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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

the first kiss *sigh* :D Other things, her insecurities and his fear can be dealt with later. For now I'm reveling in the beauty of their first kiss

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saradagandu

@saradagandu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Again a cliff changer omg ,can be patient anymore to know what's bothering arnav ,any ways lovely update ,their first kiss was awesomely written

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Breathtakingly beautiful update...awesome...will be waiting to read more.

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sher_lock

@sher_lock

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Wonderful n new thread ...yay

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Fantastic update filled with different emotions
Was beautifully written
Loved how impatient Arnav was to get back home to khushi
The way he led her out of the lamps reminded me of Arshis scene in the show
As for their kiss ...finally it happened & it was magical
But Dan Dan Dan Dan what happened he was so happy till that call
What could it be to make him avoid khushi ??????
Hoping he won't leave her after her finally being able to let go of her past
Oh no story ending in few updates surely gonna miss it
Hoping this story ends on a happy note n Arnav doesn't let whatever that phone call was come between him n his love
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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@guggu

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

wow !!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 wat a chapter guggu.. i dont know wat it is workin so wel.. you
takin break n writin or i just dont know.. the chapter was perfect..
you know there is not an unnecessary word or an action.. just too
perfect. pls never give up on writin choti.. you r just beatin
yourself n i'm very happy seeing that 😊😃 :-*

The update was so heartbreakin at places.. !! d way khushi natural for a
person wit wat she has seen in her life.. filled with pity. she for a
moment dint question wat made him so but pushed herself into wat she
somewhere always believed.. that it was her fault that ppl let her go.
They way she felt alone all over again !! very wel said..

I could just feel for her so honestly n thats because of you.. the writin itself
created that atmosphere of melancholy with al d symbolism in d
background...👍🏼

and our man !! khushi is a part of him already ! the way he is feelin
her pain.. as if he lived her life with her all those years.. oh who
'd nt want a man to love u the way he does !! In all that chaos he
realizes he did get her closure. its lik he senses her each heartbeat.
my heart was racin along with his when he was reachin her flat.. d way
he pleaded her to be fine.. his restlessness.. ufff superb writin choti
< 3

now i dont know how i'l wait til next update 🤢😔

we have our Sneha as Arnav s savior! fingers crossed...

ur Cheapo sis 😃

Edited by ak_maggi - 12 years ago