Surbhi, finally am here!!
Apologies for losing track on your works..and not commenting.
I read the whole...thing now.
Cupboards, an apt name.
Chapter one was beautiful, this is the SwaRon I love, intense and deep. I loved the way u described it, the memories of fight, and way Swayum calls all stuff crap and removes it, and the twist of 2nd cupboard. Then Sharon takes it home.
Chapter 2: Brilliant, I would say, the way her pov is potrayed, her inner conscience, Swayum in her room and his words, and pain she goes through, wow.
The fight in heart and mind, reminds me of my SS, so am inspired to continue it. Thank u.
Its great you are continuing this.
Madhura.
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