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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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HAPPY DIWALI TO ALL OF MY SEDUCTIVE FRIENDS!!!!❤️🤗

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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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WAITING KAB KHATAM HOGI!!!!!

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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AAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I M FIRST!!!!!!!! how!!!!!! *faints*

Expel...bring some water for heaven!😳

edit~~~

the key word of this chapter is KEY...though i couldnt get the key poiny!...my poor barin😳

sigh...1 year!

we got a glimpse of typical NK😉

is Khushi only mourning over her family or there is more! Khushi seems to b emotionally attached to sheesh mahal. more than Arnav, i feel she is the princess of Sheesh Mahal!😆

was that HE frm previus chap Arnav's brother!

aww...i love kathak...wish i could dance!...n seduce a guy like Arnav😉

i hav a feeling, khushi knows abt that MISSING picture!

i loved the mughal histry part. ll love to know more thats why eagerly waiting for their lunch!😃

Edited by -HEAVEN- - 12 years ago

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

There's something about Seduction that seduces you even as the story moves forward...even as Arnav gets increasingly attracted to khushi...even as we are enthralled by the description of each and every setting. That is the beauty of it all, and this one needs to be savored slowly; something that I compeletly missed since I read the earlier chapter in a hurry.

I'm glad in a way that Arnav opened up, even though it may have been partially, about the loss he has suffered. Somehow it makes me think that his brother's death (I'm thinking his name is Akash) is in a way his responsibility...for him to put it on a highrer pedestal that his own parents' death, there has to be that reason, isn't it?

Kudos to you for the the description of the setting of the dargah. Reminded me of IPK of course but this one took it a notch higher since it had the right mix of multiple elements...NK and La's intimacy described in so less words (yet thoroughly visible), the explanation for the locks and keys, Khushi's sanak...and of course Arnav baring his heart (inadvertently and partially) to Khushi.

I love clothes and hence whenever it comes to a through delineation on the same, I'm completely in. So may it be the chikan kari or the embroidery that was explained in the earlier part of the chapter...the whole narrative is spell binding.

The small steps that Arnav is taking towards Khushi...I'm hopeful they turn into fruitful ones as well, because it is only a kindred spirit that can ease off the pain lodged within oneself.

I'm yet to understand how the title comes into play; going by the vibes that I'm curently getting from this one par intezaar karne se kaun katraaya hai?

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

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~Edit (Finally!)~

Juhi, now I have the answer to who the real seducer is - You! You seduce us with the details of Lucknowi art and culture, with the dream like description of the blue room, with the graceful yet mysterious narration of the sound of the ghunghroo, with the vivid and divine picture of the dargah, with the charming aura that seems to engulf everything around Arnav and Khushi. And the intensity of the pain that the two of them are dealing with. I am enchanted. Bas!

Its like their pain has left them in a trance like state, where they are beyond the world that is around them.. like they find all that is real, unreal. Except each other. So she lost her family and Arnav lost his brother. How? Why? And more importantly, will they be able to heal each other ? And what is this inexplicable and potent force that pulls them towards each other, against their own nature? What is the key to this mystery, Juhiji ? (Khushi's key diatribe was stunning, by the way. To be included in the anthology titled "The Very Best of Expelliarmus")

Just magical, Juhi. This story just seems to transport me to this mystical land of Lucknow.. which is in the present, yet preserves the past. Lovely 😊

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_Devaki_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

I was waiting for your update..
The pace at which the story is progressing..Depicting the confusion and atraction..That is incredibly sweet and cute..
Why Arnav had locked himself in a shell?
What happened to his family?..What happened to his brother?..Is he punishing himself for something?..Why is he living there alone?..Is their past interconnected somehow?
So many questions..Iam sure we will get all the answers soon😃

And you have recreated the dargah scene beautifully..The description Khushi gave about key was awesome..In some point Iam sure Khushi and Arnav will become the key to each others happiness..

You have paired NK and La also..I really wished to see them as a couple on IPKKND..They are really perfect for each other,aren't they?

Arnav asked her to call him by his name.I guess the romantic Arnav in him is slowly coming out..Khushi is a very good Kathak dancer!..And she knew he was watching her dancing..How cute..

Both are very much attracted to each other and I think they have suffered a lot in the past too.. I would love to visit Lucknow and see the famous chikankaari work, I love travelling😃..Your story strengthen my desire to visit Lucknow..😳

As always the update left me wanting for more..
Waiting for the next chapter eagerly..
Kudos for this fantastic update!.

PS:Sorry for being late in editing my comment😃

Edited by _Devaki_ - 12 years ago

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Pyewest

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Was eagerly waiting. Thanks for the lovely update. Loved it. Happy Diwali. 😊

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Both are so drawn to each other, helplessly and both have suffered so much...

I so wish Khushi says yes to lunch with Arnav. I know they'll both fight the attraction, but I'd love to see how they deal with these burgeoning emotions...

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Nandz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Wonderful chapter once again!

Arnav's pain was so tangible when he was talking to his di? What exactly happened? His brother died that is y? Or there is something more? Is he somewhat responsible for the pain that the family is going through now!

Loved the bond between raizadas!

Ahh loved the dargah scene! Though it was same as the show but so different in spirit! Where original dargah scene sow the seeds of naftrat between them this scene definitely brought them closer. In original scene both tried to hurt each other but here they both unknowingly shared and in a way lessened each other's pain!

And my god i never thought about a key like that ever! How did u even come up with it! Khushi seemed to have done a research on it!

I love the instant attraction between the two that seemed to be growing with each passing moment!

N what i specially like is how there seemingly simple unsuspecting gestures seems to seduce each other! Both are getting seduced without them being aware of it! By simple dancing, by simple talking, simply sharing! No special effort is required!

N i love how direct they are with each other. Always telling the other what they feel without any hesitation. This level of comfort is not achieved by all

I have a suspicion. Is khushi 's past also related to sheesh mahal somehow? The knowledge she has about the place is beyond ordinary!

Whatever it is m sure khushi arnav are gonna prove a big support and comfort to each other!

The key to raizada family's happiness and peace lies in khushi!!

Loved the chapter!

Waiting for the next one!!

Happy diwali!

Edited by Nandz - 12 years ago