There's something about Seduction that seduces you even as the story moves forward...even as Arnav gets increasingly attracted to khushi...even as we are enthralled by the description of each and every setting. That is the beauty of it all, and this one needs to be savored slowly; something that I compeletly missed since I read the earlier chapter in a hurry.
I'm glad in a way that Arnav opened up, even though it may have been partially, about the loss he has suffered. Somehow it makes me think that his brother's death (I'm thinking his name is Akash) is in a way his responsibility...for him to put it on a highrer pedestal that his own parents' death, there has to be that reason, isn't it?
Kudos to you for the the description of the setting of the dargah. Reminded me of IPK of course but this one took it a notch higher since it had the right mix of multiple elements...NK and La's intimacy described in so less words (yet thoroughly visible), the explanation for the locks and keys, Khushi's sanak...and of course Arnav baring his heart (inadvertently and partially) to Khushi.
I love clothes and hence whenever it comes to a through delineation on the same, I'm completely in. So may it be the chikan kari or the embroidery that was explained in the earlier part of the chapter...the whole narrative is spell binding.
The small steps that Arnav is taking towards Khushi...I'm hopeful they turn into fruitful ones as well, because it is only a kindred spirit that can ease off the pain lodged within oneself.
I'm yet to understand how the title comes into play; going by the vibes that I'm curently getting from this one par intezaar karne se kaun katraaya hai?
Edited by Eccentrica - 10 years ago
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