||ArIya SS: Deedar|| update pg-63 *NEW* 24MAY PM Late - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaha sab dhamki queen hoti jaa rhi h hehehe n nice prolg plz continue soon n do pm me ok warna mein bhi dhamki dungi sys ;D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue , update soon plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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meghu awesome prologue ab update kab duge????????????
jaldi ker plsss 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice plz plz continue waiting for next update love ariya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic prologue dr...
It seems vry interesting..!!!
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all sorry for waiting you such a long time and thanx for liking my concept.
special thanx to

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-1
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One man is coming to goa with his younger cousin brother to attend the weeding of his friend. He was looking very dasahing in his black three piece suit and his younger broth wears white three piece suit. both are looking very dashing and all girls are drolling over him.

Younger brother: kya baat hain arjun bhai aaj to sari ladkiyaan aape mar rahi hain.

Arjun: shree tum bhi kuch kam nahi lag rahe tumhe bhi sari ladkiyan tumhe bhi khoob mar rahi hain or line bhi marne ki koshish kar rahi hain.

Shree: but bhai sari ladkiyan aapko hi dekhe jaa rahi hain or yeh kitni sunder hain kisi ek ko pasand karlo or usse shaadi karke kakima (arjun mom) ki pareshani (problem) bhi dur kardo or haan mere liye raasta clear kardo taaki jisse meri bhi jaldi shaadi ho jaye.

Arjun: kya baat hain shree tumhe badi jaldi hain shaadi karne ki?

Shree: vo kya hain na mere sare friends ki shaadi ho gaye hain so socha main bhi kar loon or fir uske saath romance bhi kar payunga varna aap main kisi ladki ke saath flirt karta hoon to vo aapko dekhke mujhe chod deti hain isliye.

Arjunp; ohh yeh baat hain.

Shree: haan abh bataye na aap kabh shaadi karenge?

Arjun: jab mujhe meri pasand ki ladki mil jaye ghi.

Shree: or aapko kaise ladki chahiye?

Arjun: aisi ladki jo bahut innocent cute ho, jiski aakon main bus pyaar jhalak ta rahe or uski muskaan ek pari jaise uski awaz main meethas(sweetness) ho voh jahan bhi jaye bus pyaar ki baarish kare aise ladki chahiye.

Shree: bhai aisa lag raha hain jaise aap koi poem likh rahe ho. Aisi ladki kahan mile ghi?

Arjun: mile ghi shree zaroor mile ghi.

They both were walking and engrossed in talking but accidently Arjun collieded with one girl and she was going to faal but arjun hold her in his strong arms and both eyes meet and both stairing each other and arjun was lost in her deep black eyes and on the other shree sees this and was smiling and he cough little and arjun come otu of his dream land and the girl

Girl: thank you

Arjun was again lost after hearing her sweet voice and girl goes from there but arjun keep stairing her back.

Shree sees this and feels that his bro faals for that girl so he come to arjun and says

Shree: bhai bahut sunder thi na ladki

Arjun: haannn... in his lost state

Shree: bhai aap usse pasand karne lage hain na?

Arjun: haannn.. what kya keh rahe ho tum? (come out his dream land)

Shree: bhai main sabh janta hoon aapko vo pasand aa gaye hain na or aap usse pyaar bhi karne lage hain na?

Arjun: aisa kuch nahi hain shree.

Shree: agar aisa hain to theek hain maine socha aap usse pyaar karne lage hain but koi ni agar aapko vo pasand nahi to main usse apni girlfriend bana leta hoon.

Arjun: ruko shree. haan I like her and want to know her name and also want to maary her.

Shree: finally the great ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE ko koi to ladki pasand aaye

Arjun: ho gaya tera chal meri help kar usse patane main

Shree: badle main mujhe kya milega?

Arjun: tujhe or liza ko 2-3 days ki holiday

Shree: sacchi...

Arjun: haan sacchi

Shree: chalo abh shuru karte hain misson patao white suit

Arjun: white suit??

Shree: haan usne whit color ka suit pehna hain na so white suit.

Arjun: okzz

Okzz now my fingers are crying and I know this part is boring but next part is full on dhama;. So if you wan next part so please comment otherwise I will stop this.

Thank you.


Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb start dr...!!!!
Wow Arjun n Shree r bros... Loved their convo n bonding...!!!
Awww Arjun fal for that girl at first sight...!!!
Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.
Thanks for pm dr.
Continue soon.
Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super now waiting for all t drama to begin
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
LOL 😆😆😆
Nice ...👏👏👏
I loved Arjun-Shree Masti ... hey... Sam bhi ayega na?
Sorry dear ... mai dusri stories jo bahut agey badh gayi hain... wo padhne ka time bilkul nahi nikal payi... wo mai fursat se padhungi ...
Ye story aaj hi shuru ki... its fun ... 👍🏼
Continue soon 😊

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