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Posted: 11 years ago
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The mystery of Her Eyes..!!


I saw the fire of anger in her eyes, the violence, the impatience, barely contained in those mystic pools. Agitation was raking through her, threatening to overflow.

I heard people calling her "heart-less". Fools that they are, they rarely recognize how "heart-felt" she could be.

Masked with layers of anger, the tough shell she has cocooned herself in, is a soft, kind, hard-working, honest girl.

Being the eldest she took up all the responsibilities willingly. Yet, the tenderness was tested & killed at every single step & breath she took.

Never showing her care towards me, though secretly helping me through every fall & down. Those beautiful eyes always glared at me with a " try finding me out, I dare you! "

She refused to be with me, her response was more intriguing to me than the disappointment I felt.

The first day I saw her, the confidence, strength were vividly visible through her ever expressive eyes.

The few moments of that "eye-lock" left me wondering. What color was her eyes? Funny, the question nagges me till date & trust me I am still clueless, just like the first time I was, "blank..!"

Those mysterious eyes, with so many emotions, anger, strength, confidence, care, love..! Those eyes, beautiful eyes of the love of my life, still intrigue me..!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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these are the best lines ive read about depicting emotion thru the eyes !
brilliant portrayal dear 👏 a few words..with so much depth!
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This is a beautiful piece! Such intricate detailing 👏
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thank u Purple_lady & disha15
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This is what I can't describe!!
Just one word, Puh-Fect!! :)
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Beautiful dear... Amazing! *speechless* Sorry! Hats off to you! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so lovely dear, beautifully written, so awsome
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Thank u for ur precious feedbacks :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was really an nice piece of work
They r adroble i have ever read
Keep writing more
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Originally posted by: Sswachi

It was really an nice piece of work

They r adroble i have ever read
Keep writing more


Thank u ..! :)

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