Running Away - Aarya FF DISCONTINUED-NOTE pg34 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: roserosey

update was nice mini but as u said i was completely😳...could not help myself but to think that is yash really met aarthi or imagined himself that he met aarthi or he became mad in her love that he cant get over her death os something like that😕😕

but i felt it was something interesting😳😳
superb job mini and hoping that u will clear my confusions soon😃



thanks dear and yeah i know a lot of people were too😆


i know right!.. 😕


yep hopefully i will 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253

awesome

thanx a lot fr d pm




thankyou !😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nan0102

awesome update,,a little confusing at first,,but still will be waiting for the next update,,



thanks dear! yes it is .. coming soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: billieberry

Nice update mini👏👏
yea i got confused at the ending but it will be cleared soon😳
beautifully written, love it⭐️⭐️
continue soon nd thanx for d pm😊



thanks!.. yeah


thanks for the comment!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the comments all! i will upload soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Running Away - Aarya FF




Yes I know that part was pretty confusing but hopefully you will all get it soon!.. and the flash back scene was when they were 14 so they were quite young teens. They are 23 now btw..



Part 3







Yes, I am still in this scene. I am still crying my eyes out even though my conscious says this is surreal, it really looked true. I looked at her face, it was pale, I knew she was still alive. She is just in a coma according to the doctor. I felt cold and scared because Aarti would be awaken. I shook her but I forgot, 'a magical portal scene' No one can see me, hear me or feel me. Like I don't exist at all.

I was still holding her hand but there was one thing that made my heart skip a beat, her hand move, I quickly stood up and went out of the room and into the corridor. I shouted happily

''Doctor! Nurses! I , I think Aarti is awake!''

I froze and I remembered again, I am not really here. I was about to go back inside the room when Aarti's brother cam running out screaming the same thing I did. The lucky thing is that he got heard by all the doctors.

Later, her room was filled with doctors trying to check on Aarti. I found a corner in the room which was empty, I sat there.

''Excuse me''

said Aarti's mum, Shoba as she tried to get through the crowd full of doctors.

''We will see for now Mrs Dubey, please keep calm for now''

While everyone talked, Aarti made another movement. She opened her eyes and freaked out!

''Yash!''

She was awake! Everyone was surprised even surprised with what she had said. He parents both engaged looks and just forgot about it in the spilt second, she finally had woken up! The doctors checked on her wounds and her health to make sure she was alright.

''Beta! your alive!''
''What, who are you!''

Everyone gasped! even the doctor was shocked!.. He went to check her once again.

''Don't you remember us Aarti Beta, I am your bauji!.. and this is you Ma''
''You are my parents? ''

She pointed at the two who were looking at her helplessly. Shoba just burst into tears and faced the door. The doctor examined her by asking Aarti some questions.

''What's your name?''
''uhh.. Aarti Dubey is my name''
''good! you remember your name at least, do you know how old you are?''
''I am 23 years old''
''what was the day you were born?''
'' 30th october''
''do you have any siblings? do you have a brother or a sister?''
''Yes I do, I have an older brother Pratiek that is 2 years older than me''
''erm.. do you remember what your parents are called?''
''Shoba is my ma's name and Satyendra is my Bauji's name, why are you asking me this?''
''what do you work as?''
''I work as a graphic designer for the S industries, please tell me why I am getting asked this?''

After the continuous questions from the doctor. The doctor turned to her family.

''Okay, Aarti who is this??''
He pointed to her mum
''No''
replied Aarti
''What about him?''
He pointed at her dad
''Nope''
''And what about him?''
he lastly pointed at her brother

''No, I don't know these people, who are they? why are they crying and staring at me?''
''They are your family Aarti''

Aarti looked even more shocked!

''What! How come I didn't recognise them? Now I cant figure out their faces! why is that?''
''Mr and Mrs Dubey. it seems as though your daughter has visual or retrograde amnesia, she remembers everything, names and places but she just can not remember how anyone looks like. This is a very rare case, it seems temporary, you can help her by introducing yourselves and new things!''
''Thank you very much doctor! said Shoba

Shoba excused herself shortly after what the doctor had said. She was crying her heart out. While Mr Dubey and Pratiek introduced themselves to Aarti.

''So I have amnesia?'' said Aarti confusingly
''I am afraid so my darling''
''Don't worry sis! we will help you get straight back to how it used to be''
''Thanks bhaiya, I hope so myself!''
''Aarti, when you woke up you said something, somebody's name?''

said her brother eagerly wanting to know!

''Really? what did I even say? sorry I must have forgotten, maybe an aftershock or something like that''
''you sure did say something, someone's name I know it, Yash!''

I smiled at her brothers imitation of Aarti. I was really glad that he asked her.

''Yash.. hmm I don't think I know a Yash''

She answered with both brows down thinking hardly Mr Dubey looked at each other and gave each other the ' lets not tell her, it might just confuse her even more' look.

''Just forget it Aarti''

I gave out a little cry because for all the people she had forgot, she had forgotten me. I couldn't bare to look anymore. Tears fell slowly down my face.

''I cant believe you don't remember me Aarti, you you promised that you would never forget me!''

I ran towards the drawer to get the bullet necklace, I tried to pick it up but I had no luck, my hand went straight through it, I was no existent here. My heart was shattered, I felt do broken down. I walked away from the room wanting to get out of this portal hole!

I was back to the scene of shops. I saw a shadow and I started to shout at it

''What do you want from me? what are you torturing me with these scenes!? I have had enough of this! get me out of here now!''

I couldn't control my emotions, I couldn't control myself at all. You feel hurt when a girl you have been madly in love with for the past 9 years, the one that you promised that you wouldn't forget one another has forgotten you. You feel week and shattered.

''That scene cannot be true! it cant be! Answer me !!!''

A voice came from the shadow

''Came yourself child, the scenes I showed you were real''
''NO! I don't believe you!''
''this is why I am here to tell you, to warn you, I know it hurts to know this but please, this is the truth. As soon as you wake up, remember this dream and you will then know what to do next. Don't let her pass, Aarti is a keeper Yash Schindia''

The shadow faded away



[[DREAM ENDS]]




I'm awake. I looked at the clock, it was 7am already.


[Third Persons POV]


Yash went to the bathroom and saw himself face to face with the mirror. He looked terrible. His eyes were all red and puffy, even his whole face was red, he guessed that he was crying in his sleep.. He went back to his room and he laid on his bed not to sleep but to think. He thought hard and long, could this be true and mean something? He then remembered the stores he passed by in his dream.

''The mall!''

He got up from the bed. He went back into the bathroom and washed his face so he wasn't looking red. He got ready in 12 minutes with his work files so he could pop into work too as our Yash is a work a holic! and walked out the door..


Edited by Yaarti.mini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
oh i liked the update😳😳 u had done a great job dear👏👏👏👏
what i understood becoz of yashs deep love for aarthi he went through aarthis condition in his dreamor should i say he had a nightmare that all this happened to aarthi😕😉...

aarthi suffering from visual retrograde amnesia😭😭...or its just yashs dream

wanting to know what s the next step of yash😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
nice update,,love it,,so is aarti suffering from amnesia..which why she cannot remember yash😛will be waiting for the next update..and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
so its yash dream
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a great update Dear...Sorry it took me so long to comment 😉
Can't wait for more 😊

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