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A very important Note:-

1. Firstly, I would start with the news that I am leaving on 24th for a short vacation and will return only on the 1st of November which means that I will not be able to update both my stories until the 2nd or 3rd November.

2. Since I will be on mobile data, I will not be able to reply to PMs and scraps or like comments. But I will read the comments of course (I can send a scrap in response to your comment but I will not be able to reply back to your scrap) So before leaving, I will try to answer as many PMs and scraps as I can.

3. If you wish to ask me or speak to me about something during this time frame or even later you can do so on the CC that has been made by a few readers to discuss my stories and other stuffs as well (I can easily comment and quote from phone) The CC is currently on its fourth thread but don't hesitate to drop by as and when you want as the girls over there are quite sweet :) Here is the link -> WLRC#4 Thodi pagal hai but cute hai (If you are wondering what is the full form of WLRC then it is 'Writer Lazy, Readers Crazy' 😆)

4. I recently got to know that I have been awarded the Most Popular Author Award. And the entire credit goes to the readers and those who nominated and voted for me. If it weren't for your immense support, how could I be popular? ~FF Awards Part One!~

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5. A reader has started an initiative to interview authors and she would like to get your contribution for the same. If you have wanted to ask me or any other author any questions, kindly PM mastermagician with your questions. I will let you know whenever that thread will be put up :)

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7. Finally, here is the surprise that I had promised (Don't forget to check Th#4 ArHi SS: Make Me Love when I put up a different surprise there 😉)

Click Me for surprise!!!

P.S. I have not been to Twitter since a long time. Hope to come back there soon during my long journey :)

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hmm.. guess karo :P

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Posted: 11 years ago

🥳yay.. me first

no worry for the delay.. 😃

Part-1

Ratna... really wanted khushi to be her bahu... but arnav's hatred was so strong that he accepted anyting but not khushi... thus, he dropped his dream so that he don't have to marry khushi .. but I guess.. that was for good to, he with tyime understand his mother's words.. that it's indeed not difficult to love khushi

Wow... khushi wore yellow color sari.. great!!! 😃

Hayee.. arnav winked at her😉

Oh ho.. so khushi was expecting payal to aske those type of questions huh!!! But payal shocked her and uhm.. somebody else too.. bechara akash..😆

Loved arnav and payal's bonding here.. but poor akash and khushi felt jealous and alone😉

Oh my god.. NK is awesome even when he speaks pure hindi!!! Loved lavanya's reaction after hearing him... I can see another sweet couple here as now I got to know NK is only 19... so chalta hai :P😉

Aww.. poor NK.. payal kitna bully karti hai usse... kuch toh lihaaz karo behare ka!!!😆

Oye hoye... khushi, she made chinese and kheer, coz he likes it.. kya baat hai 😉

Lol.. akash atleast now think what payal want.. dumbo kahi ka!!!😆

Part-2

Hate madhumati😡... how can she be like this!!!! That even a mother in her didn't come out after seeing how miserable her daughter had been for all these years when she was with her and even now!!! How cruel can her heart be!!! am Glad that atleast one thing payal said said to her affected her!!!

I felt bad for payal, she is so sweet and yet she got mother like this!!! But I loved it when manorama consoled her, like a mom do!!! Atleast she got another mom.. which know what mother is?? 😊

So the property is of khushi's nanaji😲!!! Hmm..

Wow... mamorama band!!! Kya kaam kiya hai.. because of her payal couldn't go Bhopal..😃

Toh humari khushi kumara gupta.. sorry sorry Mrs. Khushi Singh Raizada is angry at her hubby.. morning was not at enough, that he told everyone in their office too regarding their marriage, very bad!!! But all her anger vanished seeing him!!!😉😆

Awww... Arnav ji, tussi great... what magic have you done huh?? His teasing.. oh god.. superb.. and what will those teasing about night.. like she didn't know huh!!!😉

Hayee.. loved how he tricked and they had their lunch.. it so sensual when he made her sit on her lap without her knowing.. she was so lost in her husband ministration😉😳

So kheer reminds him of her mom... that was so sweet moment of them.. loved how she comforts him!!!😃

Lol.. khushi was angry coz he said he loved the fragrance, not her... and then again about tonight!!! Poor khushi😆

Part-3

Akash ka na kuch nahi ho sakta!!! Dude.. you were upset that she didn't said anything about you and what you did?? You did the same no? ab jaldi dimaag ke ghode chaala..aur if not propose atleast get her hints!!! Tum bhi na😉😆

NK is gone.. so soon.. bring him back.. or atleast do mention his and lavanya's skype chat 😃

Aww.. poor khushi... couldn't ignore her husband for long.. aakhir kaar room me aana hi pada.. but but she got her night dress, not any nighty's.. chalo koi nahi😉😳

Lol... arnav is fully enjoying his teasing session.. poor khushi, was so flustered as she got trapped in his double meanings😆

So they spend night at poolside.. 😊

Talking and again getting comfortable... that's important, I guess.. coz before going to next levelof their relation, they should get comfortable again as they were before.. so I am happy with arnav decision to take things slow.. but not too much slow.. as khushi's thinking already moving fast..😉.

So he finally understands his mom words!!! And got mom is always right!!!😃

edited 2: sorry I forget.. I loved their inner thoughts especially arnav's😆

Continue soon 😃

PS: will miss you.. come back soon😃

PPS: congrats for winning most popular author trophy.. you deserves it⭐️⭐️

PPS: thank you so much for reposting your two work.. means a lot to us!!!🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

yeah first page I don't like this Arnav. He is Torturing Khushi with his touching, not good Arnav😳

Either go all the away or stay away😆. poor khushi😡

So he didn't like khushi back then, then khushi is doing right by staying away from him now.

Just love Payal and Akash. Come On Akash Be a man and tell her what you feel.

NK is sweet and his hindi😃

Now what is Arnav hiding from Khushi?

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderful update Z, it was amazing!!! Congrats for the new thread and the award you are an amazing writer and you deserve the award😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res..

~...Unres...~

I read this chapter.. And again did! Right now, i'm still finding it difficult to put my thoughts to words..

With many things and realisations that i've come across while reading the chapter, i'm slightly heady and a lot over whemled!

Starting on,

Payal- the one girl who's been a ray of sunshine in the seemingly difficult times.. With what i feel, she here is the most hurt and deprived.. With the cheerfulness she has brought, i happen to think if it were all to fight of the desolution, the emptyness and the hurt! She had a Mother who's evil, vile and whom she despises *sayingly* , still she feels an orphan! What more tragic can be more than this? Arnav and Khushi had their parents with them to love and cherish for many years. But Payal was lonely, totally!

She could run away at 18, but how can you run away from the feeling, from the one who's given birth to you , its really hard and excessively difficult to hate your own Mother, its like hating a part of your identity!

But she is a fighter.. Fighter indeed! I really think her father was a good man.. Cuz she not only is good, but is pretty amazing too ;).

Aakash - he's cute, but but but.. Is it going to be the Arnav - Khushi way for them too.. Aakash telling her to 'Stay' and payal asking 'Why..?' .. Arnav and Khushi have done that for a wholesome of time, looking for reasons! But Payal gives me hope!
Raziada brothers are incorrigible! ;) be it in expressing feelings or in jealousy!
Payal has sent from heaven for them! ;)

the Raizada elder Ladies are good hearts..! Warm , welcoming and forgiving people! Even now they were concerned for Madhumati, people with Big hearts and even bigger smiles.. :) Madhumati surely is the correct MIL for Payal, this duo would Rock! Equally smart and nice! :D

While NK and Lavanya stole the award for the couple of the Update! Dude, both of them are imperfectly perfect for each other. One shudh Hindi and the other one complete English!
I've read hindi till 8th, passed in 10th, but NK's hindi surely made me laugh, come one itni shudh aur saaf lafz ka prayog humnein bhi nahi kiya hoga! :D

so even i wonder Aakash at 19 as horny..?? The two and two would never add! :P with the way Payal bulley's NK, he surely is mighty afraid of her, poor him! ;)

though even i was waiting for the Suhaag raat, but can't deny if something hurtful is gonna come up in her Nanaji's will, then Khushi would rather prefer a years old acquintance, a months old Friend, her Badi - amma's son than a days old husband!

Since we are already at them, :

The day started on with the shade of sunshine..
A promise to make you mine..
A few mischivous glances..
A few missed chances..
A kiss and hug by door.
Seeing Payal though jealousy came in for sure..
While Khushi and Aakash basked in the feeling of sadness..
Payal and Arnav shared their fondness..
Then came in time for the first cook..
Neither from taste nor from Look..
Did 'Gobi' made its presence appear..
Arnav's hate suddenly had to disappear..
They ate together, feeding the other..
'Kheer' though made him remember his mother..
What followed was a web of desire..
Seeting aflame a deep fire..
As the night came falling down..
Khushi's face marred with a deep frown..
Words he said, didn't leave her mind.
Arnav's intentions didn't seem too kind!
Then came a surprise for all..
It was just their night talks afterall..
I couldn't stop reeling in his care..
Such love and affection display, truely is rare..
The newly wed couple had taken the back seat..
Two old friends back on their feet..
Discussing their life..
Gone was the husband and his wife..
What remained where just Arnav and Khushi..
Together , as they are meant to be :)

P.S: i can't really help the lenght of the comment! You write 9800 words, response mein itna to banta hai!

P.P.S : Nanaji's will's clause.. Whatever is it is going to be difficult on Khushi.. It happens when its people and relations she care for are at stake..! Guessing would take forver! ;)

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vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Twigs!

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Naughty naighty Zee, Ramanchi ki tune! He couldn't wait for tonight, because he wanted them to TALK? 😲

I loved the Payal-Arnav scenes in this update, each and every one of them. The saali-jijali teasing and then Arnav asking her to get Khushi's hair out of the braid.. all of it! Awesome 😃

So he is falling in love with Khushi ? Is he really. I haven't forgotten "payback", Zee. And whats with the property stuff? I'm kinda worried...

Enjoy your holiday Zee. Miss you!

Edited by vgedin - 11 years ago