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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Good Work.!

Loved It..!

Hope you come up with new stories..!

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Sodapop313

@Sodapop313

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

This was such a great story. I loved your take on Romeo and Juliet and how you adapted it with Khushi and Arnav. The ending was so sad and the sacrifice Akash and Payal made was just...wow. Really lovely writing and well done 👏 😃

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Aww I loved the update..
Payal n akash.. I will.so sad for them..
Loved the ending

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

uhmm..so dt was it..i thot n was wndrin whthr Payash wud b returnin or nt..😆😆😆lolloved dis stry..perfect Romeo Juliet stry..:):)yaa..lov moves in a mystrious way...:):)
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...do pm me wen u update ne of ur stries//ff//os...😛😛😛😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊

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Sonam-IPKKND

@Sonam-IPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

I have always loved romeo and juilet!

And you have done it in Arnav and khushi version!

I love the lines on the front page!😃

My thoughts on chapter 1 - I loved how you set the scene for the guptas and raizadas.

I loved how you portrayed arjun and arnavs relationship and keeping us in suspense at the end!

Thoughts on chapter 2 - Rahul is so funny! 😆 They met awww! i really like how you have portrayed khushi character! and that Arjun is so weird. and arnav stook up to her yayyy!

Thoughts on chapter 3 - ooo they have found out who they are *bites nails* and reads on

Thoughts on chapter 4 - well both arnav and khushi are in problems. and lavanya is her best friend and she is getting married double celebrations. This arjun is just a weirdo!

Thoughts on chapter 5 - this was a great chapter, i loved how khushi poured her feeling out and this arnav is just sooo sweet!

Thoughs on chapter 6 - this was really good! I loved that they kissed!

to be continued