ASYA FF 'REVENGE' - Chapter 19, Page 128 24/09/2014 - Page 5

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Next Chapter is dedicated to 'Linsie'

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Chapter 3

The FACE OFF - ASAD's POV

"Where the hell is she?????", Asad thought to himself!!! Imran had texted him Zoya's address and he was waiting near her building. It was 2am in the night and she was nowhere to be seen. Asad was getting irritated. His thoughts were wandering only in direction of Nikhat's last statement. "Was she really with someone else??? Has she actually moved on?? And then he snapped at himself, "Don't go into that territory. They were never meant to be together and that's how it's going to be".


While he waited for Zoya to arrive his thoughts began to ponder on how exactly his and Zoya's life had been connected. He had set out to take his revenge on her at the age of 15. He had chosen elder daughter of Gaffur Siddique cos she was 11 at that time and her younger sister was 9. He wanted to get over with the plan soon but he had to wait almost 10 more years till he could actually find her alone.


She was out on a holiday to New York on her own. The spoilt brat that she was she had splurged her father's money on her trip. She was staying at "The Renaissance". He also made his bookings in the same. He kept on following her and he waited till the time she will notice him and approach him. His good looks have been real useful that time. She had noticed him at the pool side party. He gave her the looks of "being interested" and boy she took that bait.


Zoya approached him blatantly and started flirting with him. He was not comfortable in the beginning cos the girl seem very simple and innocent. She was nowhere close to being the sophisticated lot from Upper Class Muslim community of Bhopal. She was so serene, innocent and fascinating that he was attracted to her the moment she came near him.


The plan was always to Mr. Siddiqui's daughter fall for him and take what was rightfully his from Siddiqui. But nature's plan was different from his. He had fallen hard for the damned woman. First Zoya who had introduced herself as Zeenat' to him had seemed quite taken with him. At that time, he had not been aware that it was her mother's name and thought that she was also playing some kind of game. Why in the hell would she lie about her name?


But he had played along since he had a hidden agenda too. He still remembered their first date, when he had invited her to the dinner. He had expected her to arrive wearing something really sexy but instead she had appeared wearing a simple floral full sleeves top and dark blue denims which had made her look so relax and eternal.


Again, he had gotten a doubt about what he was doing about duping this woman. However, 10 years of planning could not be forgotten so quickly and he had gone on with the plan anyway. Even if it had been hard as hell to keep the image he had had of her for all those years, he had kept his fixation about the woman he had in mind instead of the woman in front of him.


"Zeenat," he'd greeted her giving her an intense look which had made her blush. When he had taken her small hand in his, he had felt a slight tremor through his body and had felt hers too. Damn! That attraction was going to be his doom. Asad Ahmed Khan was not going to be weak as his father had been. There was not one woman on this earth who would make him bend to her will like his father Rashid Ahmed Khan, had done with his mother, Dilshad Ahmed Khan.

So he had stilled his beating heart. He would treat Miss Siddiqui as a business deal from now on. Playing his role as the seducer to the perfection without any qualms about what he was doing. He reminded himself he would never fall in love of course since he did not believe in love in the first place.
Dinner had been quiet then; nobody had talked much each one deep in their own thoughts wondering what to do next. When finally the food had arrived, Asad had made his decision and started playing his role to the perfection.

AAK - So, what made you come here Zeenat?

She looked at him at his question, her hand stopped midway from putting a slice of Pizza into her mouth. "I am here on holidays. I have just completed one year of studies and thought I needed some time to relax."

AAK - "Aaah a gift from Daddy, I reckon?"

Not quite answering him, she had smiled and asked him the same question.

AAK - "Oh I am here on business trip." It was the truth.

Zoya - "Oh really? I would never have guessed."

AAK - "But Miss Siddique, we others have to work to make our way in this world. Not everybody is lucky to be having holidays offered to them." He had intended to offend her to gauge her reaction but all she had done was shrug as if it did not matter what he thought of her.

"Are you judging me, Mr. Khan?" she had replied right back to him looking slightly miffed. "So what if this particular trip is a holiday? How do you know that I did not have ten business trips before that?"

At a certain level, he had been glad that she had not offered some explanations to him about why her father had offered her the trip. "True," he acknowledged and warned himself that he had to keep his prejudices to himself. It would complicate his plan if he rattled Miss Siddique further and probably making her feel antagonized.

She was eating her pizza furiously not looking up to him and pretending to concentrate on relishing the Pizza. It had been too cute.

AAK - "I have made you angry now. I should apologize. I just hate it when some people have everything offered to them on a platter."

Zoya - "Oh I know what you mean, Asad. But try keeping your biased ideas to yourself and not make an opinion about me until you get to know me. If you want to get to know me that is."

AAK - "Oh I do." He was quick to remedy what he had done. "How long are you going to be here anyway?"

Zoya - "Another two weeks. College resumes then so I thought I d take advantage of much of free time I got."

AAK - "Right. What are you studying?"

Zoya - "Fashion."

"Ouch!" Asad exclaimed.

Zoya - "What? Don't judge me again now please."

AAK - "No I am definitely not. Fashion is cool. You don't strike me as artistic, that's all."

Zoya - "Oh? And what do I strike you as Asad?" she asked shyly.

AAK - "Someone shy and introvert."

At that, Zoya smiled. It was a wonderful smile, a genuine one. "You would be so surprised," she told him enigmatically.

AAK - "Really? Can't wait then. So what's the plan for tomorrow?"

Zoya - "Oh the hotel had organized an outing and I was going with them for sightseeing."

AAK - "I have a better idea. What about coming with me?

"Where?" Zoya asked already excited at the idea. It was such a simple game to play with Miss Spoilt.

AAK - "Now that is going to be a surprise. You love them I assume?"

Zoya clapped her hands enthusiastically and her big brown eyes show with excitement. "Love them."

After their rendezvous set for tomorrow, Asad bade her goodnight and dropped her to her room like a perfect gentleman. It was too early to make a move. Tomorrow maybe.

He was jerked back to the present with the sound of a Honk from the car he was waiting for last 3 Hrs. The Audi entered the building premises. Zoya got out of the vehicle wearing a slim fit jeans and her trademark full sleeves T-shirt. She looked happy, relaxed and carefree. "No doubt, she has some one in her life... To love her and to make love to her.." The thought only made his stomach churn. "What could have been his life today if their pasts were not intertwined together... What if their parents had not..."

He left the thought to that point and he marched forward to stand exactly in front of her just before she got in the lift.

"Hello, Ms. Siddiqui... Or I should call you Ms. Farooqui??", he said in voice as cold as ice.

Her expressions were priceless!!!! Shock could not and would not describe what he saw in her brown eyes staring back at him. She seem to lose track of time, place and words as she was still trying to figure out if Asad was reality of her WILD imagination!!!

He wanted to control but he couldn't. He chuckled. He was loving the way he made a fool out of her by the surprise. She loved surprises!!! He could have put up all his money on this one... This was not LOVED one for sure.

AAK - "So, Ms. Farooqui it is then!!! I guess you didn't like my lil surprise!!!".

His voice jolted her back to reality. She closed her eyes and prayed a lil.. Just in case that was her NIGHT MARE!!! But when she opened her eyes he was still standing in front of her.

"Mr. Khan". That was all she could manage at first with a small voice.

AAK - "It used to be Asad 3 years ago.." He mocked and watched her face turn stone in micro seconds.

Zoya - "with changing time things change and people change. As Zoya is Ms. Farooqui now to you"

Asad was standing so close to Zoya after ages.. Precisely 3 years. He observed the epic beauty in front of him. She didn't change much. Same face, same smile and same those KILLER dimples... Those chocolate brown eyes!!! Just the feeling in them has changed... From love to indifference and hatred. Only difference he could see in her appearance was her hair. They were longer that what he had last seen. Her complexion was beautiful and he was sure she was not wearing any makeup. He was scrutinising her deliberately to make her feel uncomfortable. But then he was not meeting the old Zoya. Instead of feeling uncomfortable she arched back her head defying him. In turn giving him better view of her slender neck. It was his turn to feel uncomfortable.

"So what brings you here Mr. Khan?? On my door steps??" Zoya asked in a thick voice.

"U seem to be in hurry!!!", Asad tried to sound as normal as possible. He knew his body has already given up on him but he didn't want Zoya to know that.

"Last time I checked it was you who was in hurry and you did what you did. So let's not waste any more time. Tell me why are you here?"

She was so calm and cold... It disturbed him to the core. He wanted to shake her and ask her to be normal with him. But he couldn't...

"From where are you returning Zoya?", he cursed himself for asking such a question. He was supposed to hate her not care for her or feel concerned for her.

"That is not any more your business. Is it now?? So get back to here now and tell me why the hell are you here Ms. Asad Ahmed Khan" Zoya was getting angry.

AAK - "Well I have a bad news for you Zoya."

Zoya - "What it is??"

AAK - Smiling... "Your father, The great Mr. Gaffur Sidiqui... is DEAD!!!!"


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Edited by dhatingnach - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww😃
loved the update❤️
u're a great writer!!!!
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Originally posted by: maha2012

wowww😃

loved the update❤️
u're a great writer!!!!

Thanks a ton MAHA!!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome contiue soon please i want to know Zoya reaction 😊
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I hope she says to him
I already knew that
Anything else u wanna tell me

Asad is so mean and plz bring in someone that will make asad jealous


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I love where this is going! Great start. Continue sooonnn
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OMG it was just amazing. luved it to bits❤️
update soon, can't wait read how zoya reacts to her father's death

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