggested that in the last episode, in the last but one scene where Megha gets up from Mohan's arms a hint/opening/segway for season 3 was edited out and a voice dubbed over it.

I was intrigued by what that could possibly have been. Some of us want to continue seeing KKK and AS as Mohan and Megha while some of us would love to see them in new roles and in a new story. So I thought is there a possibility to make both happen in a hypothetical season 3 and thus was born "A story within a story", a year long story that unravels as Megha writes the last chapter of her novel and Mohan reads the novel through one night.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... Seriously a thriller...
Seriously I almost stopped breathing reading...
Loved it... Eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great effort. Amazing thriller. keeps you hooked and guessing👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏
Wow quite a interesting story.
keep writing👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Indeed a roller coster ride, very thrilling and interesting. I am loving this thriller angle in the story and on top of it MM interactions are so adorable, so in a way reading two different stories in one ... Somehow enjoying the combination!

Waiting eagerly for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@nbtnmkkfan, @spidie, @sonn_da, @sakhisangni, Thanks so much for all your encouraging words. I was not very sure if anyone in the forum would even like a thriller story juxtaposed with the M&M story. My intention was to create characters for KKK & AS in the novel completely different from M&M. A modern, bold, very talkative, and full of life young female character and a young, very silent, strong and mysterious male character.

Because of my constant travels I am not able to finish writing all of part 3 as I had originally wanted to, but I will shortly upload at least what I have thus far so that you folks will get a flavor of the hero, as part 1&2 only dealt with the female character.

Can someone guide me as to how to post a link to the webpage (http://shinidar.wordpress.com/) where I am posting the story instead of just the address? Thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hufff...

Finallly!!!! I cmpltd part 2...

Its a masterpiece...

My condition was sam e like Mohan in the story until i cmpltd reading dis chapter

Wonderfully written...

Jus lik suspense has been the esseance of nbt ur story too was a thriller

Waiting impatiently for d nxt part...

Do pm me plz...

Thanx fr d awesome sequel to nbt 2!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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When you write in a post there is an icon with a globe above the space given for writing, it is ment to insert a hyperlink try using that and you'll be able to post as link.
https://shinidar.wordpress.com/

Made this link in a similar fashion
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shinidar :


I wrote a really long comment to your update in the morning but IF gulped it up so I'm trying to type the entire thing once again. Lets see how much I can remember !😉


First things first .. SUPERB, OUTSTANDING, ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT👏👏👏 ! and I mean every bit of it. I love thrillers and that makes me love this FF, and your updates, even more .. the NBT/ MM story with a thriller ka tadka 😉! AWESOME ⭐️⭐️⭐️!


Okay now back to the update. Honestly speaking I was imagining Jayashree Venketaramanan as the daredevil Niketa all throughout the update. I really loved her as the daredevil Navika during her sting operations days, so I think that stayed with me. Although I guess you might have wanted readers to imagine Aakanksha as Niketa in the story. But then I cant help it !😉


Niketa's convo with her mother about the Saas-Bahu wars was bang on ..trust me I know, that for some people the on-screen Saas-Bahu wars are far more important than even border wars ..I have a few such examples in my own extended family😆. And the part where Megha wonders whether to bring the story to a full circle in the end or to leave some open ends so as to pave the way for a sequel😊 , I didn't know whether to feel happy or sad that moment .. it was so much in sync with our current state of mind regarding a Season 3 of the show. And then the part when MM wondered how some fictional characters becomes so near and dear to us that we start to think them as real .. I felt so good, thank you for dedicating these lines to us, the crazy NBT and MM fangirls.😃🤗


I loved the editor and Mr. Gupta and their concern over Niketa's wellbeing and safety😊. And the editor's reactions as Mr. Gupta briefed him about Niketa's daredevil nature was hilarious ..i was actually imagining Mohan's freaked out reactions there 😆! hope we get to see more of this amazing duo in action in the upcoming updates !😃


And now I have some questions to ask you -


1.what is the editor's name ? his name has been mentioned nowhere till now in the update . yaar kuch toh naam hoga na unka 😕?


2.the male lead of the story. Don't tell me he is in disguise as the second-in- command of the racket trying to get his hands on the core members of the gang.😆


3.if the male lead is disguised as one of the kingpins of the gang, then why he is after Niketa's life and planning acid attacks on her?😕😲


4.the old man in the train. Mr Bernett and Ellie Arroway was like her and Mr. Gupta's personal secret over favorite fictional characters. Then how come some random old man gets to know about it? Or is he actually Mr.Gupta in disguise 😉? I would love that to happen I tell you !😉


Ps : Megha threatening to make Mohan bald and his subsequent alarmed reactions was hilarious. 😆

Pps : Mohan's "sniffing pakoda over the phone" act and the mini-disaster that followed in the kitchen was beyond hilarious.😆

Update soon.😃

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