-{ Peace in loneliness }- A 200 words TaaRey OneShot

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| Peace in loneliness |


I walk down the streets of the way to the beach.

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Its time for the sun to set ; with which I hope my tears and griefs also set.

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"I'm sorry Taani but, I don't know how the difference in our ways of careers can be ignored. I love you, trust me, I've loved you and I always will. We'll be together forever once we achieve what we want." : She remembered

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Rey , I trust you . I love you. I hope what you are saying comes true. : She thought

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I walk on the sand. The certain softness of the sand soothes me. Atleast, it isn't the way of pointed rocks on which I have to walk everyday.

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I sit down and let the waves touch my feet and take away all the thoughts I have right now.

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The skin of my face is harsh and rough. The tears have scorched . A fresh set of tears descend and I hope this is the concluding one.

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My mind is blank , no thoughts ... simple peace.

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When the last tear also dries up, I give a smile . A smile for the peace I have in my loneliness. Atleast, I have something in my loneliness.

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Another month. Another year.

Another smile. Another tear.

Another winter and another

Summer too. But there can never

Be another you.

- Credit : @SimplyLove

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Sometimes being alone and staring at nothing is enogh for washing off all griefs.

- Akshita (Me)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum OS .. ! 👏 👍🏼
luvd it alot .. ! ❤️
Edited by aditipandey.adi - 12 years ago
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res/unres
awesome...
loved it to the core...
thanx 4 the PM...
at least u remembered to PM me... wow...
Edited by QTPie99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow its amazing yaar 🤗
I really loved it
keep written more 😉

Thanks for pm ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loneliness is my favorite...but i hardly get so i know its value...
os was brilliant...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dat was really deep
i loved it
u described d pain amazingly well
hats off to u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was really great Akki !!
So beautiful and Serene !!
Amazingly done work!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maine 150 likha tune 200 🤣
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awesome OS..!!
I understand Lonliness -_-

Keep writing :*

Love

Mahaan Jaan.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Truly awesome!
gr8 work sis!
Keep on writing.. i cud connect to it..
AMAZING!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its just Too awesome dear 😳
Keep writin 😃
Love: Ale_TaaRey ❤️

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