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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 2 :

you love making me cry naa? here whaaat? Khushi suffering from depression... and 3 months later on their wedding day anniversary Khushi is still here in pain and lifeless 😭 she's going through so much, plz Arnav do something he's the only one who can save here from this!!! Then the end of your chapter was a bit reassuring ...

ok let me imagine:
1-Khushi is crying she's holding his hand tight and hugs him tight
2- Khushi starts speaking
3- I don't want this to happen Khushi leaves Arnav because she'll think she doesn't make Arnav happy...


Maria
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MariaArHiholic

chapter 2 :


you love making me cry naa? here whaaat? Khushi suffering from depression... and 3 months later on their wedding day anniversary Khushi is still here in pain and lifeless 😭 she's going through so much, plz Arnav do something he's the only one who can save here from this!!! Then the end of your chapter was a bit reassuring ...

ok let me imagine:
1-Khushi is crying she's holding his hand tight and hugs him tight
2- Khushi starts speaking
3- I don't want this to happen Khushi leaves Arnav because she'll think she doesn't make Arnav happy...


Maria



Mariiiaaa darllinng!
I am glad you're back! 🤗

I just noticed, you are back after 2 months and you're still crying 😆
LOL Thanks alot! 😃

Next chapter is a surprise package I can say
Won't be able to update before the 28th, my exams are gonna start. So, you'll have to wait more 😳
But till then stay tuned & keep smiling (:

Love <3

Bani
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BBani



Mariiiaaa darllinng!
I am glad you're back! 🤗

I just noticed, you are back after 2 months and you're still crying 😆
LOL Thanks alot! 😃

Next chapter is a surprise package I can say
Won't be able to update before the 28th, my exams are gonna start. So, you'll have to wait more 😳
But till then stay tuned & keep smiling (:

Love <3

Bani


uhhh what ????😕😲 20 days to wait for an update from you?😳 the wait already kills me oh well sabar ka pal meetha hota hai naa? 😆
arey what to do? your FF is a sad story I'm crying... I was away I was crying too... and now that I'm back I'm crying coz i've missed u ... ahan me drama queen🤣
love you too
Maria
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MariaArHiholic


uhhh what ????😕😲 20 days to wait for an update from you?😳 the wait already kills me oh well sabar ka pal meetha hota hai naa? 😆
arey what to do? your FF is a sad story I'm crying... I was away I was crying too... and now that I'm back I'm crying coz i've missed u ... ahan me drama queen🤣
love you too
Maria



Aww Maria that's so sweet!

But you'll have to wait 😆
You love me?
*embarrassed*

LOL okay!
Muah love you too

Bani <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
Bani dear, this is just awesome. I didn't know that you write so well! 🤗
About the story, I'm feeling sad about their loss of the child. 😭 But, fingers crossed for the next chapter. Do update soon and pm me when you update.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
P.S. You can keep an index for the new readers so that they can find the chapters easily. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Hii all my readers! <3
How have you all been ?

I know this is crazy, I haven't updated this since 2 months! So caught up with exams and studies...sorry I apologize but I am back to give you your update.

Enjoy and happy reading.
Do hit a like or comment after reading it. It means alot, seriously.



And what happened next left arnav speechless and overjoyed.

"Ar ar...arnn...Arnavji please don't cry"

Arnav stopped midways...

like a statue he was rooted to the ground...

he was shocked ...

two tear drops made their way down as Arnav turned towards the love of his life.

"Khushi...oh god ...Khushi are you okay? " said Arnav trying to digest all of it.

"I am fine Arnavji"

"Baby you know how much I missed your sweet voice" said Arnav as he embraced her tightly, holding on to her like a child.

Their embrace broke apart reluctantly as Arnav saw her moist eyes.

"Khushi everything's fine ...sab theekh hai...don't cry sweetheart" said Arnav wiping her drops of pearls.

Arnavji...I...I love...I love you" said Khushi as she pulled Arnav towards her and kissed him on his lips.
The kiss was sensous but at the same time full of pain and anguish.

He felt and kissed every corner of her mouth to her neck and back to her mouth.
It was a surreal feeling. Like all of it was a dream.

Their kiss was broken apart when Arnav felt restless. he still couldn't believe that his Khushi was now away from all that...the MDD which came into their lives as a storm but now bids adieu.

Arnav kissed her forehead and slowly brushed away the strand of hair that made its way to Khushi's beautiful face.

"Arnavji I am sorry I am really very sorry" said Khushi leaning on Arnav, her Arnav.

"Khushi why are you apologizing?" said Arnav.

"Because I killed our baby...If I had been careful that evening all of it wouldn't have happened...we could still be very happy ...I am sorry Arnavji" said Khushi as she started crying bitterly.

"Khushi it was not your fault, don't apologize ...everything depends on time, that was not our time and god snatched our baby, but 'ab mai sab theekh kar dunga'... said Arnav as he embraced her again.

"Khushi I'll go and call Nani and Di...they'll be shocked to see you like this" said Arnav as he ran outside to call all the family members.

>>>Lawn- Raizada Mansion<<<

"Dii...Dii ...Khushi, she's speaking now...Di come fast..." said Arnav as he tried to breathe hard.

"What chotte? are you serious?"

Di and Nani along with Payal and Akash reached Arnav's room to see their Khushi Bitiya.


Khushi saw her sister running towards her,

"Khushi...are you okay ?...You know I much we missed your presence around?...Pagli...Where had you gone?" said Payal as she started crying.

"Jiji...so many questions at the same time?"

"Chup Pagli...atleast let me cry peacefully...How are you now?"

"I am fine Jiji...Missed you Jiji" said Khushi as she smiled lightly.

As Nani sat beside Khushi, Khushi gestured to touch her feet,
"Bas Khushi bitiya...We are so glad to see you back, safe and sound." said Nani as her eyes became moist on seeing her flat stomach and a weak body with a pale skin color.

"Nani...I am really sorry...I couldn't give you your grandchild...I am so sorry" said Khushi as she wept in Nani's lap.

"Bass Khushi bitiya...Don't cry bitiya...I just wanted you back SAFE...I don't need anything else bitiya really" said as she kept caressing Khushi's hair.

As everyone left after meeting Khushi, she saw Arnav approach towards her.

"Khushi here take your medicines, you need them"

"I need you Arnavji...with me" said Khushi as she got up from the bed, thought she wobbled a bit but her steps were firm.

"Khushi don't get up...you aren't well..."
and Arnav was cut mid way as Khushi kissed him on his chin.

Both of them looked at each other.
For a moment it felt unreal...Arnav still couldn't believe that after 4 long months he was seeing his Khushi come back to him.

Khushi kissed his forehead and then his hand, simultaneously.

Arnav too was desperate for her touch, he kissed her neck, and bit her nape as she moaned in pleasure after months.
Slowly he tucked her strand of hair and tucked it behind her ears.

Khushi was going crazy by those hot kisses. As she started to open up his shirt buttons, Arnav stood their looking at her beautiful face which was trying to concentrate to pull out his buttons.

He smiled. He was so grateful to god for giving him his angel back. After months of parting and pain, he could see their life starting again.

Within seconds Arnav was almost half naked, Arnav only in his shorts.
His hands were itching to touch her smooth skin so he started to slid down Khushi's bright red kurta which looked so dull infornt of Khushi's glow.

He unzipped her kurta which fell on the ground.
The sudden contact of air with her body made her Khushi shudder.

He saw her body.
He was spellbound to see her silky curves, though she had a pale skin, still she managed to look like an angel.
He was awestruck by her aura.
Her fragile body
Her perfect curves and
the perfect smile on her face, with closed eyes...waiting for him to make a move.

Arnav hugged her tight, he almost in tears.
"Arnavji...what's wrong..." said Khushi a bit perplexed.

"Khushi i can't do this...are we rushing?, like you've just recovered...we shouldn't!".

"No Arnavji...my recovery to this world is your touch."

Arnav was speechless.

"Are you sure Khushi?"

"Yes Arnavji..." came a firm reply.

As Arnav reached her bra hooks, she gasped loudly, and in one go she was infron of him..
Pure and
Innocent.

Arnav took Khushi in his arms as both of them made endless love that night. Pure passionate and sensuous love which made them realize how much they'd missed each other,
His touch
His kisses
Her innocence and
THEIR LOVE.


Hope you all liked it.
Thankyou all

Love all
Bani <3

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: T.R.A

Bani dear, this is just awesome. I didn't know that you write so well! 🤗
About the story, I'm feeling sad about their loss of the child. 😭 But, fingers crossed for the next chapter. Do update soon and pm me when you update.😳


Thanks Tania ma
I am so glad you liked it and yes I will make an index soon.😳
PS the next chapter is updated, page 18 just a min ago 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww Khushi recovered <3
Loved the update
continue soon Bani
pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
After long time u up date,,
thank god khushi is fine now..
Awesome

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