plzzz tell me wot ju think!!! :D - Page 3

thanks!

Roz roz tum khawabon main aaya na karo,
Humari neend humse churaaya na karo,
Dil toh tumhe de chuke hain jaan bhi de deinge,
Yeh ehsaas roz roz dilaaya na karo...

i like this one da most wot do u fink???

Maine jisse chaha woh ho tum,
Maine jisse paaya woh ho tum,
Shayed meri kismat hi kharab hai,
Isliye mujhse jo door hai woh ho tum...

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Tum kyun aate ho har khwab main,
Kyun dil churaate ho?
Kyun nazar aate ho har jagah,
Kyun itna sataate ho?

Humari pyaar main hai itni taaqat,
ke door rehke bhi paas hai,
Dekho yeh mehfil apnon se bari hui hai,
phir bhi app sab se khaas hain

awwww thanks! 😳

Pyaar Mat Karna

Kabhi kisi se pyaar mat karna,
Agar kiya to inkaar mat karna,
Kabhi kisi ka intezaar mat karna,
Agar kiya to aitbaar mat karna,
Kabhi kisi ka dil mat tor dena,
Agar tor diya to zaroor jor dena,
Kabhi kisi ke liye ansu mat bahaana,
Agar bahaaye to ussko bhi na rulaana,
Kabhi kisi ko apna na banaana,
Agar banaaya to usska chein mat churaana,
Kabhi kisi ko yaad mat karna,
Agar kiya to koi faryaad mat karna,
Kabhi kisi ko apna dil mat dena,
Agar diya to wapas mat lena,

Kisi ke pyaar main zyaada josh main mat aana,

Agar aaye to wapas hosh main mat aana,
Kabhi kisi se inkaar mat karna,
Agar kiya to phir pyaar mat karna...

that's the longest sher ive ever written...i hope its ok! 😳

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

awwww thanks! 😳

Pyaar Mat Karna

Kabhi kisi se pyaar mat karna,
Agar kiya to inkaar mat karna,
Kabhi kisi ka intezaar mat karna,
Agar kiya to aitbaar mat karna,
Kabhi kisi ka dil mat tor dena,
Agar tor diya to zaroor jor dena,
Kabhi kisi ke liye ansu mat bahaana,
Agar bahaaye to ussko bhi na rulaana,
Kabhi kisi ko apna na banaana,
Agar banaaya to usska chein mat churaana,
Kabhi kisi ko yaad mat karna,
Agar kiya to koi faryaad mat karna,
Kabhi kisi ko apna dil mat dena,
Agar diya to wapas mat lena,

Kisi ke pyaar main zyaada josh main mat aana,

Agar aaye to wapas hosh main mat aana,
Kabhi kisi se inkaar mat karna,
Agar kiya to phir pyaar mat karna...

that's the longest sher ive ever written...i hope its ok! 😳

awwwwwwwwwww hinna sweety thats a really nice poem u have there how long did it take u trust me ur getting better an better 😳 keep up the gud work 😛

awwwww thank u so much u made my day! 😃
it took me about 15 mins lol trust i have nothing better to do 😆 😆