Kr OS: RHTDM (completed)

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hello people...
first of all this OS i am dedicating to bday boy pradeep (pradeep_maurya)...itz a small gift from me to him...pradeep, mere bhai here you go...🥳

wait wait...maine title ke barein mein tho batayi hi nahi...aap sab ne tho guess kar liya hoga ab tak RHTDM ka matlab...yes i am naming this os a movie name "Rehna hai tere dil mein" because uss film ki ek scene ne muje ye os likhne par majbur kia😆...hope i would be able to express the way i wanted..letz see...


Mumbai, 9 pm...

It is a end of the city...only few buildings are situated here...the roads will always be scary during night here...it'z a last Bus stop, last bus of the day for this place...on top of that it'z raining heavily today...as soon as bus starts to leave from the bus stop after couple of secs stopping there, a girl picks up her speed to reach the bus before it leaves...but the heavy rain doesn't allow her voice to reach the bus and eventually she miss it..she runs to main road and stand there looking at the image of bus going away from her...panting heavily...she was already drenched in rain fully...

she couldn't understand what to do...she is standing middle of the empty road in a heavy rain...after few seconds she goes to that bus stop hoping to get at least any cab..after a minute she see a boy of her age running near the bus stop and he crosses the road and goes to a telephone booth situated there...she recognizes the face, because he was none other than Mr Reyansh Singhania...Singhania Group of Industries ke ek lauta waaris and the young talented Dancer who owns his own Dance Academy with few more talented dancers like him...

reyansh goes to telephone booth and dial a number..soon the person on the other end recivies the call...

rey : hello swayam..rey here..

rey : dont ask me dude...my car's Tyre got punctured and mera cell ka battery kathm and i dont have charger as usual..on top of that Academy ke land line dead tho i am stuck up here yar..

rey : haan please...come soon dude..itz raining heavily i will be in this telephone booth only ...yup bye...

after disconnecting the call he just turns and look at the bus stop..he sees a girl sitting there..he could not see her face clearly as it was raining heavily...it was dark outside..only the telephone booth and bus stop was visible to any one...as there were no street lights in this area...thankfully the bus stop was decent with fully lit lights and telephone booth also had small bulb..as rey looking at the bus stop, he sees the girl comes out of the bus stop, in the middle of the road and stretches her hands and throws her head back...as if absorbing the rain and feeling it totally...rey smiles looking at the childish and filmy behavior of the girl...

slowly the girl starts to play with the rain and they she throws the scarf around her neck into the bus stop where her belongings were kept...and starts dancing slowly...rey seeing the initial slow moves of the girl becomes curious and starts observing her carefully going near the glass wall of the booth...as time passes the girls steps kept on changing and she dances as if there is no tomorrow...her dance moves consisted random dance styles..every move of her was so smooth and perfect that rey mesmerizes by her dance...and stands there putting his palms on glass walls...she kept on dancing for almost 15 minutes...unaware of the eyes watching her...rey on the other hand was totally lost in her dance...

but the sweet moment breaks when his friend swayam comes there...

swayam : rey what are you doing kab se awaaz de raha hoon...

rey on the other hand still watching the girl...but unfortunately the girl too stops dancing...and goes to bus stop where her bag was kept...

"shit man...why did she stops dancing?" says rey disappointed...and turns to the person standing next to him who was irritating and disturbing since few seconds...as soon as he turns, he realizes it'z swayam, his friend...till that time he didn't listen whatever swayam was saying and didn;t even look at him..

"swayam...when did you come?? and why did you stopped the violin..??it was so good background music yaar" says rey dreamily smiling like an idiot...

swayam : what?? violin?? yahan par...?? (shaking rey) rey hosh mein aa...yahan bich sadak pe tumhare lie violin kaun bajhayega...? tum teek tho ho??

rey comes to his senses completely..(clearing his voice, in a serious tone) chale? then he remembers the girl suddenly and looks at the girl (by that time swayam goes to car and sits inside)...the girl was wiping her face with her scarf...she then starts wiping her hands and shoulder and then her hair...rey once again lost in the scene...he couldn't listen to his friend calling him in the car...

rey murmers "beautiful..."..but soon swayam comes back and shakes him again...

"rey seriously tell me...you okay??" asks worried swayam...

rey looking here and there nervously says "swayam are you sure?"

swayam shots back "about what??"

"yahi ke yahan koi violin nahi baja raha??its so melodious music yaar" says ray dreamily again..

"what ?? again violin??(lil irritated) dude have you lost it??yahan itni sunsaan jagah pe, aise baarish mein bait kar kaun idiot violin play karega...??yahan koi music nahi baj rahi hai chal tu mere sath...itz too late" says swayam dragging rey towards the car...

rey stops near the car and says..."swayam tu car start kar, i will just come...1 minute mein aaya"saying this he starts running towards the bus stop...once he reaches the bus stop, he looks at the girl who was standing facing her back towards him...he slowly goes and stands behind her and says "suniye...itz too late..do you need a lift?"... he doesn't get any response so he once again asks "excuse me...do you need any help...??" but again he doesn;t get any response..then he slowly puts his hand on her shoulder and says "excuse me?"...then the girl slowly turns towards rey, but next thing gives him the biggest shock...the girl smiles showing her 2 long tooth from each side and her eyes were open wide in a scary way...rey jumps back 2 steps..and says "sorry...(going backwards) i am sorry...i didn;t see anything...sorry" saying this rey runs from there hurriedly and sits in a car in back seat...

the drive back to home was silent...rey was frightened and swayam understood something wrong so he asks him many times but rey refuses to tell as he was still shaken with what he saw...next day in the academy all his friends force rey to tell exactly what's bothering him...then rey narrates the whole thing...everyone burst out laughing...they say vampires no more exists so its just his imagination..no one believes him..in turn they make fun of him...

1 week has passed now since that incident...still rey is in that one moment only...the dance, the moves and then the scary face...it was really difficult for him to forget whatever he saw that night...every moment it'z like the incident comes infront of him...all his friends thought let him give some space, he will be alright because they didn't believe in a single thing rey said about the incident...

it was monday, swayam comes to rey..."rey aaj wo ladki aane wali hai for audition...tum rahoge na academy mein hi??she really wants to meet you..."

rey "yar aap sab logo ne usse dekha hai and uske dance ko bhi..and you all are very impressed then hire her na?? i will meet her once she joins the academy...why it's so important for her to meet me and take my decision as a final ?"

swayam "i dont know...she is telling if you say okay then only she will join the academy...otherwise "no".."

"huh...okay tell me something about her before i go and meet her.." says rey totally frustrated...

swayam starts "here you go rey...she is really something yar...uske dance mein ek ajeeb si spark hai...she says she never attended any classes for dance...she learnt seeing videos from internet but her dance is equals to our level dude...her moves are so perfect that no one can say she is a non trained dancer.."

"bas bas...impressed..fir tho milna hi padega usse...call me once she comes today...and i will meet her in rehearsal hall...let me see her dance" says rey remembering the girl in rain whose dance had also impressed him the same way..

after 2 hrs, rey has been called to rehearsal hall to meet the girl...rey goes to rehearsal hall..the girl was already there...she was standing there facing her back..rey was still at the door...sharon tells the girl that rey is here so the girl turns towards rey..but rey gets the most horrible shock of his life...she was the same girl rey had met that night in bus stop...

swayam : "rey meet kriya..kriya ghai..and kriya he is reyansh"

but for rey, the world has stopped for a moment..he couldn;t hear what swayam was telling...his eyes were on the image coming near to him with a smile...when the girl was 3 steps to reach rey, he stops her

rey :(shouts out of shock) stop...(now all his friends comes to him seeing his shout) (after few seconds of pause, rey immediately puts his left hand on his left side neck) dekho maine kuch...kuch nahi dekha hai ...dont bite me please...uss din jo hua tha bhul jao...i didn;t see anything...main tumhare raste mein nahi aunga...please..."

after few long secs of silence, the girl burst out laughing...all stands there confused...rey was also confused now..but the girl clutches her stomach and laugh for long time...then she looks at all the eyes staring at her and asking for explanation, she controls her laugh and clearing her throat "aap ko(rey) sach mein laga ki i am a vampire??" ..now everyone got the scene and starts smiling looking at the confused and horrified rey...

the girl : "reyansh that was a prank...i am a human being for god sake.." saying she again starts to laugh...

rey finds her laugh magical this time and he totally forgets his fear or her prank and starts smiling looking at her laugh...once again rey finds that pull towards the girl which he felt that day...seeing rey lost in that girl, everyone goes from there leaving rey and the girl...after few more minutes of laughing kriya controls her laugh when she observes rey still standing there without laughing..

the girl : "i am so sorry for that night...wo kya hai na i loved that vampire tooth set so i bought it few years back.. so using it i keep on scaring people like that..i am so sorry...(holding her both ears, making puppy face) sorry..."

rey :"that's okay(smiles)...so...that's why you wanted to meet me?"

kriya :"(grinning) haan...(laughs again) wo kya hai na itna scared expression mere pranks pe muje pehli bar mila tha tho i just wanted to check on you ki...ki..aap teek tho ho.? then again she starts laughing" this time rey to joins her...after some time of laughing they shake their hands finally..introducing properly to each other...kriya was a chatter box...she kept on talking ...rey didn;t pay attention to what she was telling as he was totally lost in her facial expressions and her cuteness...after long time when kriya;s talking didn;t stops. rey taps on kriya's shoulder..

kriya : ji???

rey : tumhe...you know..violin sunai de rahi hai??

kriya : violin?? yahan?? nahi tho...

rey murmurs"beta rey...tu tho gaya kaam se" ..(looking at kriya) "you continue please"..next moment kriya was again talking and telling her 'n' number of pranks and after effects...rey sits there looking at her dreamily...smiling like an idiot...



finally done...hope you guys like it...😊

pradeep "WISH YOU MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE...MAY GOD BLESS YOU WITH LOTS OF HAPPINESS"😊...sorry tumhare offline jaane se pehle post nahi kar payi..😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres...

completed...😊
Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome...
superb
mindblowing..👏

kriya's prank on rey was too good...🤣

vampire...!!!😆

loved it...dear...🤗

thnks for the pm...
Edited by sumimita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumimita

res...

complete hone ke baad unres karungi...


3 hrs later when i will be completely free again...
preparing lunch...

but dear ye tho batado karab tho nahi hai na ye concept...??and jitni mein likh payi abhi tak??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start ...waiting for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely os
cute one
loved it
Edited by anjali22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omggg
pehle toh title dekh khe i was like...OH wowww
one of my fav movie

and the scene you chose was the bestest scene of that film...
Still remember dia dancing-rain-white churidaar-kids and that most amazing music...haaayeee i was fida on that
.
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And somewhat you described and picturised the same thing here...
AMAZING OS

the way you started...girl standing and then rey ki entry...i mean everything was perfect...
The girl already knew here who "The Reyaansh Singhania" is...

Yeh lo...rey toh gaya baara ke bhaav me...
Already lattoo over kria...
Hehe...
I knew he will go and try to talk with her
and he did... 😃

lol vampire?seriously?rey sach me pagal hogaya hai!🤣

and then kria coming in his academy and all those sweet moments
it was beautiful

loved the whole os
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Res
Unres
Just loved the OS
Amazinngg...
Rey toh pagal ho gya dance dekhkr hee...updaatee soon
And pls do pm me... Pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanku so much i really didn't expected this os but u did it
it is the best gift ever i have recived
os on kriyansh that the best think in the world
i loved u r surprise so so much
😊
its too special for me i love it core of my heart
[>D<]
I M the speechless today mere pass word nahi hai describing my feeling
coming to the update
its superb update loved it most
kriya ka rain dance
rey ka voilen ka sound sunai dena and dreaming about kriya and her dance
but hahahahahahahahahahaha
i loughed to much reading rey reaction bechara kitna darr gaya hahahaha
vampire aaya bhago hahahahhaha
koi bechare ki baat par bharosha nhi kar raha tha hahahhahahaha
and kriya ko dekh ka reaction i was laughing at manic its so funnyest think ever
mujhe mat maro mera khoon mat choso hahahaha
he liking kriya
and uski nonstop bate ahhh he to loved so much
mujhe iska secon part chahiye plz
2nd part de do plz
ones again thanku so much from my bottom of heart
love u lot for the special os
thanku 😊
Edited by pradeep_maurya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jaha tak update kiya hai
its amazing

itni jaldi complete ho gaya
bt its superb
kriya ka prank ne rey ke expression...
oh god !!its so funny 🤣🤣🤣🤣

loved it
i wish aage bhi hota😭😭😭
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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