plzzz tell me wot ju think!!! :D

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HeavenlyBliss

@heavenlybliss

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Posted: 19 years ago

Kaash main un hawaaon main hoti...

Kaash main un fizaaon main hoti...

Aasmaan pe hoti ya zameen pe hoti...

Unnka chehra dekhke uthti...

Un ka chehra dekh kar soti...

Kaash main unnki nigaahon main hoti...

Kaash main unn ki baahon main hoti!

i wrote this about someone but i dunno if its gd plz tell me wot u think of it and if i shud show it 2 him or not???😳

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Muhmmad Usman

@Lovers Ka Love

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Posted: 19 years ago

its Up To YOu to Show it Or Not but this is good 😉

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Tearðrops

@Tearðrops

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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey that sounds great. You can post more here or maybe just look around other topics for inspiration 😊 Sher O Shayri

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anum

@syreen_786

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Posted: 19 years ago

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooow......omg...omg...dats reli gud man...i fink ya shud show it 2 him 4 deffo.....Gud luck 🤗

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HeavenlyBliss

@heavenlybliss

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Posted: 19 years ago

thanks everyone 😊
heres another one too:

Tujhe yaad kar kar ke roti hoon,
Tere ishq main na jaagti hoon na soti hoon...
dekh tere ishq ne mujhe kitna paagal kardiya
har waqt tere hi khayalo main hoti hoon 😳

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Malika

@missmalika

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Posted: 19 years ago

👏
great
I love them
good job
keep it up 😉

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Rabba-Ve-Delena

@Rabba-Ve-Delena

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+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

👏
Omg the link opened finally!!!😆

I read them before...Hinaa they great..you got sum talent girl!! Keep it up!👏
I say show him..you gotta a week to decide hun!
Great Work👏

Luv ya..

Ouma

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jyoti

@j y o t i

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Posted: 19 years ago

wow thats such a good poem!!! wow i think u should show it...ur really creative yo, i could never write like that!! 😊

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HeavenlyBliss

@heavenlybliss

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+ 71

Posted: 19 years ago

awwww u all so sweeeet thanks so much for inspiring me now im gonna write more! 😳

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Naina

@Naina_Manam

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Posted: 19 years ago

#10

Wow, Hinzu, so you have become a poet too?!! Cool, guess I missed a lot of things.

Anyways, the shers are really good!

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plzzz tell me wot ju think!!! :D

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