Mangalsuthra Nuptial chain MG SS Part14 pg108 - Page 40

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Mangalsuthra Nuptial chain Part 10

Maan:I enquired about you a lot.From that the information I got is you are a decent man though you are in the glamour industry.But I am hearing rumours about you and Geet...
RK:So you came here to know the truth about my relationship with your ex-wife Geet.Right?
Maan was shocked.
RK:I enquired about Geet...her back ground.From that I came to know that you were her husband.You ditched her because...
M:You must have heard that I ditched her because of her immoral nature.That is not true.
RK:I knew that it was not true.As far as I know Geet she can never be cheap.She is a wonderful woman.
Maan was relieved.
M:RK,do you love Geet as per the rumours?
RK:Why do you bother about that?If we are dating or not it should hardly matter to you.
M:It matters to me as I am concerned about Geet's safety.
RK smirked:If you were that concerned about that why did you divorce her?
Maan became upset.
M:Everyone blamed Geet for the unfortunate happenings in our family.Others made her believe that according to astrology if she continues to be my wife i will die.So she left me.
RK was shocked:Are you not ashamed to ditch her because of some superstitious beliefs?
M:I never left her.Still I love her.But she won't come to me.But I don't want her life to be wasted because of me.I want her to move on.If you love her sincerely...
RK:Yes I love Geet.I want to marry her.
Maan became happy.
M:Then marry her soon RK.
RK:But Geet does'nt know anything about my feelings.But during my film's success party I will propose to her.
Maan became emotional:I support you RK.Always make her happy.She never got any happiness from me.
RK:I will never let her cry.I am not narrow minded.I don't care about her horoscope.
M:One more thing RK.I am telling this because I don't want any problem in your married life in future.Though we were married we never consummated our marriage.Geet is still pure.
RK was shocked.
After a few silent seconds...
M:I am going.
RK:But Maan Singh Khurana...you should attend my success party on friday.
M:But...
RK:No excuse.
M:Ok,I will come.


Party...
Maan entered the hotel with tension as he was going to have direct confrontation with Geet after a long time.

Music started...

Geet saw him with a shock.They shared a painful eye lock.She turned off her face painfully.

RK welcomed Maan happily.
He went near Geet.
RK:Shall we dance?


Geet looked at Maan.

Too pyar hain kisee aur kaa
Tujhe chahata koyee aur hain
Too pyar hain kisee aur kaa
Tujhe chahata koyee aur hain


RK:Geet...
G:But RK...
Without waiting for her reply he held her hand and started dancing.
Maan felt pain seeing Geet with RK.
Geet looked at Maan painfully.
For a moment Maan and Geet imagined dancing with each other.



Maan thought:I lost my right to love you.Now you are somebody else's love.Still I love you.
Maan looked at Geet.He could see only himself with Geet instead of RK.Even Geet could see nly Maan in RK's place.

Too pasand hain kisee aur kee
Too pasand hain kisee aur kee
Tujhe mangata koyee aur hain

Too pyar hain kisee aur kaa
Tujhe chahata koyee aur hain





Without looking at Maan Geet continued dancing with RK supressing her pain.

Kaun apna hai kya begana hai
Kya hakikat hai kya fasana hain
Kaun apna hai kya begana hai
Kya hakikat hai kya fasana hain




Maan thought:Geet...Who is your own?What is the truth?

Yeh jamane me kisne jana hain
Yeh jamane me kisne jana hain
Too najar me hain kisee aur kee
Tujhe dekhata koyee aur hain
Too najar me hain kisee aur kee
Tujhe dekhata koyee aur hain

Too pasand hain kisee aur kee
Tujhe mangata koyee aur hain
Too pyar hain kisee aur kaa
Tujhe chahata koyee aur hain




Maan said in his mind:You are in somebody else's sight.But you are seen by somebody else...me...

Pyar me aksar aisa hota hain
Koyee hasata hai koyee rota hain
Pyar me aksar aisa hota hain
Koyee hasata hai koyee rota hain
Koyee pata hain koyee khota hain
Koyee pata hain koyee khota hain
Too jan hain kisee aur kee
Tujhe janata koyee aur hain
Too jan hain kisee aur kee
Tujhe janata koyee aur hain

Too pasand hain kisee aur kee
Tujhe mangata koyee aur hain
Too pyar hain kisee aur kaa
Tujhe chahata koyee aur hain(
Dil Hai Ke Manta Nahin).

Geet controlled her emotions.

Maan said in his mind:This often happens in love.When some one smiles some one cries.When someone gains someone loses.And that loser is me.


RK:Geet...this party is not only for celebration,but also for confessing my love...my love for you.I love you Geet.
Geet was shocked.

He held her hand:Will you marry me?
It was a breath taking moment for Maan.
Geet held his hand:RK...


Maan thought painfully and happily:Geet accepted RK.Finally she decided to move on.
Geet removed his hand from her.
G:Sorry RK.
She held her nuptial chain.
G:My husband tied this around my neck.I don't want this to be replaced by someone else's nuptial chain.
RK and Maan were shocked.
RK:Geet!
Geet's eyes got welled up with tears.Maan left the hall as he did'nt have the strength to see or hear more.
RK:Geet...you just lived only a few days with your ex-husband.You did'nt even becme his wife physically.Still this much of love for him?
Geet was shocked as RK has realized that she is a virgin.
She thought:How did RK came to know all this?
G:Please try to understand me RK.We don't need to live for years with our partner to fall in love.We don't need to have physical relationship to fall in love.Sometimes love is so innocent that it happens in one moment.That happened in my life.It was an arranged marriage.I never dated him before marriage.But when he tied nuptial chain around my neck I felt my inside that I belong only to him till my last breath.I can never be anyone else's lady.That moment I realized how much I love him.That is the power of nuptial chain.It can make women fall in love with their husband.
Geet was very emotional.
RK:It's ok Geet.I understand.
G:One more truth i want to tell you.My husband is...
RK:Maan Singh Khurana who is also present at the party.Right?
Geet was shocked.
RK:I know Geet.Trust me.He wants me to be with you.
Geet was shocked.
G:He thinks that i will be happy if I marry someone else.But he is wrong.
RK felt sad.
RK:You love him that much?
G:Yes,more than my life.
RK tried to smile:Ok...


They turned back only to find that Maan was not there.They were shocked.
G:Maan!
Geet walked out looking for Maan.
He saw Maan standing outside.Geet went near him.
G:Maan!
Maan turned back and looked at her.
G:Maan,you know me very well.Right?Then why did you try to unite me with RK?
Geet and Maan looked at each other painfully.
M:Geet,you should not waste your life.You should get settled.
M:I am not wasting my life Maan.Living with the nuptial chain given by the person I love is not a waste.
Maan's heart pained.He lost his control and cupped her face in his hands.


He said in his mind:Come back Geet.
Geet said in her mind:I can never do anything which can harm your life.

They both shared a painful eye lock.

Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n :'( zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa

They came back to senses and moved away from each other.Their tears rolled down their cheeks. They both parted their ways painfully.

Ho o.. abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
(Agneepath).


The next day the news flashed that Geet rejected RK's proposal.RK got angry and switched off the TV.
RK:This media is disgusting.
He broke all his show pieces.

Rishab,Niharika and Sameera were shocked to hear this news.
Sam:I thought Geet would accept his proposaland live happily with RK as he is superb rich.But why did she reject him?
Rishab:She must have got a richer boy friend.
Sam:Ya...I think you are right.
Sameera went to her room.
Nihar:Bhai,I think Geet is still in love with Maan.
R:Oh Sweety...don't think Geet is that innocent to be a one man woman through out.Afterall she is n the film industry.In film industry people change their lovers like they change clothes.
N:But I don't think Geet will change.Because...I don't know why...that's what I feel.
R:Very soon you will realize that what you think about her is wrong.
Niharika was confused.

After 2 weeks...

Maan woke up from the bed.
M:Today is Geet's birthday...I will wish her.
Maan took his mobile and started dialing Geet's number.Suddenly he erased the number.
M:No,I should not.Hearing my voice itself she will become upset.I should'nt spoil her mood.


Maan became upset:What a fate!I can't even hear my Geet's voice...


Geet's birthday...Geet dressed up for the party.She tried to keep her necklace properly.Suddenly she saw Maan putting her necklace properly.Then he put her shawl properly.She could'nt believe her eyes.She was numb.


G:Maan!
M:Surprised?You did'nt invite me for your birthday.So you thought I won't come?
G:No Maan...nothing like that.You know that I wanted you to be there with me at the party.But what to do?The circumstance makes me ignore you.
Geet was upset.


M:Geet...chill...today is your birthday and I don't want you to cry today because of me.So smile.
Geet smiled.Maan smiled back.
Suddenly Maan disappeared.Geet became upset.
G:I knew that Maan can't come here.Still why did my inner mind long for him?Why did I see this beautiful dream?

Geet's birthday celebration was a very pivate affair.Only her family members were present.
Mohindar,Gautami and Padmini blessed her.
Mo:Look...this birthday will bring out new positive changes in your life.


Geet smiled simply.
Gau:We feel very happy to see you smile.



Pad:God bless my little girl.
Mo:Let us cut the cake now.
Geet:But Dev has'nt reached yet.
Gau:That is what I also thought.Why is Dev late?
Finally Dev came.
Gau:Dev beta,you came.Geet was waiting for you.
Geet:I doubted whether you had to go urgently somewhere and not attend the party.
Dev was dull.
Moh:Good that you came at least now.Now let us cut cake.
Geet blew out the candles and cut the cake.She fed everyone.Others also fed her back.She noticed Dev's dull face.
G:Dev...
D:Geet,I want to tell you something.Very serious.
G:Tell.
D:But...you should have the strength to listen to what I am going to say now.
Geet got tensed:Tell Dev.
D:You want to know why I was late?
G:Ya...
D:On the way...I...I... Maan...Maan...he is...


Geet got tense again:Tell Dev...what happened to Maan?He is ok.Right?
Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
maan is amazing
he truly loves geet that he wants her to marry and be happy
RK is equally as awesome that he didn't have anything against maaneet
waiting to see what happens next
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet rejected RK's proposal(m happy)
now dev kaunsi bad news lekar aaya hai???
hope so maan is all fine
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Posted: 11 years ago
as accepted geet rejected rk😊
poor maaneet, can't they untie!!!!!!!
now what do dev have to say about maan????
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Posted: 11 years ago
the power of love❤️
oh no wat happened to maan?
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god geet ne saaf saaf kehdiya rk ko. feeling sad for maneet yehdono kab ek honge

ab yeh rishab kya naya plan banaya hai maan ke khilaaf geet ko maan se doorr karne keliye😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update dear
sorry could not read other part earlier was busy with exams
kill that mama pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
So emotional scenes btwn Maneet.. hope Maan is ok.. nothing bad has happened with him...
Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan was so nice
wat bad news
waiting

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